ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148 - Page 45

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flora212 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow anji superb! NO WORDS TO EXPLAIN! Really man, u hv described every line beautifully.
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Posted: 12 years ago

its party time !!!!!i want a party !!!party Birthday Cake !!!haha smiley ๐Ÿ˜†
my best buddy anjali kab itne badi ho gai pata hi nahi challa ๐Ÿ˜†...aaj wo ek ff writer hai party๐Ÿ˜†
yuppee dil dosti aur ff haha !!!!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...
great update !!!!!!
for your ff that you are a ff writter now sorry superb ff writter haha ๐Ÿ˜†
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btw ff is awesome but without romance embracemazza nahi aaye acctually you know i am a kind of besharam !!!haha๐Ÿ˜†...please update i am egerly waiting to read more !!!๐Ÿ˜†(dil maange more )haha๐Ÿ˜†i am loving itโค๏ธ !!!not burgersalad your update ๐Ÿ˜†ttyl๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 12 years ago
So now Abhay is trying to run away from Pia or is he trying to get over her. It was an amazing part which showed the inner turmoil of Abhay. Though he is a dark character and villan there still seems to be some hopw. And Pia is all the more determined only hope she doesn't burn herself in the process.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update anji !!!

you describe very well !!!
abhay confuse between heart and mind !!!
but he is realizing that he has some sort feeling toward pia !!!
pia stop abhay hurting girl but  she doesn't stop  him hurting those couple !!!
now real game begun lets see who win this game !!!
continue soon !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Anji that was a fabulous update yaar๐Ÿ‘ had u written some ff or ss or os before ? just loved d update ๐Ÿ˜Š 
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Posted: 12 years ago
diya- thanku sweetie๐Ÿ˜Š. aww, your words made me smile. Pehle baar you wrote a comment without badmashi๐Ÿ˜†
 
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Flora- thanks patner๐Ÿ˜Š. Glad you liked it!
 
Prerna- itna lamba comment!!! thankyou for that! ๐Ÿ˜†
 
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pkyekfanclub- no I havent written any FF or ss before. Glad you liked it!๐Ÿ˜Š
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
tht part was superb
well written anjali...
abhiya scene was awsome when abhay tried to attack a girl..
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the update Anji... .. Abhay's hallucination & the way he runs away from there  was heart wrenching. He doesn't want to  believe that he is in love with her... & the craving for the blood has brought back the monster in him . Its written wonderfully...Piya's  expression & Abhay's reaction to it is Rocking.
Posted: 12 years ago
very nice and amazing story always 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Anjali it too good yaar. loved it.