Cherished Wounds ( Updated Ch 14 ) Pg 140 22/06

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#1041

Awesome update! Really loved reading it. Great work 😳

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Surbhi

@..Surbhi..

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1042

WOW. superb update

loved it

thxx a ton for the pm hun

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Krani

@Krani

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+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#1043

Oh my god...that was...holy...woah...man...I...shit...I am..totally...speechless.

Like you cannot imagine how many butterflies have erupted in my stomach.

That has to be the most beautful lovemaking scene I have read till now. The innocence, the passion, the love the want, the desire, the longing, the fear, the sadness, the happiness...the...everything...it was just..so beautiful! It actually has to be one of the most well-written love scenes out there.

I am not kidding. I absolutely loved reading this chapter, mostly because it highlighted how much these two loved each other, how they cannot stay apart despite having tried everything, how they deserve to be with one another. My heart went out to both of them, and I really hope they can stay together.

I loved reading it. Really. Beautiful work!

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Shruti

@addicted2ksg

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1044

Hellooo :D

This one I found thanks to ROA, because once I finished that I just had to keep reading more of your work! I love love love the concept, the way you've kept up the integrity of all characters, how serene and yet terrifying you make war feel, it's all sooo well written!! Every emotion expressed is so beautiful and heart warming in a way and throughout reading this I felt like I was an actual witness in the love story!

This is definitely becoming one of my favorite reads and I can't wait for more on it :) Hope it lasts forever!