LOVE IZ LIKE HEAVEN BUT IT HURTS LIKE HELL - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
really nice ... liked it :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Rey and a bookworm is difficult to relate to...but Kriya's masti even in her dialogues is so infectious...thanx for th PM & lukng forward to th next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Awesum updt...
Luvd Rey's name...angry young man...
Dey hav opp charaecters...
Luvd it...plzz pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
i loved the opposite characters of reyam
rey loves reading books and swayam loves disco and parting

awesome
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
jus read all ur updates. dey were amazing.
plz pm me on ur further updates.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
aww it was too cute and kriya held his nose wow she is really fearless adn thanks for the pm it was an amazing update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
thanks all ov u for ur valuble commentsss
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Rey is too much . . . . Sit-ups 🤣

seriously, angry young man . . . . . But he's slowly turning into lover boy 😃

kriya rocks 😛

swayam making coffee & sharon helping . . . . Awww 😉

disco time . . . 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
chapter 3: (A)

swayam was almost ready but rey was taking his time ...swayam rang the bell of krishas house .sharon came out .swayams mouth was hanging .he could only utter one word

sw:beautiful

at this sharon blushed to the core and

sh: thanks and you r also looking handsome

at this kria called sharon but swaron were lost in each other .kria came thier and break thier lalala mode by clapping in front of sharon sharon came back to her sense


s:huh

k:what huh we should be going right?

sw:yaa ill start the car

sh:i will go with him

k:ok i will call rey .wheres he?

sw:he is inside bohat time lagat hai

k:ufff

swaron wentt to the car whereas kria went inside the house and went to reys room where rey was picking his shirt

(he is still know wearing a shirt ...shirtless nahi hai but selection ho rahi thi😉)

k:hey rey

r:hi kria i dont know what to wear?

k:ok let me decide she gave him a green tee shirt which was also krias favourite


soon rey was ready and they went outside and to thier surprise their was no car and no sign of swaron


r: uff i know swayam well he did this just because i coould drive the bike

k:bike yippi lets go

r:kya tumheen dosri larkiyoon ki tarah bike se darr nahi lagta?

k:nope balke i love to sit on bike it feels like we are in air

r:hmmm

rey started the bike and as soon he started a jhatka came and kria hugged him tight .rey gave a similed at this that how kria was afraid


they soon reached the disco and entered

rey was at the bar and so does kria

k:lets dance

r:no not know
one guy came to kria and asked her for dance she went wid him


kria was just dancing wid him not close dance but he soon caught krias waist

guy: comon baby let me show you heaven

K;what the hell leave me


he didntt left kria at this kria shouted

k:helppp!!!!!!!!!!1


rey heard her and went their and took krias hand and put her behind him

kria started crying

rey just gave him one puch and he was lying on the ground

kria went outside a disco and it was a quite place

rey went after her

kria was still crying
r:kria stop it tumheen us ke sath dance karne ki kya zzaroorat thi?

k:mein tu bas dance kar rahi thi sorry




this part will be completed soon as my light comes...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow amazing full comment when it will get complete so complete fast

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