NEW FF || Forever Yours#1 Part 1

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys! This is Supriya... m back with another FF... I haven't forgotten my other FF "Inner Desires" .. I just had a stupid idea ... so I thought of implementing it on this FF... 😛
M just posting the first part here... depending on the response I get, I'll continue...😊
Enjoy ⭐️

Link to my other FF "Inner Desires"



DUE TO SOME PROBLEM, I HAD TO START A NEW THREAD FOR THE REST OF THE PARTS

LINK TO THREAD#2 ~Forever Yours


❤️Forever Yours ❤️
Part 1       ~   Shattered

He placed his hands around her waist and pulled her towards him. She crashed into his muscular chest. She looked up into his hazel brown eyes, those eyes which always ignited passion in her soul. His hands ran through her hair, caressing her subtle cheek while she closed her eyes in anticipation.

He leaned towards her and placed a soft kiss on her cheek. She gripped his shirt tighter. He kissed her forehead. He pulled her chin upwards. Her eyes were still shut . He noticed her chest heaving up and down. Her lips were inviting him to capture them.
Unable to control the desire burning inside him any further, he pulled her lips to his. Her hands slid to the back of his neck while his hands played with her belly, tingling her. 

She abruptly pushed him back.
He stared at her in shock. He saw anger in her eyes. There was fear and pain in them. He tried to walk towards her but she went away from him. He stood there frozen shouting her name while she ran away from him, refusing to come back, ever. 

He collapsed on the ground.

"Khushi!!!!!!!!",he called her. But she didn't return. He saw her shadow disappear into the darkness...


"Khushi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!", Arnav shouted as he woke up with a start. He was shivering, breathing heavily. He rubbed his hair with his palm. He was sweating now. He turned to look at the other side of his bed. 

There was no Khushi there, there never was. A drop of tear fell from his left eye.

End of Part 1
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How was it>?? 😊 
I really hope I didn't waste your time. I know this part was kind of confusing but you'll get to know everything as the story progresses. 
If I get a good response for this part, i'll continue.
So please comment/like. Bashing is allowed 😛. I'll be happy to read your suggestions and views on this part!
And please suggest me a new title for this F.. coz I just can't seem to find one and M really not convinced of the current one...
If u want me to pm u IF I update, pls buddy me or just leave a comment.

Thank u for reading 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
This was a beautiful beggining!😃

Loved it, OMG what happened!? Why did Khushi run away : (

I need another update, Hungry for more😳

Update sooon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

This was a beautiful beggining!😃


Loved it, OMG what happened!? Why did Khushi run away : (

I need another update, Hungry for more😳

Update sooon!


hey ur first!!!! 😆 
And thanks alot! ...  Will update it if I get a gud response! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I already LOVE it❤️. Great start seems really interesting😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: april2003

I already LOVE it❤️. Great start seems really interesting😃


Awww... thank you so much dear 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg that was awesome😛...yayyy u wrote a new ff.😉..amazing😃...awwh poor Arnie baby:(😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ArhiAbhiya

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omg that was awesome😛...yayyy u wrote a new ff.😉..amazing😃...awwh poor Arnie baby:(😭


😛😛😛 Need a tissue dear? 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: supriya.ipkknd


😛😛😛 Need a tissue dear? 😳


😆...lol yesss😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
though this part was short i still LOVED IT! you have to continue. 
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love your other FF and I am sure to love this one too !!!
It sounds really interesting !
I am eager to read on !!!
Please update soon !
Lots of love,
Manal