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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt

Ola Mary!!⭐️
This one is one of your BEST stories EVER!!!!πŸ‘
I mean Anjali and Imad's!!❀️ This is ONE SUCCESS!!! Mwh... Chummeshwari Story!!! 🀣
That feel, those conversations, so mature, so understanding, so deep, so... AMAZING πŸ˜ƒ...so touching, that made me feel as if I was literally watching it!!😍
Anjali does have suppressed feelings for Imad, and she thinks she has none, with the fact that she has a daughter now, is a single mother and is going through a tough time, after the revelation of her lecher of a Husband! But she shouldn't have underestimated Imad's feelings for her!

From Anjali's POV, I can yet understand, that those feelings from his side, that is now so evident, since after his out-of-the-blue confession, she somewhat feels awkward... Just like when we feel, at times, when we suddenly find out that a person, whom we considered really a good/very good/best friend, loves us! That awkwardness, seeps in sometimes, making it difficult to bring back that kind of atmosphere that we used to have once upon a time, before all this revelation...Agree?

And from Imad's POV, I am very much hurt too, because she shouldn't have underestimated those feelings, that even he, himself, knows and has the ability and maturity to conclude it as love and something really much deeper than just attraction or fancy! He is mature enough to deduct what these feelings are, because all of those relationships he was in in the past, was what that used to fill his want and the attraction he had towards those girls and that's it! Like fancy! But after all these relationships, he does of course have the ability to conclude what he now really feels for Anjali! And as you've mentioned in the OS itself that he never made any promises to any of those girls, not because he was scared of keeping them, but because he knew...he knew that what he felt for those girls was, of course, not deep like this, even though it never struck him in his conscious mind! Unknowingly and from what he has learned he did what he thought was right, leave alone the long list of girls behind him. Perfection...Hmm...Nobody's Perfect!πŸ˜› Imperfection is what defines us, Humans, as Humans! We strive to attain perfection and learn from our imperfectness!!πŸ˜†
And when in Love, people say (not me), that the beloved is the most perfect person of all the ones you know in this whole wide world!! That feeling is so deep, so pure, so touching, so killing, so lively, so sacrificial, so breathing, so suffocating, so painful, so joyful, so enthusiastic, so everything in this Universe... that everything seems PERFECT around YOU!!!😍
I haven't experienced it yet, so I dunno what it feels like personally, but all what I typed out above is what I've come to hear from people and of course, a few is my own philosophy!! :P

And Anjali has to...HAS to STOP underestimating herself too!!! She underestimated Imad's feelings too, and even underestimated herself, here indirectly, saying that these feelings are fancy and will pass! She blames herself for everything through her sober and painful words!! Her broken Wedding and Marriage, and now his mood!! If she didn't have anything towards Imad, she wouldn't have bothered TOO much about his mood being ruined by what she said! Though she is a person, who is very caring and careful about people's feelings and never does anything to hurt them either, she may of course feel bothered about it and go to apologise, but wouldn't wallow so much on it! Be it a thing or person, unless and until you are interested in it/him/her, you are passionate about it, like/love it/him/her, such stuff wouldn't pinch you, gnaw you and/or make you wallow in self-pity!

GREAT UPDATE!!!πŸ‘
Way to go, girl!!! ⭐️
You're an Awesome Writer and you know it!!


AnnieπŸ˜ƒ
P.S.: How's my analysis, eh? πŸ˜‰ Kidding, pal!!



Agree, great analysis! Thanks Annie! I love reading responses from you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 2 Preview

Imad's letter

Tuesday night dinner invitation by Khushi

Arhi cuteness

Imad's guest

Anjali's shock

Arnav's anger

Imad's heartbreak

Anjali killing with kindness

A major conversation between Anjali and Imad

Ziyad has a talk with Imad


There might be a part 3

Edited by Marybarton - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wht again a heartbreak...sad sad but some thing good rifht...?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Can't wait to read the 2nd part. Thanks for writing Imad and Anjali's story. Plus love the cute scenes between newlywed Arhi. I hope you update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update loved it...

poor imad
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Posted: 12 years ago
My like button is acting funny...so couldn't "like it"...but i just finished reading the first part and i love it... I can almost feel Imad's pain..i can almost see the scenes while i was reading 😍...that's what makes a good writer...well done... πŸ‘β­οΈ
 
Now i've got to read the second part... loved the preview...do let me know when u are done writing the second part too..
Edited by minihussain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is good story..never thought Anjali's story would catch fire like this, so good..continue 
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am waiting with bated breath for this one! I really LOVE the married ARHI and the Imad-Anjali story!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mary, its coming along nicely~ 
love it.
btw, i particularly loved reading about our ArHi... more such scenes please? btw, if you can, please write about their interaction and day to day issues in dealing iwth their difference in cultures  - there is going to be fireworks on a daily basis for sure.

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Posted: 12 years ago
another heart break😭
waiting for the update