FF: Bandhan - Ch14 - pg 60 (31/3)

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indu_shah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

great suspense awaiting for us...this is altogether a diff perspective...ahem has a child already and he thinks and plans for his brothers happiness..loving and caring ahem...def not seen earlier..lovely ff..

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-Eris-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Awesome update nazma.i want to know about ahem s past.add me to ur pm list

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uamaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Great development to your story... can't wait for Ahem to be dazzled by Gopi as Garv was previously... that Urmi really needs a kick up her backside, maybe little Garv good do it innocently 😆

Please add me to your PM list 😊

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hana_y

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

the love of ahem and garv is very pure i love it that mean anita is garv mother come soon yaar cant wait to long

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Vrinda....

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

very nice one dear
loved it

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Nazma

@NazmaJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: taniks
Ooh I loved it , the closeness between ahem and garv is beautifully displayed ,ahem s character is much softer around garv and u portrayed so well as an hands on parent.sad that part of ahem is buried in his memories that helped put up a shield around him , how will gopi work her magic to bring down that barrier? Smart move having him think gopi is a child cos the moms have him at a disadvantage the surprise element will be their greatest weapon in order to put their plan into action.wonderfully written, ur amazing at setting up the stage for the great meet , you have captured my attention , awaiting with anticipation for next instalment. What words can do justice in its desciption of ur ability to transport ur viewers into the scene and capture ur their attention

😳Aww your comments always make me blush!! Thankyou so much!!

I tried to show that Ahem loves his son, so he's not completely closed off from love.

As for my smart move I actually didn't think about it, it just came to mind as I was writing this part.

Stage setting I can do!! We'll have to see if I can pull of the meeting with any great panache!!

Hopefully I can do justice to your expectations!!

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Nazma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad
wonderful update nazma...

wow loving this bandhan a lot... Ahem-Garv such cute scenes...
now more intrigued abut ahem's past and gopi's memories,,,, do they have any connection...

and lets see how ahem and gopi will be brought into a Bandhan

Thanks Munni!!

I'm so happy you're loving Bandhan!!

Now you know I can't reveal anything about the story (mostly because I don't have a clue what I'm going to write until i do!!😆)

It's a waiting game!!!

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Nazma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: navyab
Liked it Nazma...it is wonderful...

Will Ahem be able to handle 2 children 😉 we now have the background of both the families...what is the past that Ahem is carrying with him !!!

Thanks Navya!!

Yeah the background is basically done, next I will be delving into Ahem's past!!

Ahem can handle anything!!

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Nazma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: indu_shah
great suspense awaiting for us...this is altogether a diff perspective...ahem has a child already and he thinks and plans for his brothers happiness..loving and caring ahem...def not seen earlier..lovely ff..

Thankyou!!

He is a lot more caring but doesn't like to show his family too much. So he's still closed off!!

But we'll see a softer Ahem with Garv for now!!