AbhIya FF : It's the end's beginning. (PAGE 60 ). - Page 39

Originally posted by: ...Tich...

thanks dear. abhiya ffs are definitely not in my priority list. but i have read many of your posts in MB forum. So yes, i gave it a try and i wasnt disappointed. truly loved it.

Comments updated on pg 49...😳

Originally posted by: _Sonu_

brilliant update Koel...👏

I loved it...

Abhay saved Pri😃...this shows he does have a heart ... after seeing this side of Abhay,I'm sure Pia will drown deeper into her ocean of feelings for Abhay..Poor soul just can't stop herself from being attracted to Abhay...

Harsh and Alvira were hilarious😆...Alvi feels something different towards him...may be this irritates her and she ends up losing her temper when he's in front of her...and Harsh is simply attracted to her and is a l'il very curious about her...😆..for now both can't stand each other..I'm sure their egos will eventually break down...

Harsh calld her a Pirate🤣...this cracked me up..😆...agar professor beech mein nahi aata toh dono ek doosre ka sir phod dete...

and Harsh is here for Abhay...this was totally unexpected...and Abhay isn't even aware of what he is..😲

I hope Harsh doesn't harm Abhay...

and the end part was superb👏...Pri has forced Brandon to lower his defenses against her...Both don't realise what they mean to each other..They both understand each other perfectly...

I feel Brandon was feeling a l'il guilty for what he had done to Pri...and this was his way of telling sorry to her...This incident has brought them even more close to each other...I hope both can take sway some pain from each other's lives..

and I'm again sorry for keeping my post reserved for so long dear...

Continue soon...will be waiting for d next update...🤗

when are we getting the next update koyelia..????
update soon yaar..!!!!

Originally posted by: Divya6696

when are we getting the next update koyelia..????
update soon yaar..!!!!

THE ROAD TO THE END'S BEGINNING.

A new day . A new rise of the hour , but it didn't feel like the beginning of life as Piya burst her big irises open in shock from her dream..suddenly..the sun didn't make Piya's heart bloom for a new beginning..somehow'her heart pumped about the beginning of what her dream transpired to be through Abhay's still icy liquids in her mind..somehow she finally knew deep inside her soul..that it's the end's beginning. She rapidly strides across her room and broke the seething fragile glass of her window and seethed to her reflection in front of her icy mirror. Her menacing eyes equating with her sharp voice , "What on Earth has gotten into you?!?! One flash of some enigma passing through your life and NOTHING matters anymore?!?! Your friend has been physically harassed and instead of being beside her.. you're dreaming about his story and eyes?!?! Who is he anyway? An idiotic phantom who has accidentally bumped into your life like everyone else? Then?!?!? He is no one , Piya Singhania! NO ONE! And he is nonexistent from now on!! Do you understand !!!!???????!!!!" However her subconscious comes flooding right in front of her reflection , laughing in the most capricious manner possible.."Oh , Piya.. who are you fooling?! Don't you know? There are no accidents." As her subconscious soul breaks into a dark grin and vanishes within the steamy air encompassing her aggressive and vulnerable brunette curls..she throws a tissue box near by , at the mirror only wishing her reflection would crack as she was so scared of facing herself any longer.She gulped and promised herself that this day will be the new beginning to reform the normal life she had all these years..and neither Abhay , or his presence would ever be able to effect that.

The Raichand household.

The seething flares of burning fire emanate their rage and rhythm within the thinking , stable and deep mahogany irises of Hukkumjaygar Riachand..as his dark knuckles stifle harder within his wooden rickety chair , with his beloved wife explaining the current situation to him ' "What kind of a father are you Hukum?! How is any of this that nave Piya's fault..if you are intimidated by her reactions in our house earlier and her subconscious effect on our son , then I don't see a problem in it. He has been a killing mechanical machine for 100 years , killing mercilessly all over the world'what is wrong if a nave tender sixteen year old has the unquestionable power to bring life back in his dead eyes?! I don't understand!"

"Don't get me started , Mrigaa! You know exactly why I am worried and infuriated with your decision to shift in Delhi! We sensed the sort of defiance of nature in this area the minute we stepped into the cobbled streets of this locality!! I knew by just the rhythm of this wind that history will repeat itself! What do you want me to do?!!? Don nothing about a meek girl most definitely succumbing herself to an atrocious death because of the unspeakable pull between her and Abhay?!?!"

Mrignayna's eyes brimmed in the hypocrisy within Hukkum's anger , "I didn't die , did I?!"

And for the first time in the past Five centuries..the nature ..the cold and composed demeanour whipped off in horrific paleness off Hukum's face. "You know why are you still alive Mrigaa' That juice of the black blood orchid is not going to last till eternity, It was made for you , and one day'" Hukum forbade in even thinking , forget about uttering the coming words of the never ending consequences of marrying Mrignayna.

"But I am not afraid of death , I never was!" , said the passionate palls of longing and strength within a beautiful , uprooted woman."I knew what I was getting myself into and I still do.I was in love , but you were never the child of dark for me , because you began my life..I know one day the black blood drops of the orchid will seize to exist..but when I'll die , it will always be in your arms..We didn't fight with an entire kingdom of Hell and bring down Apocalypse on Earth for nothing'My love for you didn' care about the consequences."

"And what makes you think that Piya will be strong or even insane enough to crash hell and earth together because of an unsaid pull towards a demon who has killed his human side long ago with Mary's death!!" Mrignayana gasped as Mary's name was taken after a 100 years of mystifying silence..What was Piya bringing into their lives? The return of the dreadful past..the very familiar indication of the consequence Mrigaa knows she had to take? Why did a young girl have power enough to seep all the dreadful seeds of the past soaked in the present after so many years? What was destiny pulling them into?Why did Mary's shadow in the past suddenly seem to open the doors of a simple present to create havoc in their infinite lives within the universe? What collateral damage of Abhay's created monstrous identity was Fate planning to weave?

As Mrignayna's composure regained within her faithful eyes , she claimed , " You find it to be just a pull Hukkum? Have you felt the potential of feelings within that soul of a normal girl? Its paranormal. Its as if a mere human's soul suddenly has the potential consequence to face anything and everything for someone she never knew she was looking for..more importantly her soul has the strength to give my son life. How can a part of me not wish that she succeeds knowing that the price of merging into my son's life would be HER LIFE? I am selfish, and crude..but I am a mother after all." Mrignayna's eyes were brimmed with tears after years of numb and painful yearning for her son who she felt she'll never be able to bring back from his murky road..

yay..!!! me first..!! *dancing* i'm so happy..!!

ok.. first of all.. Happy Friendship Day My Shinchan Koyelia..!! 🤗

finally u updated..! awesome chappy..!!
i just love ur style of writing.. its so unique..!!
coming to the update.. it was chotu.. now thts what i felt..
it was beautiful.. piya's dilemma about abhay.. she's bound to him.. yea.. its the end's beginning..
mriga-hukkum convo ws really good..! i hope she thinks tht piya is capable of bringing bck abhay frm the dark..!

update soon please...

Well written koyel...
I loved the convo between hukum and mrig...

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Well written koyel...
I loved the convo between hukum and mrig...

wow 👏👏👏 u really great describe mother's pain for her son who destroyed himself in dark..👏

hu👏mm so pia think to stay away from abhay😆 i know esa kabhi nahi ho sakta..😳

continue soon 😃