OS: Irony of Time (epilogue on Pg. 7)

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Priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Loved it.loved how u conveyd that message.it truely is a tribute to mitrasakthi

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: AstuteASR
What a beautiful story. I was dreading something like this but when I read it, my heart sank.the most dreaded mommentwas very nicely implied..I mean I knew it happened yet didnt want to accept it. I believe thats the beauty of the story!!
Amazing!!

Thanks for your nice words. I can never pen down the most dreadful in pure words ... That's my limitation as a writer.

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Caroline_arhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Awannn, soo sweeet<3

Thankyou for the PM<3

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Preeti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Omoraboti
I have been deeply affected by the demise of Mitrashakti. I never knew her and the only time I came across her was when she wrote a letter to Gul in IF. I felt really depressed yesterday and this thought came to my mind as an after effect, i believe.

As bright & beautiful as it looked, Arnav knew, that must have been one gem of a person on earth.

Its beautiful dear Omoraboti..really glad u did this..
@bold: Same here..RIP Mitrashakti

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Sharmila

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

So nice...touching OS! I felt like crying when i read the last line of OS! She'll always be as mitrasakthi in our hearts for eternity.I hope she's happy seeing us from heaven!

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snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

That was heartbreaking but beautifully written

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

beautiful but heart-wrenching: maybe they'll be together in a better place... now she can always watch over him from the heavens and he can converse with her at night

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Pooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

brilliant!! though i wud really love to see a 2nd part, i think u hav given it a very beautiful n amazing ending wid arnav seeing the star who was khushi besides his mom n wonderin who that was. also loved how he related the star to some wonderful person on earth, something which was thought by a person who never used to believe in love n beauty earlier.

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Thank you do much guys for liking the story ... I was just feeling sad

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esmeralda111

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Beautiful... He stops for a second and wonders where that bright star beside her mother was all these days. As bright & beautiful as it looked, Arnav knew, that must have been one gem of a person on earth...Khushi has turned into a star...waiting for Arnav...the message is ..do it 2day watever u want 2 do...kya pata...kal ho na ho...though its really sad but u ve written it so well...I dnt thnk it can be dragged cz its in itself z a master piece...keep it up...