Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai~FINALY UPDATED 04/24!! - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
I would never separate AK...I don't think its even possible to split them up 😳 😳 😳
~trisha~
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Posted: 18 years ago
Next part coming in 5 minutes!!! The more comments I get the more I will get encouraged and the more I will right!!!So...here comes the next part.._TRISHA_ 😛 😉 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 2:
IN THE GARDEN>>>>     
K:Hey prithvi...
P:Hi..Kaisi hai meri Kripa..
K:Mein tumse kuch baat karna chaathi thi
P:Ya i am waitin...
Prithvi was a very impatient guy
K:uh....main....
P:uh..tum..
K:Main shaadi tod(break)rahi hoon!
P:KYA??tumhara dimaak (brain) karab ho gaya hai kya?
K:I am sorry prithvi..
Kripa walked out leaving prithvi crying..
AT SCHOOL>>>>
A:Kripa..
K:(not responding)
A:Um..kya tumne Prithvi se baat ki?
K:haan(then turned and faced mishti)
K:Chale Mishty?
M:Lekin...bhai...
A:Kripa kya tum mujhse pyar nahin karti?
K:karti hoon,,bohot karti hoon..lekin..
A:lekin kya?
M:Ab tum log chupp ho jaayenge?(by this time everybody was staring at them)
main kuch boolungi.
A and K: ji haan miss..boliye to..
M:main kripa ki best friend rite?
K:ya da..
M:main angad ki chotti sis rite?
A:obviously..come on get to the point
M:Tum dono ne mujhe bola ke mein kuch nahin bolo..lekin main to boloogi..
A and K: Yaar bolo naa...
M:Angad tumne mujhe kuch saalo (years) pehle kaha tha ke u love kripa..
And u kripa u told me that u loved angad..
A and K: what?
A:Kripa I really love you..please accept my love..
K:I love u too
AFTER SCHOOL>>>>
P:Angad why are u walking with Kripa..
A:uh..kyonki..kyon kii...

K:i love angad,prithvi...
P:I dont care..I don't loveYou but U R mine...no one else can have u..I always win
A;Uh..(whispering to kripa) I know prithvi loves u and if you are just
want to marry me because I love you let me tell its all on u...lekin main sirf or sirf tumhe hi pyar karoonga..mein jab tak shaadi nahin karooga jab tak tum nahin karti..lekin abhi to lagta hai jaise prithvi villain ho gaya
K:Prithvi hamari shaadi kab hone wali thi?
P:hone wali?honi hai...
K:whatever..but when?
P:tomorrow.
K:kya?
Matlab mujhe to koi choice bhi nahin hai
P:Milte hai kal shaadi ki mandap pe..
A:yeh kya bol gaya...kripa??yeh to koi filmi villain ka dialouge lagta hai...
Kripa walks out and leaves angad staring
AT HOME>>>>
Angad is watching Kaisa yeh pyar hai (LOLZ)and gets a call on his cell
Gayatri(G)
G:Kripa hai kya?
A:Kya?woh gaar nahin aayi
G:Nahin to..mujhe laga woh tumhare saath thi..
A:main abhi doondtha hoon
Angad calls mishty
A:mishty is KRIPA there?
M:NO..i thought she was with u...
A:Are..yaar doondo (look) use..
Angad had no other choice but to call prithvi..
A:Kya kripa hai?
P:No..I dont care about her..all I know is that shez mine..
A:go find her first..I am going crazy here and you don't care
P:w/e
IN THE CAR>>>>
Angad drives in his car and goes straight to the beach
he runs around and see's kripa staring at the ocean...
A:Kripa...
K:dont talk angad I love u too much..main us loser ko main nahin shaadi karne wali
abhi chalo...
A:Okay..I love u too..lekin mujhe kabhi chodd ke mat jaana..lekin kahaan jaana hai
agar prithvi ke ghar to mein aaonga mere dost se kuch baat karni hai..kya hak hai uska ke woh tujhse aise baat kare..milte hai mandap paar...idiot
K:nahin..seriously...hamein mandir mein abhi shaadi karni chaiye
A:Yeah...Abhi varnaa kal mein tumhe..prithvi ke saath dekhunga..
They go to the mandir..and get married.
Angad and Kripa go to a hotel since it was raining really hard.
A:Tumhe pata hai aaj kya hai?
K:Humari shaadi hue or kya?
A:aaj hamari suhaag raat hai..
K:oh woh mein..
She goes into the room and goes on the bed..
Angad follows...
Then he takes off all her jewelry piece by piece..
Kripa was feeling as if...it was the best day of her life
Angad kissed kripa on the neck and slowly started kissing her cheeks and then
kissed her on the lips for about 5 minutes. It was the most passionate kiss anyone had ever given.
K:choddo naa....
A:nahin choodonga...
K;lekin..
A:lekin kya kripa..
K:I love you so much..
A: me too
they kiss for a long time until they go under the sheets and the lights go off.
IN THE MORNING>>>>
angad wakes up..and see's kripa on him..with his shirt on ( a very long one)
kripa then wakes up and angad pretends he's asleep. She see's her lipstick ki nishaaniya all over angad..
A:kya dekh rahi ho kripa..
K:tum khud dekhlo
A:oh my god...lagta hai tum kal raat paagal ho gayi thi..
K:woh mein..tum..hum...
A:interupting kripa..I love u too baby
K:me too..
They both go take a shower and angad see's kripa getting ready
Angads walks up to kripa and see's her smiling..he smiles and says you look beautiful
K:dont i always
K:but angad nobody knows we are married..kab baatayenge.
A:aaj raat ek party rakhenge..tik hai
K:thanks angad.
They decide to go to the mall, and while they're shopping prithvi is spying on them and taking pictures.
What is Prithvi up too? Will this happiness last???
*Trisha*
The more comments I get the more encouraged I will get which will make me help me write more...
Thanks 😛 😊 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOW!! i just read the whole thing!! u've got a nice story going on there keep it up!!
i'll wait for the next part
lots of luv and suar
Hina
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Posted: 18 years ago
i luv this story, its so fast! Nice story line! cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wow!!!!!!!!!!! interesting!!! continue soon, i am waiting
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Posted: 18 years ago
I will continue after school after i finish my hmwk...which is around 5 or 5:30...thanks for the comments...i would update earlier but school!!! 😡 😡 😡 ....i'll continue soon
😊 😊 😊           
trisha
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Posted: 18 years ago

I have been writing really big parts as they were the first part but i will shorten up the parts a bit now...sryy... 😭

Angad and Kripa were having a lot of fun...
AT THE SCENE
A:Kya yeh dress lena hai?
Angad was showing her a backless shirt with a mini skirt
K:Kya paagal ho gaye ho...
A:Jii haan tumhare pyar mein (kitna filmi laga naa) Mujhe pata hai the only reason you arnt buying that dress is because u cant...
K:what u mean mr. angad khanna?i can do anything....
A:...wear it...
K:but...I...
A:come on' kripa
K:fine 😡
Kripa comes out of the dressing room looking gorgeous
A:Wow u look beautiful
K:thanx
Kripa and Angad hug..
Prithvi takes a picture..
P:this picture is perfect...
A and K
Angad buyz the outfit and they walk out
A:Aaj raat mere ghar pe party hai
hamare liye..u know..where i will announce that i love u and u love me and therez no prithvi
K:ok..lekin kya penoongi(wear)
A:the outfit i bought for u today
K:no way...i will look like a kareena kapoor 😆 (K3G__sorry kareena fans it just went with the story)
A:uh...wear a sari
K:ok..
AT THE PARTY...
Angad comes out of the shower and looks at kripa...
A:wow...
K:Aisa kya dekh rahe ho?
A:u look great..
K:how many times have u said this already?
A:uh..too many but u r so pretty
K:thanx
Angad and Kripa walk downstairs together
everybody is shocked..as prithvi..and damini were both there...(naina and dilip already knew but didnt care)
P:What is this?
A:Kya baat kar rahein ho?
P:Kya Hindi mein bolu? 😆
A:Haan..please..
K:angad...get to the point
A:everybody(takes the mike and starts talking)
A:Mein Angad Khanna ne MS.Kripa Sharma se shaadi karli hai
K:Ji haan..mein miss kripa sharma angad ki patni hoon
D:Beta..kaisi baatein kar rahi ho?(telling kripa)
A:Koi kuch nahin bolega..aur yeh party hamari reception hai to enjoy everybody!!!
ANGAD PRITHVI KRIPA MISHTI NAINA AND DAMINI TALK
P:Kripa what is all this crap?
K:what???crap...this is love prithvi...
mere pyar mein tumne to insaaniat kho di..
woh kya dialouge mara...uh...
A:jo bhi bola tha..filmi tha..aur bahut villanous tha..u cant do that to kripa...
P:w/e..mein tumhe chain se jeene nahin doonga
Everybody enjoys the party except for prithvi..damini
A:chalein dance kare
K:ya
The song JHALAK DHIKLAJA plays
they dance..angad asks the dj to play a special song
they play LAGI LAGI
angad and kripa slow dance...
angad slowly starts kissing kripa's cheeks..and kripa being a nayee dulhan..starts blushing and goes to her room
Angad follows....

will continue soon..please comment n request what i should change or pm me and give me an idea or something that could help me write this fanfic...

aap logon ki apni
**trisha**
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Posted: 18 years ago
kisi ko acha nahin laga...
koi comments bhi nahin hai
..............
pata hai burra tha...lekin itna bhi burra nahin tha
😭 😭 😭
)))Trisha)))
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG...
this is a fab story...
too good yaar...
i just love it...😊
plz cont. soon...
and don't cry ppl will reply...
keep smilin...😃
👏