Will you be mine? ||Kriyaansh FF||*part 12- pg139* - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: pradeep_maurya

Hey its nice concept please pm when u update


thnx, i m glad oyu liked the concept, will pm you as soon as i update..

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

amazing concept...please continue and pm me for the update


thank you so much for ur comments!
i m glad you liked the concept..and i'll update asap and pm you

Originally posted by: crazysky

nice concept 
plz pm me wenever u update


thnx fr ur comments! will defintely pm you..

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

plz pm me when u update


yeah sure! i'll you..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: star_2012

nice concept...

please update soon and pm me...xxx


thnx! i am glad you liked the concept..
i'll be updating ina few mintues...
and will fr sure pm you..


yes, dear! i'll pm you fr sure...

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

hey nyc concept...pls cntinue n i hv send u request plss accept it n pm me


thnx fr ur comments! yes, i'll pm you and have accept ur request..



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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnx a ton! :)

Originally posted by: 21Neha21

nice concept...lovd it..


thank you dear..i am glad you liked it..

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha

Its really a nice update.Pls pm me wen ever u update...


thnx a ton snigdha! i am glad you liked it and will definitely pm you..


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Originally posted by: PD_puja

Awesome concept...luvd d intro...plz do pm me wenevr u update d frst chapter...wud luv 2 read it...:)


thnx a lot for ur comments! :)
i am glad you liked the concept...
and i'll be updating in a few minutes and will definitely pm you dear...

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

love the concept can u plz pm me when u update and thanks for the link to this in the d3 forum


thnx a lot fr ur comments Shivu! :) i am glad you liked it..and will pm you for sure..and yeah i gave d link in d3 forum as the ff is of d3 and i thought i could share it wid you all...

Originally posted by: asmaju

Lovely intro. plz pm me wen u update.


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Originally posted by: -bornalee-

nice concept...do pm me wenever u update it :)


thank you so much fr ur comments! 
i am rily happy to know that you liked it..
will pm you fr sure...

Originally posted by: aditi061

Hi surbhi! Gr8 concept ... Plz update the nxt part soon n do pm me...


Hi aditi! thnx a ton fr ur comments...i am glad you liked it..
updating in a few minutes and will definitely pm you..
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an update is on the way..
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Part 1

"Vicky! Please I want to go back home. Frankly, I don't like this jarring music. It is just sheer nonsense. So, I'll take your leave." Reyaansh announced when Vicky had been constantly pestering  him at the most amazing and lively club of Delhi.

Reyaansh detested the vehement music where you can't even talk to anybody properly and the dance floor is always overcrowded by crazy non-dancer lot. So, he preferred chilling out in his pad, watch some movies or chat on facebook which were according to him much better options to relax yourself than clubbing.

"Come on Rey! Just stay for a while. It's been just an hour, you'll definitely enjoy. Come on lets dance"replied his one and only good friend Vicky who was like a brother to him.

"Dance?" questioned Reyaansh while eyeing the overcrowded dance floor where people were actually pushing each other, making their way and trying to find a spot to shake a leg.

Vicky pulled Rey into the crowd and could finally find a place for them.

"Rey! Check out that girl in red! She is super hot" exclaimed Vicky.

Rey looked in the direction at which Vicky was pointing and saw a girl dancing like it was the last night she could get to dance. She was an amazing dancer, her moves, the way she moves her body, her medium sized hair which would move here and there and of course her short red halter neck dress looked gorgeous on her. He couldn't help himself admiring her dance moves and smiled looking at her so engrossed in dancing alone so madly.

The girl approached him and Rey was taken aback by her sudden gesture while she started dancing with him. Dancing with her was undoubtedly the best moment for Rey this evening. He tried to make a conversation with her but she couldn't listen anything due to the loud music. He pulled her out of the crowd away from the noise so that they could talk to each other.

"You are an incredible dancer!" Rey complimented.

"I know that." She replied plainly.

"Ok, hi am'."

Before he could complete, a called called the girl from the back and pulled her through her waist and brought her closer to his well built body.

"Come on, let's dance" he tried to pull her to the dance floor.

Somehow, Rey didn't find it right and could sense that they guy didn't have any good intentions and felt the urge to protect that girl and pulled her back saying that she shouldn't dance with strangers.

"I danced with you too. Even you are a complete stranger to me." She replied.

"But, he doesn't seem right. Come, I'll drop you home." Rey offered.

Rey eyed the entire club for Vicky and finally got a glimpse of him. He was chatting with a girl and they seemed to be enjoying each other's company. He didn't wish to disturb him and so pulled the girl out of the club with him.

"Hey!" she stopped him.

"When did I say I want to leave?" she continued.

"But you neither said that you want to stay back." He smirked.

"Oye! Zyada smart banana ki koshish mat karo..."

Before he could reply, the girl tripped and was just about to fall back when Rey's strong arms caught hold of her and he lifted her up and carried her to his car. She was just staring at his captivating eyes. She didn't neither stopped him nor asked him to put her down. She was just gazing at his eyes intently.

Rey placed her on the seat and asked about her address. After a long though she replied.

"Mujhe yaad nai hai" was all she could say.

"What? Drunk hone pe memory loss bhi ho jata hai kya?" he chuckled.

"Joke tha? Hahahahaha'!" she gave a fake laugh.

"Ok, whatever, where do I drop you then?"

"Take me to your place"

"What?" he asked bewildered.

"Kitna what? What? Karte ho.." she chuckled.

"Aur kahaan jayenge? I'll be fine till tomorrow and then you can drop me home" she answered nonchalantly.

"Tum humesha aise kissi stranger ke ghar chaali jati ho?"

"Excuse me! Let me clarify you that this is the first time I drunk as it is customary, since I broke up with my boyfriend.

"Oh, but why? If you don't mind me asking?"

"I didn't like his haircut. He looked pathetic in that."

"What? You broke with a guy because you didn't like his haircut?"

"Phirse what?" she giggled.

"Of course I broke up with him because of this, don't you realize how serious it is?"

"No. I don't think a bad haircut could ever be the reason for a breakup, Miss?"

"Kriya, Kriya Ghai."

"Yeah, Miss Kriya"

"And, this is Reyaansh Singhania"

"Hmm.. ..nice to meet you Reyaansh" she replied.

"Ok, so coming back to the point, I am a complete stranger to you and you want me to drop you at my place? What if I take advantage of your condition?"

"You won't" she replied firmly as if she really knew Rey inside out.

"And what makes you say that?"

"Because, you aren't the advantage type"

"The, I am which type?"

Her next move really shocked him. She came near him and planted a soft and gentle kiss on his cheek.

"You are the respect for women type" she answered.

The kiss really had an impact on Rey. A girl he had met hardly 30 minutes back was now in his car, she just pecked him and he was driving her to his place. That was implausible!

After a while, it became all silent in the car. He was concentrating more on driving and she was fast asleep. He reached home, picked her up in his arms, being very careful so as not to disturb her sleep and placed her softly on the large bed of his two bedroom apartment.

He placed a blanket on her and wished her good night. He stood there for a while contemplating her and adoring her the same time.

"You are beautiful'" he said silently.

He switched off the lights and was about to leave but stepped back and planted a soft kiss on her forehead. He didn't know why he did that, but just did it because he felt like doing it.

He changed his clothes and crashed into his bead after texting Vicky that he was back home. However, Rey couldn't sleep, he was just thinking about today's evening and his thoughts were centred around Kriya, when he first saw her, the dance, the way he picked her up in his arms and she broke up with her boyfriend because she didn't like her haircut? Hilarious.

"You are too innocent Kriya" he murmured.

And lastly he thought about that unexpected kiss which she placed on his cheek.

"Come on Rey! Go to sleep now'." He told himself.

Finally, he could sleep peacefully with a huge smile on his face.

 

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Ok, so how was it? Plzz leave your comments and do hit the like tab, thanks to all of you for all those wonderful comments. The next chapter shall be updated by next week.

 

 

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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was so cute...

loved the spontaneous kriya...

plz update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb..😊
I loved it to d core...❀️
U r really a gud writer..πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kriyansh24

it was so cute...

loved the spontaneous kriya...

plz update asap


Vaishu!!!!
I thought I wud b d first commentor but u took my place!!!Cheating!!!πŸ˜•