Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai~FINALY UPDATED 04/24!! - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
congratz Trish! those are awesum grades! btw- if u dont mind me askin- wat grade r u in?
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Posted: 18 years ago
7th grade..junior high
*Trisha*
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Posted: 18 years ago
CONGRATS FOR YR GRADES I READ ALL THE PARTS THEY ARE AWESOME CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: iqbal_trisha25

7th grade..junior high
*Trisha*

im in 7th grade 2! 

LUB,

Prakriti๐Ÿ˜Š 

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Posted: 18 years ago
great job yaar..that was lovely..continue sooon...i told u this will go great!
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Posted: 18 years ago
next part coming in a couple of minutes!!!
*Trisha*
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 4:
Angad follows kripa into their room.
A:Kya hua kripa...bhaagi kyon?
K:uh...kuch nahin...tum party mein jaon naa mein baad mein aati hoon...
A:i am going..

Angad slowly goes down the stairs and kripa just starts to walk out of her room. Kripa was just about to go down stairs when she saw angad talking to a girl. Kripa hid behind a pole and listened to their conversation. The girl was simone.
A: hey simone!
S:hi angad..
A:may I ask for a dance?(angad knew kripa was nearby)
S:tumhe kya lagta?
A: obviously ya...any girl loves angad khanna
S:then chalein?
A:uh..ya

The song was Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai
S:wow!such a romantic song...
A:(thinking to himself)w/e yaar...but slowly moves closer to simone
K:(thinking to herself) who does he think is???woh mera pati hai

Kripa walks over to Neeraj (kyph's and elas's anuj)
K:Mere saath aap dance karenge?
N:Of course lekin ang..(he see's him dancing w/ simone)
N:ok chalein..
K:they start dancing and a song plays
DJ: it's a partner changing dance. Everybody get ready!!!
Angad and Kripa look at eachother for a couple of minutes and stare in anger...

A:(thinking to himself)what is this kripa? She's dancing with neeraj...
Angad walks over to Kripa grabs her sayz excuse me and puts her against a wall..where nobody is..a quiet area...

K:Kya kar rahein the..mein neeraj ke saath...
A:tum?neeraj ke saath kya?
K:mein...neeraj ke saath...hold on...tum jealous ho
A:Mein aur jealous..I don't think so!!
K:Ya u r
A:Well you were jealous of me and simone
K:Lekin mein kuch boli nahin
A:I could see it In ur eyes
K:woh...bas...
Angad gets closer to Kripa...koi faraq nahin partha...mein jealous aur tum jealous..
K:Mein jealous kabse..mein to...?
Angad cuts her off...goes real close to her both can feel eachother's breath..he kisses kripa on the neck and kripa goes 'angad tum bhi naa" and runs downstairs
A:forget it..just come w/ me

they go on the dance floor, and they see a dance competition going on..neeraj and simone were dancing and they were winning..
K:Kya tum simone ke saath dance karne wale theh..kyunki I think shez busy..
A:Woh mein tumhare bare mein bhi keh sakta hoon
K:yaa...but...
A:chalein?
K:kahan?
A:competition mein hisa lena hai..angad khanna khabi nahin harta
K:Kripa sharma bhi...haar uski dictionary mein bhi nahin hai
they both walk up to simone and neeraj..give them a cold stare...
The song from bunty aur babli.. Nach Baliye plays...
Angad and Kripa are dancing like crazy...people started saying that they were better than abhishek and rani..let alone neeraj and simone...
Angad starts dancing really close to kripa.

Kripa starts blushing like crazy...all of a sudden the music stops..
And Angad starts singing....
Soniye from Aksar...
Next thing u know u see angad and kripa singing together in a very romantic mood not caring what the people say...

At the end of the song Angad couldnt take it anymore...he leaned against kripa (she was at the dj requesting a song) and he kissed her on the lips..(everyone is still watching them and only them) Kripa not knowing what to do just let him kiss her..it didn't matter now..even though prithvi was sitting at the bar getting drunk(lmao) looking at them kissing eachother..kripa's parents knew as angad told them..and they had accepted..akhir mein do chahne walo ke beech koi aa sakta hai kya?
Kripa was running away from angad...angad was chasing kripa until all of a sudden they bump into prithvi..He has a weird glow in his eyez looking at angad in hatred...Angad and kripa not caring just said sorry and walked away!!!

Hope itna bura nahin tha...um...agar aap logon ko kuch ideaz ya kuch request karna ho tho pleaz just pm me..
Also..if u guyz r wondering y I always have songs and dj's and dances in my fanfic is because..my mom's a singer...(she's famous in Chicago) my dad's a dj.(he is also too and since we just had a huge valentines party...I kinda got the competion idea from this..)except instead of angad and kripa rocking the stage with all songs.. it was me and my cousin rocking the stage..though lolz...it wasnt a guy she was a girl and there was no kissing involved. it was my awesome kuzin EVA.(also..I wasnt able to post at 5 since..I had to go to my 7-11...(my mommy and daddy also own a 7-Eleven in chicago)..that was a little about me and thats kinda how the whole dance/singing thing came in...

*trisha** Edited by iqbal_trisha25 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
you're in 7th grade!!!!!!!! that fan-fic does not look like a 7th grader wrote it! it's really good, and congrats on your midterm!
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Posted: 18 years ago
sirf ek person ko accha laga?

*TRISHA*
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey we all lyk it dnt worry ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
plz cont