arsha + kriyaansh.(ss)..part 4 updtdpg50*last*

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surprise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
chalo bataya na ...aaj ki surprise...arsha and kriyaansh ss...but but but lamba expect mat karo...chota hi hoga...


index:
part1: page 1

part 2; page 11


part3: page 30


part 4: page 





arsha: 

"hey shaks!!!!!!!" all shouted ...
 
her eyes filled with tears...she dropped her bag and ran to them...soon they all lifted her and threw her in the air 4r nearly ten tymes when she was screaming in fear...

"chodo guys" 

"not that early" archie and macci shouted...

and after another six tymes they let her down...she soon ran to her family and hugged everyone...mukti took the most tym..yeah after all she is her bff and dearest sissy...

"thoda tym hame bhi do mukti"sneha pouted ...

they pulled back...

"i have a lot of tym 4r u all"...shaks hugged sneha...

and gave an individual hug to everyone...

"sab ko hug kiya aur mujhe nahi???" smone spoke 4rm back...

shaks turned back and a big smile spread on her face..."kya maine kabhi kaha ki i wont hug u??"

"kaha toh nahi but lagta toh wahi hai..." the person pouted...


"aww!! u know u look too cute pouting..." pulled the cheeks of someone...

"i dnt want ur compliment .i want a hug" 

"chalo a big warm hug" shaks crushed the person...


"shaks chodo"

" kya hua miss .vrinda  ab tak toh keh rahi thi ki hug chahiye ...ab kya hua???" pulling herself back

"ohh.thank u , maine socha humari interaction bohut kam hua so u wont hug me.i dnt think u will crush me..."

"interaction chota ya bada...frnd frnd hote hai..." 

they smiled...archie and macci cracked jokes and all were laughing...but her eyes were searching smone...

"he didnt cm" sneha whispered in her ear 4rm back...

"i expeccted"shaks mumbled looking down...

"kya hua??"sneha qsnd...

"nothing...im fin..."shaks lookd up..."maa jaldi chalo im starving"

all headed to her house...all the way she layed her head to the window eyes closed...mukti and sneha got that smthing was wrong when others thought she was tired...

"tumhe nai lagta in donon ke beech kuch gadbad chal rahi hai??" sneha qsnd...

"u too noticed??? mujhe bhi wahi lag raha hai...but u know its not the ri8 tym..." mukti replied slowly...

"yeah"sneha replied..."par kuch sochna padega"

"dnt u think  u should also pull us into ur team???"


sneha and mukti looked back...


"yeah its me...dnt see lyk dat"archie said...

but the girls were still loking at them...

"ab kha jaoge kya??" shan cmnted...

"no...but how do u know that..." sneha was cut in b/w


" we know and dnt u think jaise tum donon shaks ke sab se kareeb ho wise hum amar ki??? so we have to work together...u know we will be useful to each other"

"yeah ri8...kk so team...??"mukti said frwarding her hand...

"team!!"all caught her hand and the four had a proud smile on their faces...




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precap:

gum sum ho kyun paas aaona...they walked side by side without talking 4r a long tym
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thats it 4r now
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kriyaansh:



"guys plzz stop it, kitni baar kahun tumhe??? "he shouted...


"not anymore rey...bas hogaya...aur kitne din??? i cnt see my best frnd lyk dis...u know it pains a lot...aur kitne din...oh sorry aur kitne saal... do u remember 3 saal cmnplt ho rahe hai when dis happened..." sharon shouted...

"sharon plzz ...understand i cnt 4rgt her,..."

"kyun rey??? y  do even care abt that damn kriya ..." she was cut in middle..

"enough sharon...usne jo bhi kiya ho...she is my best frnd and plzz never ever talk in frnt of me lyk dis abt her...i dnt want to be angry with u in this matter...and agar use kuch kehna ho then plzz just tell me first to get out..."swayam dashed out banging the door of the reharsal hall behind him...

sharon was left dumb...rey slowly left with his head down and blaming himself 4r the fight b/w the newly official couple...

"i know swayam it hurts u...it hurts me too...kriya... how could she leave...usne rey ka dil ko thoda...aur bina bataye clg chod diya...usne ek baar bhi nahi socha ki rey ka kya hoga??? who will lead ur team lyk her...who will shut the dazzlers mouth and and and sharon raiprakash ko tuf challenge koun dega..." she fell on her knees crying...

all the gang came to her...

"sharon tum kriya ke keliye aisa ro rahi ho" simmi said

"neha not believing" neha said in shock...


"i really miss her a lot guys"sharon hugged vicky crying when he comforted...

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"sorry sharon...actually mujhe aisa baat."

"no swayam ur ri8 in ur place...i know how it feel when its about our best frnd,,,,..."

he hugged her...

"by the way vicky ne mujhe kal ek badi shock diya...is it true??"swayam asked her with a mischievious smile...

"kya kaha??"

"tum...kriya." he smiled

"she punched him slightly and said haan hugging him...

"i dnt know swayam how u feel...but i cnt bear anymore i wanna see her..."

"may be its impossible sweet heart" he said with a heavy heart when she gave him a warm hug...

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reharsal hall
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"kya baat hai rey??" swayam asked

"yeah guys .i will but wait..."rey said...

"sorry sorry mai phir se late hogayi ..." smone told...


rey without seeing at her..."ur late again tani..and kal bhi nahi aayi...u know ags have to inform gs or else atleast attend his call" rey spoke checking the file...

"sorry sorry kal meri tabyat theek nahi thi aur,...ouch!!!!!!!"she ran to the middle and fell down...

all beat their foreheads with their palms...


she stood up...finally rey looked up...

"ur fine??"

"haan...😍"

"kk so guys i wanted to tell ...we have cmplted our college...and as we won footloose 4r past 3 yrs sir wants to send us on a long trip of one month..."

(taani can dance but no one can beat kriya obviously")

"wat??????? " all shouted...

"yeah!!!!!!!!"all shouted

"par kaha jaa rahe hai??"" nil asked..

"sir ne kaha wo surprise hai...all facilities will be there...we have to take our stuff and just get into the bus...and swayam sab ki responsibility hum donon ki...but dnt worry u  will get a plenty of tym i will manage...but thoda help chahiye..."

"ab meri keech rahe ho???"swayam said when sharon blushed...

"aww!!!!!! rey ke saath ek month ki trip??😍"taani thought...

"taani...taani...TAANI!!!!!!!!!!!"rey shouted 

"hh...ha...haan..."
 

"plzz apni uss dreamland se bahar aao and ye file dekho aur jo bhi papers chahiye prepare and i want it by tomorrow kk...trip ke pehle mujhe sir ko submit karna hai...kk"rey said and left...

"ok!!!!😍"  

all left leaving her behind...she walked dreamily and fell down...

"hey krishna ji..phir se gir gayi...chalo koi baat nahi taani  uthja and apni prince charming ki kaam poora kar..."

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next day in bus...
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boys on one side and girls on other...


all were trying hard to cheer sharon but she was quite...

"kyahua sharon" swayam asked concerned...

"kriya ki bohut yaad aa rahi hai" sharon said slowly...


rey turned to the window...all went quite...


"ye kriya hai koun hamesha uski naam lete rehte hai ...huh!!!!"taani thought to herself...









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precap: 

"kriya plzz" he said ...

all turned around and were shocked to see her...


"plzz arjun i said u already...mom ko ye pata nahi chalna chahiye...and agar tum mujhe ghar drop karoge toh mom ko shak hojayega..." kriya said

"ok dear" arjun said...

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thats it 4r now
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Im really so happy!!!!!
 
Double Dhamaal!!!!
 
Wow..on seeing d surprise itself my eyes popped out..
 
Deetha u r such a sweetheart deetha...Muah!!!!
 
Love u lots deetha for dis...
 
U seriously made my day by creating dis one...
 
Really Imnt able to express how happy Im feeling at present...
 
N mayb dis is d first post today IM giving dis big comment...
 
Cant stop doing dis seriously loved ur surprise alot!!!!
 
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❤️Lots of hugs n Kisses for dis heavenly surprise❤️
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firstly... dis is ur new ff ryt??😃
secondly- thnkz a lot fr d pm as u alwayz frget me😭

n 3rd- it was awesum dear really kloved arsha part 2 d core... plz plz nxt part jaldi update karo dying 2 read it plz..

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amazing loved it and dheeta plz pm me for this one
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loved it...

arsha sad.. no..

arjun like a bro plzzz... matlab uski vajah se she strtd dance again bas yahi plzzz
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Wow deetha that is an awesome update.
loved it.
kitna acha surprise diya that tumne.
it was superb.
wow arsha nad kriyaansh simultaneously.
kya baat hai.
lovely one.
loved arsha precap nd kriyaansh one woh kya that.
who  is that arjun.??and yup.
nice concept.
update next part soon.

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Originally posted by: The007Shivani

amazing loved it and dheeta plz pm me for this one


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wow awsomme deeth man both strriess are rocking and cutee wow waiting for next updatee plz update fast
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