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Originally posted by: sharneil92
nice retort! like really.. brought a smile to my face! 😆...*mumbles and grumbles something incoherent about stupid IPK rules.*😡
Well, ain't that MY forte?!
Originally posted by: sharneil92
nice retort! like really.. brought a smile to my face! 😆...*mumbles and grumbles something incoherent about stupid IPK rules.*😡
He knew tonight was the night. He had heavy security, but deep inside he knew that wouldn't help. His opponent was too cunning.
The past had informed him about the modus operandi of the game but this time, the game has also changed for the worse just like the opponent who has become more wily and deadlier. The Hunters are at the height of their powers, the Gatherer has to sharpen his wits to counter their darker intentions
Since he didn't even where to look for the key. Since he didn't even know what key he was looking for. Since he didn't even know what and who the heck he was looking for. Fate's just been plain cruel to him.
Lack of knowledge had created havoc as is reflected in this flashback where he was unable to save somebody dear to him. This time round he is better prepared and equipped to face the Hunters and defeat them in their game. Though it's an uphill task, it's not completely hopeless in the modern era for him.
"Every search for a hero must begin with something which every hero requires - a villain - Mr Mallik."
So the hunt for the Hunters has begun. It's result lies in the hands of destiny. So the hero and villains have been introduced through thoughts, words and actions. A fantastic First Chapter.
Originally posted by: arnavforever
Again an awesome update. There should have been a word for "flawless"?
Where do you get this perfection from???????????😉One emotion:⭐️PS: my name is Sidra, and i think u forgot, but u r in my pm list!
Originally posted by: sharneil92
YUP! 😳 and i'm glad it is. 😳P.S. GUYS! ME UPDATING AGAIN IN A COUPLE OF HOURS!!! 😃
He acknowledges and knows his pain. He hasn't shied away from it, but at the same time, he accepts that he is stronger physically than emotionally. He knows that emotional pain is a weakness.
It seems that he is accepting the fact that previously he had no control over the situation, but this time he's much more aware of whats happening.
He knows whats going on. Mentally, he's very alert and even ready. However, he seems to be lacking the means to be able to deliver. He's prepared, but he knows that the opponent is also prepared.
He accepts the existence of his foe. However, that doesn't mean he's happy with it!!
Above all else, he's sure of himself, sure of who he is and wants to make it clear! He is Arnav Singh Raizada. He's not forgotten anything, in fact he doesn't want to or can't forget it. He's using it to move ahead...letting it not be a weakness, but making it a strength! He knows that ultimately, he will reach his goal.
A fab start, as expected. Looking forward to the next part.Originally posted by: anita_21492
i am so excited for the first chapter and it was amazing...i like all the elements you added and the explaination of the end is making me more excited
so you better update soon and thanks for the pm
Shalu!!Hey zeba! 😳You promised quite the chapter, and you sure have delivered! So much so that I'm a bit unsure about where to begin. Lets try from the start! I did copy the chapter into this, but it became way too long, so I've kept it to just my comment.He acknowledges and knows his pain. He hasn't shied away from it, but at the same time, he accepts that he is stronger physically than emotionally. He knows that emotional pain is a weakness.
⭐️ which is why, Arnav's gonna play this "game" using as less emotions as he can. but whether he'll succeed, in the game and not using emotions, now THAT is the question.
He's trying to be in control, but only just succeeding. He can still sense the underlying problems and pain, both personally and professionally.⭐️It seems that he is accepting the fact that previously he had no control over the situation, but this time he's much more aware of whats happening.
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He knows whats going on. Mentally, he's very alert and even ready. However, he seems to be lacking the means to be able to deliver. He's prepared, but he knows that the opponent is also prepared.
⭐️
He accepts the existence of his foe. However, that doesn't mean he's happy with it!!
Above all else, he's sure of himself, sure of who he is and wants to make it clear! He is Arnav Singh Raizada. He's not forgotten anything, in fact he doesn't want to or can't forget it. He's using it to move ahead...letting it not be a weakness, but making it a strength! He knows that ultimately, he will reach his goal.
⭐️
A fab start, as expected. Looking forward to the next part.Love and hugs.you're a genius zeba! i LOVE how you've gotten it right! check your PM please! i've sent a snippet of my next chapter AS A TREAT! 😳love, shalu.
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