Cherished Wounds ( Updated Ch 14 ) Pg 140 22/06

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#461

It is a nice update. I like Akash & Khushi's frenship they r cool buddies.

The way Khushi blush & dumbstruck whenever she sees Arnav is worth watching. They r close by heart but still a lot of distance hopefully it will b reduce in ur next update.

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indy12

@indy12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#462

this was a very nice update!!

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@ssaaaa

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#463

Such a cute update, he's so sweet putting the ointment on khushi's ankle. Love how she blamed him for distracting her lol. Arnav cheeky as ever!

Akash and Khushi's banter is funny, they have such sweet friendship.

Looking forward to the next one! Thanks for the PM

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#464

that was too cute!! lOve that they are getting closer and slowly understanding each other!!!

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@Chocoangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#465

dat wuz an amazing update..

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tsultana

@tsultana

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#466

that was a beautiful chapter! I love how u bring the story to life as if am there (if that makes sense). Love the detail of each scene. I cannot wait til they get together.

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#467

really really nice... thanks for the PM

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YPNHK_kiFANno.1

@YPNHK_kiFANno.1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#468

Oooh slowly but surely, they are falling deeper and deeper!

Your words totally captured my imagination. I could picture her dancing, then catching his eye n becoming even more clumsy! You write beautifully!

The ankle scene reminded me of Diwali time.

I like how you're describing all their little moments shared before anything big happens! Great pace.

👏

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#469

I am smiling too, people at work think I have lost it completely; guess a bit of it is true. Liked this update as it was light and highlighted the progress in the relationship, snail's pace will also do for now.

Cute exchange between the doctor and her brigadier, me still smiling.

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shivanie

@sweetvanie

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#470

omg Lovely Update and loved it ... simply beautiful and as always love my ArHi scenes ... can't have enough of them ... really good chapter and can't wait to read the next ... Thanks for PM ... Update soon ...