Tuze bhula diya updated part10 - Page 21

dis is such a touching story...love it.😍

i... loved... Edited by d3rockks - 12 years ago

Its amazing...very very well written...pls update soon

Thanks Rey for giving me a hope that I could get you back. You truly kept your promise to be always there for me. A little tap on my shoulder that expressed your heart still beats for me. It was just that your brain had missed the way to your heart. But don't worry Rey, I'll do that for you. I'll take your heart all the way to your brain to realise you that you are only mine.. You'll realise that soon Rey..


WOoowww 👏
juzzz luvlyy lines these where!!!:):)
i loved it alott!!:):)
nd part too was awesomee!!!:):)
plzzz update sooonn!!!
and thanxx for PM!!:)
an sooo sorry for late comments!!:S:S:S:)

yaar hope ki jo bhi kriya ne kaha rey ko acha laga hai (crossing fingers! )

Originally posted by: IndianBollywood

this is a really good update and its something good for me to read after coming back from a boring day at school and thanks for the pm :D

Originally posted by: smshaffy-mehta

prerna i m waiting vry despiratly for ur ff...n OMG wht a update...dammm u killed mee

firstly what a song selection...perfect according to situation...dis song show da stry of kriya n his emotions

n den rey...OMG...OMG... he sooo sweet dis tym...he is noticing his BAATCUTTER...awww...he is jst droling his laughter n loves his laughter...sooo cute

"but she is cute... weirdly cute...
actually cutely weird..." awww dese lines r jst sooo cute n my fav in whole part

thnk uuu sooo mch 4 sch a lovly part...n 4 pm also...n plsss nxt part thoda jaldi post kr dio...coz wait ni hota mjhse tera ff padne ke liye...

Originally posted by: tish18

dis is such a touching story...love it.😍

Originally posted by: Winz

Its amazing...very very well written...pls update soon

Originally posted by: d3rockks

i... loved...

it...👏 👏