Must say ... this is a wonderful story you have weaved! and your style is impeccable! and the entire bit is so eloquently written that ... i am totally drawn towards it!
I look fwd for you to continue writing the story! :)
Could you please send me your blog link. I really want to read your other stories.
Have just read Hunters and Gatherer and have loved it... ...the story as much as your comments before and after the chapters! You have a great way with words - painting the most evocative pictures.