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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Awesome go ahead and pm me ur nxt update

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mindumplingss

@mindumplingss

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Nice Intro...Loved It..Do Continue. Pm M When Yo Update

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sarah

@lover_kriyansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

so here goes chapter 1:

two girls were watching a movie

girl1: uff oo so romantic scene

girl2:yaa i wish i could have someone like him

girl1:turned off the screen and said :just get lost i cant watch it

girl2:kria i will kill u ...band kyun kiya

girl1: sharon sorry but bohat zaida romantic movie thi

kria started run and sharon was chasing her (note they both are room mates and live in an apartment)

kria opened the door of her house and rang the door bell of the house which was exactly next to her a guy opened the door kria pushed him as sharon was chasing her

k:sorry sorry while running inside his house ,on the sofa...

s:i will kill you for sure

boy1:what the hell ?who r u?plzz stop (he shouted)

kria and sharon both freeze at their places

k:sorry actually we were fighting

boy1:so go to your home and fight

boy2:coming out from the washroom with just a towel aroung his waist

kria and sharon started laughing hard and so does boy 1

boy2:swayam what the hell why r u laughing?

sw:rey dhek yahan koi aur bhi hai

rey saw kria and their LLLHHH session starts but it was broken by sharon when she hit kria on her head and said i think we should go now

rey ran to his room whereas swayam meeted them while laughing

sw:koi baat nahi magar dobara lare naa then i will kill u both otherwise my name is swayam

sh:hi i am sharon (swayam LLLHHH session starts)

kr:hi ...hello ...waving hand in front of them(no response from both sides)

kr :sharon(shouted at her top of voice)

sh: haan kya hua

sw:kya hua>?

kr:ya hi my name is kria

in the meantime rey come out from the room with full mood(now he is wearing clothes)

rey: swayam who r these and what r they doing in our house

sh: hi i am sharon

kr: i am kria

rey: whatever u both go out from here

sharon was leaving wheresas kria stood there and waspulling reys cheeks

kr: waise tum gussa karte hue bohat cute lagte ho

rey went to the LLHHH MODE

otherwise bye swayam and reyyy

sharon and kria both left their place by giving smiles

and our majnu and rey was also smiling

and even rey doesnt know why he was smiling

guys i dont know kaise likha bas jo mind mein aaya likh diya pata nahi aapp sab ko

kaisa laga plzzz like for pms and comment your opinions every comment is respected 😳

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Krisha are roommates & they are so fun loving . . . . . Ladte ladte stranger ke ghar me ghus gaye & pulling his cheeks too 🤣 😆 . . . . . Kriya is so bindaas...

& reyam abhi se majnu ban gaye 😛 . . . . Acha kia jo inhe neighbour bana dia... It was mindblowing... 😳

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

I luvd it though it was really a short updt...

KriSha r room-mates!!!!

Kriya pulling Rey's cheeks...

Loved deir characters to d core..

Continue it in d same way..

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

yeyy i am the first one to comment

wow nicw to know kria and sharon are room mate and their lovely fught was amazing
the first meeting with rey ans swayam was amazing i just loved it
waiting for nxt update eagerly

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Amazing update sarah...wow krisha r roomies luved the update...plzzz pm wen u update i sent u a buddy request

Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Mazaa aagaya luvd that they r neighbors & so happy go lucky 😊 KriSha r...impressed also with ReYam character...thanx for th pm & pls continue to pm in future 2...

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

LOL amazing room mates and Rey in towel and girls laughing lol and L2H2 so fast lol and also Kriya is so bindass yaar pulling his cheeks that is so cute it was an amazing update thnks for the pm