OS: Irony of Time (epilogue on Pg. 7)

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saba

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

i love it please continue

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Shuveniya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

This was deeply touching and a beautiful dedication to a very kind hearted and sweet person. It was literally magical and touching.An excellent job done with brilliance 😳

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udaymanyata07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

👏thanks...beautifull...👏

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Pokka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Love it, Love it, Love, Pl update soon.👏

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ArshiRaiguptha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

aww.. That really touched my heart!

Loved It..

The Star was Khushi.. right??

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emah04

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

An amazing Story well written

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: poojasidd123
brilliant!! though i wud really love to see a 2nd part, i think u hav given it a very beautiful n amazing ending wid arnav seeing the star who was khushi besides his mom n wonderin who that was. also loved how he related the star to some wonderful person on earth, something which was thought by a person who never used to believe in love n beauty earlier.

thank you so much for your kind words Pooja .. i am a hater of sad endings but this time i just could think of anything else. I am happy that you found it worth reading.

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srilu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

amazing one

waiting for 2 part

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cupcake-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Beautiful!! Almost have tears in my eyes... :(

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: esmeralda111
Beautiful... He stops for a second and wonders where that bright star beside her mother was all these days. As bright & beautiful as it looked, Arnav knew, that must have been one gem of a person on earth...Khushi has turned into a star...waiting for Arnav...the message is ..do it 2day watever u want 2 do...kya pata...kal ho na ho...though its really sad but u ve written it so well...I dnt thnk it can be dragged cz its in itself z a master piece...keep it up...

I am really touched by your comment. You have got the message right .. "kal ho na ho" .. that is exactly the thought that brought me to write this story .. i personally am a "live in the moment" person and i preach for that ..