ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148 - Page 44

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WoW..Anji..wat a marvellous update !!! Loved it to d core...!!! 👏 [<3]

'His mind & heart had been fighting a battle of their own.'

'...he would fight back,fight to tame the monster'

' The sigh was so overbearingly painful...the monster immediately vanished...sharp pangs of pain nw stabbing at hs heart.' Though the entire update ws brilliant, bt these were the lines..whch i lovd d most..!!! [<3] 😳

Abhay's inner turmoil..hs agitation ws shown brilliantly!! 👏

'There was no way this cud be love.' ...no doubt,it will take tym fr hm to decipher the emotions tht ws forbidden by hm long tym ago..!!! 😕

'He wont let her win for long.' abhay - ' I''ll make you mine very soon piya.'

'Abhay Raichand,you will nt kill again! I will nt let you!'

umm...so abhay and piya, bth are ready fr the war...lets see who wins!!! 😊 The story is gettng more n more intrstng n thrillng day by day...!! Cnt wait fr more... 😃

And anji i really didnt knw tht you are such an awesome writer!!! 😃 Seriously you shud start your own ff..!!

P.s. Thx fr d pm ayesha..awaitng d nxt update...



Tcr... Anji.. 😳

-Indu Edited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago

great update hope abhay reforms soons

Ayesha thanks so much for your lovely and amazing up date thanks for pm ...waiting for next up date 

anji i loved the update. It was truely awesome..abhay's turmoil was described beautifully!

very nice up date ...nice story 

Ronee- thankyou for your appreciation. You are an amazing writer yourself. I tried my best to capture the emotions of Abhay and Piya and do justice to this amazing FF Edited by anjali.K - 12 years ago

comment updated on pg no. 61😊

WOW teacher !!!!😆😆 ur update is so so good!!!!
next time pls thoda or...😃

i love to read how u write filling of both angle and evil!!!!!!!!😳👏👏

Edited by cccppp - 12 years ago

I have jst one wrd- BEAUTIFUL!!

awesome update anji...👏