AbhIya FF : It's the end's beginning. (PAGE 60 ). - Page 25

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Posted: 13 years ago
in 1 wrd...it ws FANTASTIC 👏👏
feelin bad for abhay... he luvs mary...
sumtyms he seems like ruthless person here...
thk u 4 such a lng upd🤗...
dis chappy hs touched my hrt⭐️
Edited by luckdiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant superb update
omg poor Abhay he really loves mary and he lost her
i am feeling bad for Abhay
Abhay is not cruel ruthless devil all the time
wow thanks for a long update
also loved father daughter bond.
thanks for the pm and sorry for late reply.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luckdiya

in 1 wrd...it ws FANTASTIC 👏👏
feelin bad for abhay... he luvs mary...
sumtyms he seems like ruthless person here...
thk u 4 such a lng upd🤗...
dis chappy hs touched my hrt⭐️


yah Abhay loves Mary and he is not really a monster...i am happy you liked it...thank you so much 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29

Brilliant superb update
omg poor Abhay he really loves mary and he lost her
i am feeling bad for Abhay
Abhay is not cruel ruthless devil all the time
wow thanks for a long update
also loved father daughter bond.
thanks for the pm and sorry for late reply.

yeah Abhay has a lot of pain inside him and he is not exactly a monster..he has a lot to him and thank so much for liking it..i am glad 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome part yar...
seriously the dairy part was soo guddd
abhays mom is nice...
so piya feel 4 him somethg...
what happened to abhay in past and mary
why is she connected to mary???
ghost part was superb...
loved the way u show abhays pain...
waiting 4 next part
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

awsome part yar...
seriously the dairy part was soo guddd
abhays mom is nice...
so piya feel 4 him somethg...
what happened to abhay in past and mary
why is she connected to mary???
ghost part was superb...
loved the way u show abhays pain...
waiting 4 next part
cont soon


thank you so much bella and i am glad you liked it..piya is connected to mary as she is the person who released and compelled mary's soul to come back through opening her diary and opening up ancient hidden secrets..thats why mary came back ...hope you like the next part 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

NOTICE!!!!!!! THE FIRST PART OF THE FOURTH CHAPTER IS UPDATED AS THIS PART..SECOND PART WILL BE UPDATED LATER ON. THANK YOU FOR YOUR CORPORATION.



When Fear bellows at Dark Humor

Hallway of Hillridge high

It was time for Piya to walk into the superficial and everyday common shades of reality where her pink bubble , Alivira's dark shield , and Pri's naivet and fear huddled together to the seemingly sunny campus of Hillrigde High ...her body seemed to conquer what the day brought towards her..but her mind was stuck and entwined within that ghastly night, where Mary and Abhay's tale somehow connected to her and called her name out continuously ..what was it about that beautiful , fabled princess and that aura of an enigma that pulled her as if her soul hung onto their tale's neck? Why did it feel that she was leaving a part of her when she left that dark ivory castle of a beast who seemed to have a heart that she wanted to hold onto, and yet she had no idea why? Why did her soul feel as if it's leaving from where it belongs.. as Mrignayana bid farewell to her.Her frowned curly tides of noir waves collided against a persona that met Pri's , Alvi's and her countenance as long as she could remember..the similar wave of an oppressor who gained the sheer pleasure of sadism through oppressing everyone he could..Brandon Mascharenhas...one could never really understand him , a letch of the highest order of course , but a sentimental nerve that never let anybody see its disguise..Piya's face suddenly hit reality and her face twisted its features in disgust..as his cynic smile combined his eerie words , "Already estatic to see me? 'Baby'? " , Piya pushed him away with her fragile hands as Pri's face bloated in anger..Piya could never understand this about Pri, though they have known each other ever since they could spell the word "apple" ...her calm , afraid , reserved and scared little lamb countenance went out of the window when it came to Brandon...you would see a new woman who was enraged and aggressive and would fume in substantial power , as if she was a fighter who could kill and conquer all her life..Brandon would create another dimension to what Pri was altogether..everyone who knew both of them , felt it but never understood it . Pri's mouth fumed in swears as she walked towards the oppressor..who would actually seem pretty attractive regardless of his shaggy light brown hair diving under his grey hued irises that always covered up its mane, through a backward black cap...his body would seem manly and stout however , if those ill fitted , lose shirts and baggy cargo pants with ragged cuts would not disguise his form...a dark , regal man who adored the forms and decorations of cruelty , for the reason he could never look beautiful. "Stay away from Piya , you hound!" ..Pri's big buggy eyes suddenly had an expression of fire held between her irises, "Ahhh! The attack of the ugly!!" , retorted back the rough , masculine mouth with pseudo sarcasm , "What are you going to do , ugly muck? Eat me up as your dinner?" ...Pri had long forgotten what the superficial idiocy of the school's crowd commented on her weight or figure...there comes a point where too much humiliation leads to ignorance or the complete devoid of any emotion and that's happened to Pri , "At least if I would eat you up , the world would have one less asshole to deal with." Piya had enough of their feuds that started probably from the beginning of time. A new year. A new way to deal with things, and a new year of attitude and confrontation, but Pri's and Brandon's carnal attacks never faded away. "Pri! Enough...when dogs bark, one should not pay any attention " ...Pri walked away as Piya's hand tugged her arm forward , but her eyes never left the art of suppression and inferiority hiding behind a mask of dark sarcasm ..."Brandon Mascharenhas!!!" , her thoughts mumbled to her conscience very often.."When will I ever understand you?!?!"

[TO BE CONTINUED!.]
Edited by austenrox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum koyel!!so piya feels the pain of abhay and mary..and who is brendon??why is piya so fierce wid him..?
Edited by ..tora.tangled. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update koyel👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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another magnificient update koyel!!! 👏
it was short bt impactful..⭐️

so um..pia havng d feel of leavng sumthng bck n d castle!!! Nw m waitng to see abhay's thots...

Donno y though brandon n abhay r poles apart bt i feel at sum point they r same!! Lyk There's a faint similarty btw thm!! Mayb m cmpletly wrng!!Pi..may nt lyk hm bt it's clear she cnt avoid hm either...

Nw eagerly looking forward to abhiya confrontation... 😳
Plz Cntinue soon...
And reading ur work is always a pleasure..😳
thanx a lot for the pm..do tak..cre.. 😊

-indu
Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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