**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF IMP NOTE ON PG 145 - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gcs-girl

Intresting concept
awesome updates!!
loved it

waiting for next
conti.soon

Add me in PM 😊

thanks dear...glad u liked it😊...typing next part now...will update soon...n hv added u to my pm list😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maneetshauna

nice update...thanks for PM..now waiting to see how maan will tarosify geet..pls update soon

thanks dear for liking it😊...maan will go extreme in tarosify geet for sure😉😉😉😉...will update tonight😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n rocking update! Poor Geet ! Awesum MSK entry! Maan wants to meet his Geet bt he knws her! He wil force her to come to him! Cannot wait 2 c hw!  Well written! update soon Edited by khwaishfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi thanks 4 da pm n rocking update! Poor Geet ! Awesum MSK entry! Maan wants to meet his Geet bt he knws her! He wil force her to come to him! Cannot wait 2 c hw!  Well written! update soon

u r welcome dear😊...n glad u liked it...updating next part now😊😳😉...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey how much time u will take sweaty
i am too tired to wait for another half an hour🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago
@varsha gud hai ji k tum itni jaldi meri quality samajh gyi warna mujhe bhi zalim singh khurana k tarah koi plan banana padta... Chalo ab jab pata chal hi gya hai to jaldi se update karna main wait karungi
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting!!
wil it tk long?
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Posted: 12 years ago

FLAMES OF DESIRE

 
~PART-3~
 
"thik hai geet...this time I wont force u...lekin yeh mera wada hai ki tum khud mere pas aaogi...i will make u go thru d same longing I am feeling for u now...u will crave for me, my touch and I promise u that..."
 
maan reached khurana mansion...he told adi to carry on wid office...he entered...everyone where busy chit chating...wen vicky saw maan...
vicky-dadi dekho maan bhai aa gaye
everybody stood...maan went to dadi n took her blessing...dadi was overjoyed seeing him after so long...she hugged him...beta we missed u so much n kissed his forehead...everybody one by one hugged him tight n congratulated him for his success...maan was at peace now...around his family...
they all set down for breakfast...
vicky- aaj hamari family pure 1 month ke baad saath breakfast kar rahe hai...
dadi- ha bas hamare geet ki kami hai...
hearing her name maan's heart skipped a beat...
annie- dadi ab toh woh aane se rahi bhai jo wapas aa gaye hai...n she started giggling...
dadi- yeh toh sach hai...lekin hum geet ko mana lenge...aise geet ke bagair acha nahi lagta...
vicky- ha dadi princess ki leg pulling karke breakfast ka maza hi kuch aur hai...n he started laughing...maan gave him stern look...n dat was enough to shut him up...scared he looked down...n everybody started laughing seeing this...n maan too joined them...
their masti carried on d whole day...annie n vicky bunked college as they wanted to spent d whole day wid maan...dev too joined them...he took off frm work...
maan gave them all d gifts he bought for them...they where all present in his room...annie was helping him unpacking...while doing dat she saw smthing in his bag...smthing dat was gift wrapped😉...bhai yeh gift kiske liye hai...she showed it to maan...woh gift nahi hai...i bought smthing for myself n wahi hai usme...n he took it frm her hand...bas galati se gift wrap ho gaya...everybody agreed to dis...n he sighed in relief...after sm time...they retired to there rooms...as maan was feeling jet lag...n dey left him to take sm rest...
now maan was alone in his room...he laid in his bed...tried sleeping bt geet's thoughts where enough to make him crave to have her...everytime he closed his eyes...her angelic face
came infront...her teasing smile, those innocent eyes, her inviting lips where making him insane...irritated he got up...
 
 
"bas aaj ka din geet...bas aaj ka...aur kal tum mere pas hogi...kal tum chah kar bhi mujhe se dur nahi ja paogi..."
he took out his mobile n made few calls...n smirked thinking of his plan...
 
on the other hand in handa haveli...geet was laying in bed...looking at her mobile screen...getting irritated...she unlocked her screen several times as it locked again..."babaji abhi tak toh inka call aa jana chahiye tha...mujhe datane...gussa karne...lekin kyu nahi aaya😕...then getting worried...woh thik toh honge na...kahi unki tabiyat toh...nahi nahi geet agar kuch waisi baat hoti toh abhi tak dadi jarur call karti...sighed she called annie...hi annie, kaisi hai?
annie- mai thik hu geet...mujhe kya hona hai... n tu aaj aayi kyu nahi...pata hai dadi kitna upset ho gayi
geet- sorry yaar woh aaj na mumma ne mujhe rok liya...unhone bohat yummy breakfast banaya tha...toh mujhe bhi bura laga...tumhe toh pata hai mai kitni achi hu
annie started giggling...geet tu bas hi kar...aur hasa mat...mujhe pata hai tu kyu nahi aayi...darpok...bhai se dar ke ghar pe baith gayi na...shame on u geet...kal itna samjhaya fir bhi nahi samjhati...bhai kaunsa tujhe kha jate...
geet made a baby face...looking at babaji...
chal ab jada muh mat bana aur babji ko satana band kar...waise batana call kyu ki?
geet- woh annie woh mumma puch rahi thi unke baare mai...n unhone mujhe kaha ki mai tumse puch lu ki woh thik se aa gaye hai kya...
annie- hmmm...achaaa
geet- ha...warna tujhe toh pata hai mai aise call karti hu kya unke baare mai puchane
annie- ok...annie trying hard to control her laugh...it was her chance to pull her leg😆...
geet- kya ok...
annie- yahi ki tu aise call nahi karti bhai ki khabar puchane
geet- hmm...aage...
annie- kya aage...aage kuch nahi...
geet- annie mujhe irritate mat kar😡...jaldi bata...maan kaha hai...
annie- arre geet bhai ne tumhe bataya nahi kya
geet- kya nahi bataya...
annie- ohh toh nahi bataya...very bad...chalo jaane do...ab mai kya batau...
geet- aanie tune agar abhi jaldi jaldi nahi bataya maan kaha hai toh mai abhi aake tujhe pitungi...
annie- oh ho pagali, pitane ke liye tujhe yaha aana hoga...aur tere bas ki baat nahi woh darpok😆
geet- annie i hate u...hate u hate u hate u...arghhh...n irritatedly she kept d phone...n throwed it aside..."dono bhi bhai behan dushta hai...ek rakshash aur ek chudel...mujhe satane ka koi mauka nahi chodate"
 
 
she again laid on bed...cursing them..."unhone call kyu nahi kiya mujhe...kya kal ki galiya sunn ke itna gussa ho gaye...lekin maine fir bhi kam hi di thi😕...ab jab samane aayenge tab mai bilkul bhi baat nhi karungi...ha samane bhi nahi aaungi"
 
her whole day went thinking of maan...cursing him for making her so restless...his this act was irritating her...she so much wanted to hear him...she waited for maans call wid every ring...bt her hopes got crashed seeing it to be smone else...she stayed in her room d whole day...wen her mom called her for dinr...
 
at khurana mansion...after finalising his plan for other day😉...maan slept peacefully...
at night...maan came down for dinr...they where having dinr chit chating...wen maan spoke...dadi maine project ke success ko celebrate karne ke liye kal party rakhi hai...yahi ghar mai...
dadi- bete yeh toh achi baat hai...aap chinta na kare...party ki sari jimmedari dev n vicky sambhal lenge...dev n vicky nodded happily...
maan nodded...n said...sabko invite mai kar dunga personally.😉...
they had there dinr...n everybody retired to there rooms...maan called mohinder handa(geet's dad)
papa maine kal success party rakhi hai for the project...n i wanted to invite u first...
hum kal party mai jarur aayenge...after all its ur success party...so proud of u son...
n they chated for a while...after keeping d call...mohinder looked at geet in front of him...who watching him curiously..."kya hua beta"..."woh kuch nahi papa"...toh beta khana khao...i am watching u for so long, u still hv d same bite in hand...geed nibbled on dat bite quickly getting embarressed...
then mohinder spoke, rano abhi maan ka call tha...geet alerted her ears to wards her father..."maan ne kal party rakhi hai n hume invite karne ke liye call kiya tha"
geet got shocked😲...party...yani devils den jana hoga kal...she luked at her babji sensing trouble ahead😉
 
 
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precap- party🥳...n maneet meeting after a month😳
 
Done wid part-3...i hope me going on ryt track in entertaining u...pls hit d LIKE button n comment...me waiting eagerly for ur response...love u
 
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Edited by mahimaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i m d first...wowww...
is geet ka toh kuch nahi ho sakta...
babajee kuch karo is jhalli ka...
pehle toh chupti hai aur phir jab msk call nahi karte toh bhi preshaan hoti hai...😆
devil ki den mein apka welcome jordaar hoga geet ji...
n abt dat gift...msk told datt it was his...sAfed jooth...
wat's in it...
waiting eagerly...
cont
Edited by lively-piia - 12 years ago