AbhIya FF : It's the end's beginning. (PAGE 60 ). - Page 35

Lovely update koyel. Pri ko abhay bacha lega na. I hate that brandon. Piya suffered through a lot of pain. Both abhiya reminds each other of some one. Wow piya loves dark men, me too. I loved the way u described abhay's pain. Plz continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Lovely update koyel. Pri ko abhay bacha lega na. I hate that brandon. Piya suffered through a lot of pain. Both abhiya reminds each other of some one. Wow piya loves dark men, me too. I loved the way u described abhay's pain. Plz continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Comments updated on pg 46...😳

Originally posted by: _Sonu_

Brilliant update Koel...👏👏

u know I've already read it twice...

The title was really nice..

The first part was really well written...😳

There comes a notion within the small, flowing tides of time where a creature can only cry out his misery , his loss and the manipulation around his life to an extent that it seems to be a peculiar , crude joke made by nature , fate and all the weapons of the cosmos..there is a point up to which one can mourn and break down for feeling the shatter of his heart , his soul and his body. As one fine day..these tears , these mornings and devastations seize and become numb to a point where your heart , soul and body seize to function and become engines of drawing out blood and devastation.

Abhay's condition was described perfectly..

And Pia is hopelessly being attracted to Abhay...She can see the pain in Abhay's eyes..and I hope she is able to change Abhay from the monster he has become to the old 18 yrs boy..I know that wont be soon .. and for now it really seems impossible ..

"Leave it , Alvi..it's not like I am not used to it."..Piya grew paler as she realized what she had said..

and OMG...Kishor used to hit Pia😭..she has been thru a lot in life..and she still has hopes for him and loves him..That shows how pure hearted she is..

atleast Pia has Alvi and Pri in her life.. I liked the way Alvi gave that lecture to Pia showing her concern for her friend..😊

and coming to the last part the way Pri made Brandon shut his mouth was amazing..

"Because more than any of us , it is you who is the most afraid and insecure out of all of us..you are standing within tons of people but you are still alone...making someone miserable just wso that you do not feel miserable anymore. Avash is alone , but not lonely. You are not alone , but you are lonely every minute of your life."

and I hope Abhay comes fast to Pri's rescue..It is only Abhay who can control Brandon ..and this would make Pia even more attracted to attracted to Abhay as she would get to see the better side of him..😳

Continue soon Koel

and thanks 4 d pm...🤗

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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beautiful update koyel 👏
from the beginning till the very end what was evident was, every single soul/person is deeply wounded! Wether its pia,her father,abhay,brandon,pri,alvira or someone else! What brandon did was absolutely wrong but still i couldnt hate him,coz deep down he was badly wounded too,mayb with no one else there to sothe him. And tht is why i really felt bad for him!
Pia on the otherhand was going through pain since her childhood and tht is the reason mayb she can somehow see through him or as you said was destined to die for him. So this was bound to happen!
The part of abhay was again explained beautifuly! ⭐️
And i hope pri gets saved!
Once again Wonderful piece of work! Reading it was a pleasure! 😊
and thanks a lot for the pm..😊
p.s. Extremly sorry for commenting so late.. :((

Originally posted by: luckdiya

awesome updt koyel🤗

When are u updating Koel..?😳

Originally posted by: _Sonu_

When are u updating Koel..?😳

Unsettled pride crosses a genuinely happy smile of Dark humour.

As her life , her heart beat , her senses stood in front of a steeping cliff almost falling on the precipice of its sediments in horrific silence... as the silent tear of her shirt was ripped by his masculine bronze fists ,that ripped every hope , faith , humanity and emotion she ever had in life.all she felt was nothing..she felt like a vacuumed space that will never feel , create or hope a single thing from this second on..tears didn't spill but danced in sadistic joy around her shocked irises ..as her entire being was being mentally torn apart from limb to limb..but then a flash of those mysterious , complicated eyes that ingrained multiple hues of brown with an amber shine had stood in front of her as if he was her winter coat midst a cold , bitter night.Those steely eyes with no expression , no emotion even in such a situation stood in front of her and twisted Brandon's tight limbed fist. Alvira , meanwhile beat the daylights out of Jack and Rubin who were manhandling her from attacking Brandon.Piya rushed to the narrow corridor with her chest bumping out of her body in worry as she heard Alvira's threats..and her curls instead of flaring for Pri's safety , flared for the enigma standing in front of her best friend as a shield.Did she know him? No. Did he have anything ever to give her? Certainly not. He was just someone who was too real to be true...a human?..a phantom ?an enigma who loomed around a murky road beyond the world for one woman. Thats all she knew..and that made her heart ache. Even in a situation like this where her best friend probably lost everything in one moment..her heart still ached for HIS destiny. Her brain coaxed her heart's ears. How can she be so insensitive? How can she be so heartless just for one person who she is a thousand lifetimes away from..someone who is a distant dark dream..her eyebrows frowned at her heart's thoughts , and rushed to Pri who's face's colour had drained to her lips..and just as swift as the enigma had come as a guardian angel ; the guardian angel put his expressionless iron mask on his granite face that only screamed power and arrogance and left in seconds without anyone noticing , except a pair of big baby mahogany brown eyes that always are framed within her noir coloured tendrils..."back to his murky road" , Piya's soul whispered.

Pri fell lifelessly in Piya's arms and Brandon looked on at Pri with an expression completely unreadable ...but Piya's arms , Alvira's impulsive protection faded as her eyes only hung onto Brandon's angry , and melancholic ones.That was the thing about Brandon that solely Pri knew..no matter what cruelty he dictated to make himself taste sadistic joy , the bottled up pain always reached and remained with his troubled grey pools that shielded themselves through the veil of his shaggy brown mane. Alvira's buldging noir eyes just ask his grey ones protruding questions...as if she wished he realeased the scared little boy inside him to her..but why such a wish..why such a want and care for someone to release themselves to the extent that you emotionally put them under a gun point and emotionally even risk yourself for being shot? Why such insanity? Why such longing? Why such care for what he does and what he really is..and why such entangled thoughts over his multi layered poker faces..WHY??!?!

Alvira was thoroughly disturbed , with her heart hanging around Pri's life for now out of concern...she could have burnt Brandon alive had she not been seized. As her disturbed heart and turmoiled mind had met the similar image of conceit and pride... the similar image she rolled her eyes at and yet made that image unconsciously stay within her mind ran to her , exclaiming "Where were you?! We were..I was searching for you..we have class and the teacher was wondering'"

Alvira's irritation grew stronger, " Don't tell me we have literature together."

Harsh couldn't help but be amused and slipped his trademark smirk , "Yes we do.She was searching for you and your bag was left in the examination hall.."

"Oh god" , pondered Alvi's mind.."he even went to the examination hall for me?!?..must have been the literature teacher's orders , you idiot."..told Alvi's thoughts.

"Yeah coming" , Alvi stated , while rolling her eyes.

Her class mate Reshmi , greeted her saying , "where were you? You know that new guy? He is so sweet." Alvira obviously needed to go somewhere to hurl after this statement. "You know he even insisted to find you..isn't he sweet?"'Alvi's mind had an astonishing moment , but she got over her reactions within seconds. More than the fact even being true , Alvi's mind was busy convincing her heart to irrationally judge. "Oh please. Have you seen him? He's the typical blue eyed proud , arrogant self involved guy who just dives into himself everyday. I wonder how hard it would be for him to dive in admiration for his five inch thick eye brows and six foot long nose though." Alvira's mind and ego and will was busy running away from neutral judgment and considerations, rationalities and sensibilities that her heart is still made of..she was delving into prejudices for running away as far as she could..but running away from what?Did Alvi want to know..or rather have the guts to know that? As her chides ended..a hurt , confused and angry face with injured hazel eyes were looking right behind her.If her ego ruled her body , his pride had the ability to rule others. "Just cause I helped you , doesn't mean you play hard-to-get as if I did something even enough to get such a reaction of defense. I know I'm attractive , but please. Spare me , pirate." Alvira's eyes fumed in exasperation. "PIRATE?!?! He called my veil of mahogany brown hair over my face as an imagery of a pirate?! " , screamed Alvira's mind.That was it. "Excuse me , Mr. Pinocchio. Sorry . Mr. hairy Pinocchio. Girls might find thick , hairy eye brows and mountain sized noses attractive for all I care..but if that's what society prefers nowadays , I'd rather be an alien from Mars."

Harsh's pride became aggressive now..his hands were impulsive..they never listened to his sensibilities..they tugged her shoulders and pulled her towards him , and provoked her , "Pinocchio ? Seriously? That's the kind of names you come up with? Go back to kinder garden in Mars cause you definitely belong here." ...When fire flares at fire , you can only produce a volcano of aggression , and irritation and a whirlpool of emotions probably both flares of fire are unaware of.

"And both of you should go back to elementary school in planet Earth." , exclaimed the bespectacled , irritated Literature professor. "Sit down! Both of you."

"Ughh. Pinocchio's ancestor" , screamed Alvi's mind.

"Captain Jack Sparrow's pirate sister." , bellowed Harsh's agitated pride.

"HARSH." , exclaimed his master.

Harsh reacted in an agitated and astonishing reflex to his mind..and suddenly remembered what he arrived here for and what will remain his purpose..for a second he did forget..he did not know..but he knew a familiar sarcastic classmate rolling her eyes all the time did make him forget his purpose , but his reflexes were paranormal as they were supposed to be..."Yes , master Asmodeus."

"It's good you are balancing an image of an normal high school conceited boy , but do not forget what are you here for. You're here to receive the crown of Hell for our dynasty. You are here to make Amon , one of the primal dimensions of Hell , EXTINCT. You are here for Abhay , who is Amon..once you forget that , Harsh , you know where your body will lie , I don't need to remind you. "

Harsh's forehead became more masculine and his hazel eyes turned a bright scarlet while everyone was busy reading...his sudden harsh mouth fumbled in determination , "Yes, Master."

Outside the murky hallways of Hillridge High

Pri's unsettled and numb body was running away from the whole world , including herself as she ran across the janitor to get past those silver gates...a bird flapping her wings to be free from her body...little did she know she was destined to bump into her cager.As Brandon's strong arm , with a knife seized hand.She reflexed , too numb to feel anything for this assault and turned back to his face as his hands placed the knife right under her chin in vehement threatening without any syllables spoken. "Come with me. Now.", spat Brandon's aggressive and tormented heart. He tugged her body with a knife beside her face till they reached a silent grave yard. He threw her across the hay and silent looked at a chapel where an elder brother was carrying his sibling to church. A symbol of purity and peace was been watched a pair of perplexed , experienced and stabbed grey liquid of limpid pools."You know." , stated the dictator's deep voice."My brother..he's retarded..but he still can beat up 10 more people like you up in one row.", His voice suddenly grew raspy and dark humor , like always , masked his helplessness again. "In this world you either stump people , or people stump you. I stumped my father , my entire school cause I have to survive , and so does my brother." Brandon , for the first time seemed extremely unsettled on his own words and even more confused for why was he opening up for the first time in his life to someone who he loved to humiliate all her life...was it cause her victimization somewhere reminded him of his brother? But why this cribbing for someone else ? Why this longing for caring what her identity is at all? Brandon's mind was screaming these repetitive thoughts that ultimately broke down from his rough mouth that was fumbling for the first time.."People like you and Alex need someone to tower over you all the time..but not everyone is lucky." His steely , grey irises met hers. "Fight for yourself..and if you ever bellow at me again..you have no idea about the possible consequences you'll face. Do you hear me?"..His heart knew he didn't mean this threat..his defenses were weakening..His mind was astonished about the need of creating defenses because of Pri at all.Pri felt horrible at herself more than anyone else as she realized that maybe she got what she deserved..but why was there this need to just embrace him and tell him that everything's going to be okay? "Pri he has no feelings" , her mind echoed'"He is the same cruel , sick guy you see everyday..What are you succumbing and leading yourself towards?!?!" But her heart.Her stubborn heart ...it had an entire body and mind of its own and made her stand up and fumble in tears.."I'm so sorry.I ..I didn't know about your brother...I mean..that..that must have been so disturbing all your life..how do you still manage to walk around as if you own this world?How did you make your heart..so powerful?"..As she fumbled within her thoughts coming out through words..her steps increased towards him and not exactly for the first time , Brandon's spontaneity got the better of him and his harsh countenance strode upto her helpless and limpid figure until he was inches away and crushed his mouth harshly down to hers as her fumbles ended into an abrupt shock against his harsh , scarlet lips with her eyes protruding out of surprise for what has exactly happening. His harsh , masculine fingers dug inside her messy hair as Pri's body felt confused and went through a whirlpool of emotions colouring itself from shock , to happiness as every nerve of her body tingled. As he drew his face away from hers and realized what he has done..his garb of threatening and dictatorship with a dash of dark humour returned to its form , "Don't. I repeat. Don't you dare say anything about this to anybody..Or else..." , he whispered dangerously as he hit his forhead gently against hers.."I'll really rip you apart this time.".. but for some reason..Brandon's threats and dark humour seized to scare the woman in Pri any longer.