OS: Irony of Time (epilogue on Pg. 7) - Page 3

Loved it.loved how u conveyd that message.it truely is a tribute to mitrasakthi

Originally posted by: AstuteASR

What a beautiful story. I was dreading something like this but when I read it, my heart sank.the most dreaded mommentwas very nicely implied..I mean I knew it happened yet didnt want to accept it. I believe thats the beauty of the story!!

Amazing!!

Thanks for your nice words. I can never pen down the most dreadful in pure words ... That's my limitation as a writer.

Awannn, soo sweeet<3

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

I have been deeply affected by the demise of Mitrashakti. I never knew her and the only time I came across her was when she wrote a letter to Gul in IF. I felt really depressed yesterday and this thought came to my mind as an after effect, i believe.

As bright & beautiful as it looked, Arnav knew, that must have been one gem of a person on earth.

Its beautiful dear Omoraboti..really glad u did this..
@bold: Same here..RIP Mitrashakti

So nice...touching OS! I felt like crying when i read the last line of OS! She'll always be as mitrasakthi in our hearts for eternity.I hope she's happy seeing us from heaven!

That was heartbreaking but beautifully written

beautiful but heart-wrenching: maybe they'll be together in a better place... now she can always watch over him from the heavens and he can converse with her at night

brilliant!! though i wud really love to see a 2nd part, i think u hav given it a very beautiful n amazing ending wid arnav seeing the star who was khushi besides his mom n wonderin who that was. also loved how he related the star to some wonderful person on earth, something which was thought by a person who never used to believe in love n beauty earlier.

Thank you do much guys for liking the story ... I was just feeling sad

Beautiful... He stops for a second and wonders where that bright star beside her mother was all these days. As bright & beautiful as it looked, Arnav knew, that must have been one gem of a person on earth...Khushi has turned into a star...waiting for Arnav...the message is ..do it 2day watever u want 2 do...kya pata...kal ho na ho...though its really sad but u ve written it so well...I dnt thnk it can be dragged cz its in itself z a master piece...keep it up...