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Just found this story and read all nine updates and I have to say, you've got one brilliant story going on here!!
The depth in all of your characters is commendable and the way in which not one of them is perfect - they all have flaws and they've all got problems. I mean, Anjali so ... So f**ked?! I had not expected that!!
Likewise Khushi - she's not the pure, innocent and untainted girl you'd expect her to be.
And Arnav ... I think I felt most sorry for this guy - the chapter where he'd broken down was painful to read!!
As was Garima'a backstory!! My goodness, was THIS a shock or what?! :O
In short, this story is brilliant and I would love it if I could get a PM for when you next update! :)
The depth in all of your characters is commendable and the way in which not one of them is perfect - they all have flaws and they've all got problems. I mean, Anjali so ... So f**ked?! I had not expected that!!
Likewise Khushi - she's not the pure, innocent and untainted girl you'd expect her to be.
And Arnav ... I think I felt most sorry for this guy - the chapter where he'd broken down was painful to read!!
As was Garima'a backstory!! My goodness, was THIS a shock or what?! :O
In short, this story is brilliant and I would love it if I could get a PM for when you next update! :)
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