AshNi FF:LOVESTRUCK complete;LOST IN LOVE Ch1to24 - Page 2

@yanks: thank uuu sooo much!! I really needed to hear that!!!🤗
COming up soon: PArt 4.:AShu .. what do you'll think it'll b3 like??

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett

@yanks: thank uuu sooo much!! I really needed to hear that!!!🤗
COming up soon: PArt 4.:AShu .. what do you'll think it'll b3 like??

  personally in my fanfics...(the ones i wrote previously)...the male point of view is bolder...😳 i think Ashu is bottling up all his desires for her...so he must be thinking of her a lot...☺️😉

it was really fabulous Lizzie hope the writers show us unintentionally passionate moments like these😍

its wonderful...
update soon

OHHH MY GODDD that was SO spicy hot!!!!!!!🤪 His point of view is definitely hotter...poor guy...she has no idea what she's doing to him...it's really sexy...his feelings when she's on top of him...his desire to kiss her...hold her...😍.whew...maybe I need a cold shower now...☺️ you write beautifully and it's very descriptive...and it's really hot without being vulgar...<3 it...great work.

This is absolutely superb!! You write beauitfully Lizzie and I van totally imagine both of their facial expressions in all these parts! Cannot wait for the next installment but does it have to be the last part :(((

Originally posted by: yanks28

OHHH MY GODDD that was SO spicy hot!!!!!!!🤪 His point of view is definitely hotter...poor guy...she has no idea what she's doing to him...it's really sexy...his feelings when she's on top of him...his desire to kiss her...hold her...😍.whew...maybe I need a cold shower now...☺️ you write beautifully and it's very descriptive...and it's really hot without being vulgar...<3 it...great work.

Yanks, yes it was a challenge to make it HOT n SEXY without it being vulgar. Thanks so much for your words of appreciation!😃😳

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett

Yanks, yes it was a challenge to make it HOT n SEXY without it being vulgar. Thanks so much for your words of appreciation!😃😳

 
 hmmm  yes I know what a challenge that can be...I have written abt 12 fanfics all thoegether...ppl demand hotness😉 but i need to find a way to make it tasteful at the same time...it's tough😆😆😆