creative thrd:The maze of love v/s evil,note@pg154 - Page 90

Originally posted by: sindu555

  

 

 

Sigh ... kya keron mein tera Jalebi .. aik to aisi herkat ooper se cuty faces and request...   ye emotional atyachaar hai    .. sigh .. theek hai but u're going to bed after reading this update .. no more sneaking around

Originally posted by: Viji79

Super cool. Why did you hesitate in the first place?

Originally posted by: Nazmaa

Okay here it is..

Okay please tell me if it was shit...

my brain has stopped working all of a sudden..

so it may be crap... i think i made him into a beast instead of making him jealous..

It may be crap lol  ... 😆

but someone's going to take over after me its good

 

Part 28 I think??

 

Geet looked at him and felt bad.. he came all this way to meet her and all she did was push him away... she knew how hurt he must have felt.. no-one pushed maan singh khurana away, he was most loved by all girls and well everyone wanted him.. She was determined to not let him win... she wanted to forget everything but couldn't now that he was there... She went to bed...

The next day...

Geet decided to have some fun today.. she thought it was time to make maan edsuffer just like she had when she saw him in That churails  arms... she rang yash nd told him her plan.. yash knew everything about geet and he was always there for her... Geet rang meera and told her the plan also and told her to bring dev and maan... meera agreed..

later that day Geet was at taj with well yash.. they got everything ready and waited for maan and the gang to arrive.. meera, dev and maan had arrived..

"Geet vo log aagaya" He said excitedly..

"Sach?" she asked..

"Haab" he replied..

"Well Get On That Stage Then.." she pushed him..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oZ16SrkgdXE&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

The light went off and the mini lights were on for effect...  Maan, Meera and Dev were sat on the table opposite the stage where they got full view... Then one spotlight came in the centre of the stage revealig Yash...

Yash:
Hai mirchi
Ooh ooh mirchi
Uff uff mirchi
Fuff fuff mirchi

Chorus:
Hai hai mirchi
Ooh ooh mirchi
Uff uff mirchi
Fuff fuff mirchi
Hai hai mirchi

Maan was already bored... He hated his kind of enviroment... He wanted to go and talk to Geet but meera had other plans.. He couldn't upset Her After everything that had already happened..

Yash:
Ho teri leher buri, teri zehr buri
Teri leher buri, teri zehr buri
Teri leher buri, teri zehr buri
Ladgayi dil pe hai hai mirchi hoi

Chorus:
Hai hai mirchi
Ooh ooh mirchi
Uff uff mirchi
Fuff fuff mirchi
Hai hai mirchi

Yash:
Teri leher buri, teri zehr buri
Teri leher buri, teri zehr buri
Ladgayi dil pe hai hai mirchi hoi

Hai hai mirchi
Ooh ooh mirchi
Uff uff mirchi
Fuff fuff mirchi
Hai hai mirchi

Just then another Spotlight wen towards the light.. There was a girl in a white sari with her hair down dancing with her back towards the audience.. Maan had a sudden feeling that Geet was somewhere near.. He could sense her.. he looked around but saw no geet... he looked at the stage and at the same time Geet turned around...

Yash:
Badi alhur teri javani hai
Theeki theeki nadani hai
Badi alhur teri javani hai
Theeki theeki nadani hai
Hoton pe meri tu khoob lari hoi hoi
Hoton pe meri tu khoob lari
Tu ne rakh diya haath mere dil pe hoi

Chorus:
Hai hai mirchi
Ooh ooh mirchi
Uff uff mirchi
Fuff fuff mirchi
Hai hai mirchi

Geet was Dancing with yash, and yash was singing to her... He held her hand and twirled her to himself.. he secretly looked at maan who had anger in his eyess.. she scrunched up a tissue in his hand...

Yash:

Jee bhar ke naach nachati hai
Oh kisi shay mein jab miljati hai
Jee bhar ke naach nachati hai
Oh kisi shay mein jab miljati hai
Tere hoton ke kale til ka
Tere hoton ke kale til ka
Hai rang laga mere dil pe

He drank the wine tha was placed on the table as he saw yash's hand around his mishti's waist... Geet twiched a little feeling uncomfortable but didnt show it on her face.. Yash smiled as she placed her arms around his neck.. dancing and enjoying Maan jealous reaction.. Seeing geet close to yash maan got up angrily and was about to walk up to the stage when he felt a pull on his hand.. he turned to see meera giving him an angry look
... He sighed and sa back down still angry...

 Chorus:
Hai hai mirchi
Ooh ooh mirchi
Uff uff mirchi
Fuff fuff mirchi
Hai hai mirchi

She walked up to their table and hugged meera and danced with her and dev... She was laughing and smiling . she went up to maan and danced with him placing her hands on his neck.. he was angry as hell... he gave her the look but i didnt effect geet..

Geet:
Hai mere bina nahin koi maza
Mujhe kha kar chahe mile saza
Hai mere bina nahin koi maza
Mujhe kha kar chahe mile saza
Mujhe pa kar ek pal chan mile
Mujhe pa kar ek pal chan mile
Bechani rehjaaye dil mein

she walked away from maan and back into yash's arms.. where she danced and enjoyed herself... maan got angry seeing her in another mans arms so he got up and walked upto the stage... meera followed him as he pulled geet away from Yash... Geet looked at him smirking and pulled her arm away...  she walked back to yash and danced again.. Meera pulled him away and took her off the stage.

Yash:
Hai hai mirchi
Ooh ooh mirchi
Uff uff mirchi
Fuff fuff mirchi
Hai hai mirchi

Hai hai mirchi
Ooh ooh mirchi
Uff uff mirchi
Fuff fuff mirchi
Hai hai mirchi

Maan walked Towards the table in anger picking up the bottle of wine and smashing it on the floor.. He looked at geet and picked the table up, anger and jealousy running through him as threw the table on the floor with all his strength.. he was breathing heavily and his eyes were bloodshot red... he walked out of the resturant on his own leaving meera and dev shocked  at his reaction..

Chorus:
Hai hai mirchi
Ooh ooh mirchi
Uff uff mirchi
Fuff fuff mirchi
Hai hai mirchi
Mirchi

Geet was glad her plan had worked but was now alittle scareed to face this maan.. he was angry and livid.. she knew he didn't like any other man touching her but she had to do this.. a little bit pain was what he needed right now.. and well she felt glad .. it was her time now..

over to the next writer

Originally posted by: indepgal

pls yaar, koi toh update ko index karo first page par...can only kathie do that?