My first story about virman part 13 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
i read all ur parts together .. it was ausumn
please cont soon and please pm me wen u update next
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
wel if u ask me den i never tel u 2 stop n
realy nxt part is intrestng so cntinue sun n plz made dat part
long.
manvi teach her lesson wow superb i loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
very very nice update...keep waiting!!!!;-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Wow that was nice please PM me as soon as you update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
argh!!! do update soon and tell us what this vivek person's story is... how he knows manvi and such!!!
nice update though... I loved how manvi just blew maya outta the water! lol... thanks for the PM 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Next part

Maanvi:Why are you looking at me like that...?
Virat:Like what...?
Maanvi:Like as if you are going to eat me...
Virat:Sorry baba are you now going to tell me whats wrong with you or not...
Maanvi became silence again...
Maanvi:Why should i tell you its not like your my husband or boyfriend...(teasing him)
When Maanvi said this she again felt that sharp pain and so did virat it was like someone was stabbing them right through their hearts...
Virat:I...i...i may not be your husband or boyfriend but im still your partner...
Maanvi:And...
Virat:Therefore i have every right to know...
Maanvi:Really..?
Virat:(Getting eager to know)Tell me now or I'm going back to the party...
Maanvi:Okay okay okay i'll tell you now...
She goes on to tell him the story...
Maanvi:You know Vivek...?
Virat:My boss..?
Maanvi:Yes him..well 2 years ago we were both dating each other just like you and maya were...Well i thought he loved me truly but i was wrong he was just after his dreams...But then before i knew all that i heard him talking on the phone to someone...

***Flashabck***
Vivek:Yes sir i understand...yes...
Man:look if you want to work for me im sorry then there must be no reltionships going on or they will ruin or dreas...
Vivek:Sir im not in any reliationship...
Man:Are you sure...?
Vivek:Yes sir im sure there has never benn anyone in my life and never will be...
Man:That what i like to hear...start work o thursday and we shall continue then okay...
Vivek:Yes sir...
Vivek:Maanvi darling...Maanvi...!
I ran towards my room and pretend to read a magazine...
Vivek:There you are...
Maanvi:Yes i here im not going anywhere...
Vivek:Darling i was thinking about our relationship that maybe we should pretend to break up but have a secret elation ship...
Maanvi:Why...?
Vivek:Dont ask me why...
Maanvi:But why do you hav to ontrol everything its like im your puppet...
Vivek:Yes your are and will always be if anyone tries to touch you they wil be my first enemy...
Maanvi:Im not having any relationships with you from today on we dont know each other...
Vivek:Maanvi...!
He slapped Maanvi by mistake which made Maanvi leave the house in pain...

***Reality***
Maanvi:And now he is back and asking me to forgive him...but how can anyone forgive such a mental person...
Virat was just staring at her and all he wanted to do was hug her and tell her she is safe with him...
Virat:(in his thought)..I will never allow anyone to come near you are take advantage of you..never this is my promise...
Maanvi:Virat!? What wrong with you...?
Virat:Nothing but right now i feel like breaking his head...
Maanvi:Virat you will not do anything...
Virat:But Maanvi...
Maanvi:Why are so you protective of me its not like he is gonna hit me again...
Virat was now quiet...
Virat:(Thinking himself)..What wrong with me...when she is in pain why do i feel the pain and get all worked up when she tells me things like this...why whats is wrong with me...?
Maanvi:Please dont tell anyone...
Virat:Fine for your sake i wont say a word to anyone...
Maanvi:Promise...
Virat:Promise...I shall also quit the job...
Maanvi:Virat please dont do anything stupid..
Virat:I wont but i wont be able to work with him either...
Maanvi:Fine virat but make sure that you wont regret it either...
Virat:I know i won't...
They stand there and stare at each other for 5 minutes or more and at the same time virat feels like hugging Maanvi until she feels safe and secure...While they are staring into each others eyes they don't realise that Vivek is stood there listening to their conversation...

Shall try to continue soon...
I know all of you don't want Vivek here, but the problem is almost over.
Just wait and watch
khusam thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
dat was realy cool yaar
updt soon n pm me
wel thanq fr d pm dear. 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Superb but its too short kanjoos nah kariyo...
Loved the way virat wanted to break his head to be honest i would love to see that nazaara and how dare the bast*** slap maanvi...
Virat is always wiv maanvi cant wait til virman realise their love for each other...
Please pm me when u continue and do make it more longer
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
yay! vivek's story finally comes out... i had thought he'd be a sleazy ex and i was right! lol...
waiting for the next part! and thanks or the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
plzz update more very interesting

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