OS: Irony of Time (epilogue on Pg. 7)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

i already posted a comment but it wasnt posted due to some problem..

ok, i go again..

it was beautiful.. i loved it.. it was what mithra wanted to to see by her eyes..

but..

insha allah, may her soul rest in peace..

it needs a huge heart to think about someone..

thanks for the wonderful OS..

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Cetronia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Awww... Your end was soo touching...

Very well written...I do not know mitrashakthi but surely she was a gem too on this earth...

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Samiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

loved it dear... very beautifully written😊

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rima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

Sorry Rima. I cannot unite them since I turned Khushi into Anu in this story.. May be when i feel better I will write an alternative end to this story.

May she rest in eternal peace.

No please don't do that. It was her dearest wish to see Khushi and Arnav united. Anything in Anu's memory would be nice if this wish is fulfilled. Please.

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Chandana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

WONDERFULL...

DAMN...THAT BRIGHT STAR WAS KHUSHI😔

VERY WELL WRITTEN..

VERY TOUCHY...

ALTHROUGH ITS NOT A HAPPY ENDING BUT ITS AWESOME...

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ASYA12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

U made mi cry
that's sooo touching..
snif snif..

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

it was sad but beautifully written

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blore94-chennai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

just beautiful...

couldn't ask for more...

loved the way u porated arnav... the way he is changed... and believing in things..

fabolous writig...

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AnnieARS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

What a beautiful story. I was dreading something like this but when I read it, my heart sank. the most dreaded momment was very nicely implied..I mean I knew it happened yet didnt want to accept it. I believe thats the beauty of the story!!

Amazing!!

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: rima

No please don't do that. It was her dearest wish to see Khushi and Arnav united. Anything in Anu's memory would be nice if this wish is fulfilled. Please.

I know Rima. I promise I will make a small update once I feel better and get in the mood .. For Anu only. :)