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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

it was really cute! :)

Continue and pm soon!

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Snigdha

@Arsha1994

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Awesum concept...

Roommates...rey in towel...it was awesum...

Plzz continue ...plzzz pm me...

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sarah

@lover_kriyansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

thanks guys next part will be updated soon

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

its awesome...loved it very much

krisha masti and kria pulling reys cheek hahahh that was soo funny

superb

waiting eagerly for next part

continue soon

and please pm me when you will update next part

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sarah

@lover_kriyansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

chapter 2:

the next day krisha thought of saying sorry to the two angry young mans ..kria was wearing shorts and a small tee and so does sharon .they both ring the bell of reyams house .swayam opened the door

sw:you both again

sh: we just came to say sorry you dumbo

sw: what the hell is this a way to say sorry???

kr: stop it sharon hi and we are really sorry for yesterday

sw:its ok

r:whats okay ..nothings ok ...this is not a way to say sorry

sw:oh now you have to say sorry to him

krisha :SORRY!!!!!

r:no you have to do 10 sittups

krisha:what????

r:yes

sw: rey!!!!!!

r:what swayam they have to do the punishment

k:ok mr.angry young man we will do it

r:starts(rey started counting and after 5 mins they completed there punishment)

reyam:now nice to meet you and plzz come in

k:ok

sh:ok

they went in and sat on the couch reyam had a two bedroom apartment and so does krisha

krisha and rey sat on the couch

sw:cofeee???

rey and krisha:sure

sw:ok i will make it you enjoy till then

kria to rey ; so mr angry young man app itna gusssa kyun rehte ho???

r:woh ...woh ...actually

k: woh woh kya kuch kehne ko nahi hai i understand ...

sharon went to the kitchen to help swayam

r:what you understand?😕

K;yahi ke app ko app ki gf ne ditch kiya

r:what???for your kind info i dont have any gfs

k:really i dont beleive you ..noo i beleive you itne gusse wale se koi pyaar kaise kare ga?

r: really mein bohat gussa karta hoon?(going in his dreamland)

k:ya aur kya

swaron came out of the kitchen having mugs of cofee in their hands

swayam handed the coffeee to everyone

kria was going to drink it when it fell on her tee (guys i know cofee hot hoti hai but i forget to mension they were drinking cold cofee)

sw: rey show her the wshroom

r:oki

k:lets go

rey took her to his bedrooms attached washroom

kria entered the room and was dumstruck to see the whole room with books every where books books books

k:rey what is this itni zaida books app kitne boring ho?

r:mein boring nahi hoon ..bas aise hi read karna acha lagta hai

kria went in the washroom when she came out she had also washed her face rey went to his lalala mode seeing kria

k:kya hua pehle kabhi larki nahi dheki ..lets go

they went out soon rey came out from his dreaming mode

swaron:aagaye tum log

sh:kria we have to go neha ne phone kiya tha woh paintings lene jaana hai right?

k:yaa mein tu bhool gayi thi

reyam:can you come tonight to the disco

k:i love disco

r:not again swayam

sh:we should go it will be awesome

r:no i am not going

kria took his nose in her fingers and moved it left to right saying:

k:mr boring kabhi books se bahar nikal kar dheko shayad kisi ore cheez mein interst ho jaye

rey smiled at this and said yes

krisha went to home bidding goodbye to reyam

precap: kria shouting HELPPP!!!!!!!!!!

guys pata nahi app ko pasand aaye ga ya nahii but i tried my level best plzz do like and comment

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Amazing...luved rey's new name Mr.amgry young man
n rey reads books thoda shocking hai...eagerly waiting for the next part

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Awesum updt...

New name for rey...angry young man!!!

I liked it..

Rey reading books n Kriya likes disco..exactly opp. characters!!

Luv it alot!!

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Kavisha

@BrokenHearts1D

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

oppsosite attracts each other...rey loves books and kria loves disco...loved it!!!!!!!

UPDATE soon waiting...

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

i liked it :) :)

Update n Pm me soon 😛

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Ridhi

@rIDhid3rox

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

awesome update but u didn't pm me😔...it's k no probs do pm me when you update the next part...

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