Hey! for the first time guys...i attempted to write an FF and i am really scared about how it will turn out...i already wrote the first chapter but not very satisfied with it..can you guys read the first chapter and reccomend if i should continue? thanks guys! :)
CHAPTER 1 , part 1 -- A haunted fairy tale broken to pieces.
Her smile stretched its might to her pools of almond syrup gloating and flowing without any barriers around its baby shaped concentric circles..as her wild wavy brunette spendrils of thin threads intermingles within each other as they are singing and swaying to the music of the ferocious howl of the wind..Piya suddenly felt the change of Nature's moods reflect the colour and texture of the weather and whispered through her rose petal mouth to Pri and Alvira'" what has happened to the picture of nature suddenly now , guys? The rain is piercing within the figments of my skin..and the wind has never been as destructive as it was for as long as I remember'is it just me or are the winds howling someone's pain..someone who will always remain invisible..someone whose tears and pain is destined to never be healed , the wind feels like the weapon of a destructive reaper'" '..
" I think it's finally time we send you to Agra , honey..how can you always talk so poetic and still bear to stand within this weather..let's go to that shaded area now!" ,claimed a fierce , rough mouth which was half covered by Alvira's shiny shield velvet black curtain of hair , as she rolls her expressive noir eyes .. her swaying wet hair aginast her olive skinned face ...almost as if it was her shield to fight the injuries received from the world.As Alvira and Pri rushed to the safe , patchy area of safety and shelter and greenery ...Piya's disposition did not move a single step..instead she listened to something she could hear the moon fuming about...suddenly those almond browns beheld a hallucination..or so she believed it to be so..a hallucination of a blaze of fire...a blaze of scarlet and hay streaks burning through the skin of a black coated individual who sheltered his thorny fingers within his thick coat in jealous resolution...and yet the fire did not disappear through the harsh drops of rain nor did it die through the destructive howl of Nature..the fire kept blazing lividly from this enigma's coat as if nothing in this world would be able to kill the fire inhaling through his body made of steel. Piya's face lost its colour and her porcelain hands began to rub her eyes in horror to see if it was not a faint mirage..but the mirage gave her more vision ...the mirage progressed in displaying this slave of the dark slowly treading his way throughout the path of her building..his bronze , solid , inhuman hands..as if his skin was stitched of wrought iron touched the faint whiff of blooming lilies and geraniums and tulips blooming out their scented petals, and Piya's heart stopped its beat the minute she beheld his single touch to those flowers making the entire garden burn and wither within the flare of fire emanated through his body..and yet his eyes were not a tale of destruction..his unnerving ice , frigid and dead frigid blue hues emanated a tale of a naive , fragile beauty who still smiles within his frigid lakes but never makes his blue concentric circles of stale ,stagnant liquid smile through her memory embraced and printed within those forbidden swirls of ice ...and the knight disappears into the stoned , cobbled path of a murky road...as Piya forgets where does the murky road of her building lead to..or if there is any murky road at all...as her dysfunctional body slowly collapses in the harsh , ruthless rain with a faint image of Pri and Alvira running to her , screaming out her name flashes through her faint eyes...
INDEX :
CHAPTER 1 , part 1: A HAUNTED FAIRY TALE BROKEN TO PIECES ...PAGE 1
OFFICIAL CHARACTER SKETCHES OF THE STORY ... PAGE 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2951162?pn=6
CHAPTER 1 , part 2 : THE FORBIDDEN FRUIT...PAGE 12: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56472329�
CHAPTER 2 , PART 1 :A FATHER'S SHADOW WITHIN HER UNDYING LOVE PROSPERED...PAGE 18: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2951162?pn=18
CHAPTER 2 , PART 2 : MURDEROUS INTENTIONS ...PAGE 23:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2951162?pn=23
CHAPTER 3 : CAUGHT IN A LIVING DREAM...PAGE 28 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2951162?pn=28
CHAPTER 4, PART 1 : WHEN FEAR BELLOWS AT DARK HUMOUR...PAGE 34 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/57151704�
CHAPTER 4 , PART 2 : WHEN LIGHT OVER POWERS DARKNESS AND CYNICISM MEETS PRIDE...PAGE 38 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/57674417�
CHAPTER 5 : AS THE FIREFLY DESIGNS HER DOOM , THE KNIGHT HANGS MIDST A SYMPHONY...PAGE 43 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58500537�
CHAPTER 6 : UNSETTLED PRIDE CROSSES A GENUINELY HAPPY SMILE OF DARK HUMOUR...PAGE 48 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58955129�
CHAPTER 7 : THE ROAD TO THE END'S BEGINNING...PAGE 54 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/62356108�
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