Mg ff ZIDD PART 4 PAGE 14

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Maan- Arrogant and Agrassive 28 year old rich bussiness man
 Geet- 17 years  girl beautifull like fairy in short kisi ko bi apna deewana bna de
Meera - Geet's best friend
mohinder handa- Geet's papa  he loves geet
Rano- geet 's mom
Dadi-  Sweet old lady  and Maan's dadi
THIS STORY IS ABOUT ZID IN LOVE
OK TELL ME SHRU KARU KYA MY ENGLISH VERY BAD TO PLZ SORRY FOR MISTAKES
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting

but can u slightly make geet older like 21
cant wait to read more
nd good look 😊😊😊
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                PROLOUGE
GEET- plz leave me  chodo muje muje ghar jana
MAAN-  no babby tum kahin nahi jaa sakti now u r mine and u have to stay with me either u like or not.and then he smacked his lips on her.
Geet  is shocked by his sudden action. she try to free herself from his  grip but he is so strong. He pressing his huge body against her slim  and small body. 
 I  know guys meri do line ki prolouge ne aap ke hosh udi diye honge
but want to clear one thing i love maaneet more then my life .this is not a dark story but kuch patrs tak devil type maan ko jhelna padega
kyun jab lover  thoda monster type ho aur ladki angel to romance ka maja hi kuch aur hota
 
 
 
muje IF KE BARE MAI JAYA PATA NAHI TO MUJE NAHI PATA KE KAISE LIKTHE HAI TO MAI HAR POST PE STORY DUGI
AND PLZ SEND ME BUDDY REQUST MAI ADD KARLUGI AUR AND I WILL UPDATE DAILY BHALE HI MUJE EK BI LIKE NA MILE KYUNKE I M CRAZY PLZ TELL ME HOW TO UPLOAD PICS
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                                                       PART- 1
 HANDA HOUSE
Rano- geet utho beta tumhe college nahi jana kya, aaj tumahra pehla din hai
Geet- sone do na mama
Rano- beta late ho jayoge
geet placed her head on her lap
Geet- mama muje nahi jana muje dar lagta hai wahan bhut ladke hoge muje usne dar lagta hai
Rano (ST)  kya karo mai iss ladki  kab iska dar dur hoga actually galti hamari hi hai hume isse girls school mai nahi bhejna chayie tha agar yeh aise hi darti rahi to iski shadi pata nahi kaise karege
Rano- beta kyun dar rahe ho aap  ladke tumhe kha nahi jayege aur vaise bi Meera hogi na tumhre saath
then Meera came there
Meera- lazy queen abi tak so rahi ho
Rano - meera beta ab tu hi sambal isse meri baat to sunti nahi then she goes from there
Meera- Geet chal jaldi kar aaj college bhut bada function hai aur mai late nahi hona chati tuje pata hai aaj hamare college mai MSK  aa rahe hai
Geet- MSK kaun MSK
Meera- tuje MSK  nahi pata pata geet kis duniya mai rehti hai tu MSK  india ke top10 businessman mai se ek hai aur bhut hi powerfull hai vo hamare college  ke trustee hai
Geet- ok per agar wahan jayada ladke hue to mai vapis aajugi aur muje to abi se dar lag raha tere iss MSK se
meera nodes her head in disblief
Meera- geet tera kya hoga
Precape- Geet and Meera in college
Maan aur geet ki mulakatπŸ˜‰
 
 
ok guys sorry for mistakes
help me  i want upload pics
part 2- page 8
part- 3 page 10
part 4 - 14
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Prologue was interesting...
Maan is devil types...

Nice start...
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ooohhh Love The Start!!
I Lovee Devil Singh Khurana so Count Me In! Waiting Eagerly For Devil Singh Khurana πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜† Its Always Got To Be Beaty And The Beast Ahhaa Well Devil And A Fairy for this story πŸ˜‰

Heyy If You Need Any Help You Can Ask Me πŸ˜›
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Update Soon And I'm Adding You As My Buddy πŸ€— 

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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Love the start dear
do continue
add me to ur Pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love it.
do continue plz
thx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept,
loved it,
plz continue nd pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Hey tum ne such maihe prolouge pe he hosh vudadiya tha...

It is really awesome part...me loved thz shy types geet...

Maan is devil...

Add me in dear...

Continue soon...