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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

she immediately pulled out of his arms, his words breaking her shocked state, and slapped him hard.

"How dare you?" 

 

Part 26 

 

Maan rocked in anger and frustration over the slap. No one had dared raise a finger against MSK and here she dared slap him. He immediately held her hand and turned her around making her wince in pain.

Her small voice pricked at his heart and he immediately left her remembering that she had every right to be mad at him.

He mumbled a small sorry to her with his hand bowed down.

She turned to look at him and without saying anything she was about to close the door when he held it.

Geet I said sorry..his voice louder than before.. Don't u think I have suffered enough living away from u past 6 months..pls gee tab toh'

Mr.Khurana its quite late..u may leave..

He looked at her and his eyes spitting fear. He folded his hands to save him from saying or doing anything rash.

Mr. Khurana everything between us was over the day u got engaged to Sameera..u have no right upon me now.

Maan looked at her and thundered IHAVE NO RIGHT UPON U. He moved towards her and put her hands on her small waist and brought her closer to his body.

Maan..

Kyun geet..tumhe kuch nahi hota jab main tumhe yoon choota hoon..

She shook her head no and he brought his lips closer to her, his breath falling upon her.

Abhi bhi nahi..and he saw that her eyes were closed. She didn't respond but her breathing was becoming shallow.

He bent and took her lower up in his mouth. She gasped at that and opened her mouth. He immediately took her tongue into his mouth and kissed her while his hands moved on to her back and he kept movng backwards till they she was against the wall and he was towering her with his body pressed into her.

He left her mouth when the need of air became evident for both of them.

He lifted her up gently, closed the door behind with his foot and carried her into the room adjoining the room and laid her on the bed.

Geet'he called out to her sitting beside her..

She immediately opened her eyes and he saw pain and hurt in them.

Kya tum mujhe maaf nahi kar sakti'

She couldn't answer and her eyes started tearing.

He immediately bent down and picked her in his arms and cradled her head in his chest.

She wound her arms around and sobbed into his chest. He moved his hands up and down trying to console her.

After a few minutes her sobs had died down and she moved her head from his chest.

Maan aap bheeg gaaye hain..

Koi baat nahi..main..

Maan ek baar toh meri baat maan lijiye..

He looked at her and saw the pain in her eyes.  But was shocked to see her tenderness even after the pain in her heart.

He got up and walked to the washroom. She handed him a pair of kurta pyjama which belonged to dev, and moved to the kitchen to make coffee.

When he came out he heard noise coming from the kitchen and saw her standing there making coffee.

Mann yeh saahib ji, jaane hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji, dekhe hain sab ji
Phir bhi na samjhe ishaare
Mann yeh saahib ji haan karta bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji na samjhe ishaare
(na samjhe ishaare)

He moved towards her and put his hands on her waist. She gasped but relaxed in his touch.

He turned her around and looked into her eyes where he could see some love, behind the pain.

Maan coffee..a nd she turned around.

Maan looked at her for few minutes. When she had poured the coffee he picked her up.

Maan yeh'he shook his head.

She kept quiet and he carried her and laid her on the bed.

Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere bhaayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere lage re Saibo..

He bent down and moved his finger on her arms. She flinched.

He bent and kissed her, at first he found some resistance but soon she was kissing him with same passion as he was.

His hands moved to the robe she was wearing and he pulled it off her shoulders. He looked into her eyes which didn't stop him. He bent down and kissed the bare skin on her shoulder, while his hand went back and opened the zip of the gown she was wearing.

The long zip made her gown loosely hanging on her. He gently moved it down while he kept kissing and biting her neck and shoulders.

When the gown had moved below the waist he liftd her back gently and opened the hook of her bra.

It came down leaving her upper body bare.

He then looked at her and saw that the marks of scratches on her arms and abdomen were still visible.

He moved his hand over one long mark on her abdomen and ribs. She flinched.

Does it hurt still geet..she shook her head and tears fell down her eyes.

 He immediately kissed the tears away and moved his hands over the other marks.

It was then he noticed that the side of her breasts had some marks. He bent and kissed them gently.

Maan..she whispered..

Geet..tum..

Yeh galat hai maan and she covered her chest with her arms.

Kyun Geet..

Kyunki hum ab ek nahi ho sakte..bahut der ho chuki hai maan..

He looked at her. His heart was bleeding but he wanted to kiss her once and the urge so strong that he couldn't control.

He removed her hands from her chest and lightly kissed both her nipples. She writhed under him.

Geet..aaj se tum mere ho..he said to her and covered her with a sheet.

Surkhhiyaan hain hawaaon mein, do dilon ke milne ki
Ho! Arziyaan hain nazaaron mein, lamha yeh tham jaane ki
Kaisi huzoori ji yeh lab dikhlaaye
Chuppi laga ke bhi ghazab hai yeh dhaaye
Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere bhaayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere lage re Saibo

Saibo... Saibo...
Dheere Dheere... Dheere Dheere...

Before she could understand he kissed her on the forehead and left from there.

 

yaar shreya mujhay yeh update bohat CUTE😍laga😃awesome sweet update😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet


hehehe this is the stupidest part out of all others i guess😆

Not at all...you did great with it...showing the longing that maan and geet still have for each other...
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnxxx me super excited
wanted to write more
but then...it got longer n i hate typing 😃
so stopped

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

oyeee ladkiyon...whr r my comments????

sabar ker teray update tak phunchoon to main😆abhi page 106 tak hi read kiya hai mainay😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey...nice one...loved the quiet confrontation and the sensitivity between the two...😊

Really now what will the next writer do?😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
@sona
oye jaldi jaldi padho...

@mistique
wanted to make it senti + romantic
both didnt work i guess😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Im posting

If ull dnt like it toh pplz tell me
Fingers crossed
 
 
Maan walked out of the room while Geet laid on the bed
The window was open n Maan sat at the same chair where Geet was sitting before he came
Sumwhr the song started playing
 It was as if the nature was showing Geet what Maan wanted to say
Boy
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam
hum dono ki ek kahani
aaja lag ja gale dil jaani
Maan looked at Geet whom he culd see sitting frm window
Geet avoided looking at Maan evn knwing that he is seeing her
Gal
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam
hum dono ki ek kahani
aaja lag ja gale dil jaani
Gal
main achhi buri jaisi bhi hu
tu achha bura jaisa bhi hain
main teri hu kaisi bhi hu
tu mera hain kaisa bhi hain - 2
Geet looked at Maan listening to the words
Maan's eyes reflected same words
Boy
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam - 2
hum dono ki ek kahani
aaja lag ja gale dil jaani
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam
Boy
toote hue dil ki kashti ko
toofan mein kinara mil jaaye
tu thaam le mera haath agar
dono ko sahara mil jaaye
Maan walked towards Geet hoping she wuld give in
Gal
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam - 2
hum dono ki ek kahani
aaja lag ja gale dil jaani
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam
But he was wrng she jus turned her face frm him to the other side shwing him she didnt trusted what she saw in his eyes
Giving him the pain he had given her by not trusting her
He knew it wasnt so easy to pacify her
But wuld have hurt so much he didnt thnk that
 
 
Hop ull like it
Here is the video of it
If ull want ull can watch it
 

sweet lovely update afsha😃loved it a lot yaar😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

so first i thought abt hiding but then gave up on the idea 😆...yes...to both the questions...i am still up..and i do have uni in the morning :(...but don't be mad...please😳..i am catching up on bindu's story...and i only have like 2 parts left...and then i will read the latest part here..and go to bed..pakka promise😃

  
 
 
Sigh ... kya keron mein tera Jalebi .. aik to aisi herkat ooper se cuty faces and request...   ye emotional atyachaar hai  Ouch  .. sigh .. theek hai but u're going to bed after reading this update .. no more sneaking around
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

@sona
oye jaldi jaldi padho...

@mistique
wanted to make it senti + romantic
both didnt work i guess😆

ok give me 5 min😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

oyeee ladkiyon...whr r my comments????

Super cool. Why did you hesitate in the first place?