FF||Deceptive Obsessions - Chapter 23 page 22 Updated 22nd Sept - Page 2

Super part

Arjun too us eager to collaborate with Maan but unsure of what lays ahead of him after this proposal

Maan is super J with Geet and Arjun's closeness

Thanks for the new story and so many chapters. I love this new concept of yours. Feeling sorry for Geet, Arjun and Maan. I know what Maan did is so wrong, but a part of me, feels so sorry for him. He couldn’t control how his heart felt and I guess being who he is, he didn’t stop at getting what he wanted. He is now living with the hurt and guilt. He still is who he is but I hope Geet can learn to love this selfish Maan and give him a chance to change into a better person. I hope Arjun starts to learn to love again. Meera would be perfect for him. Thank again! I know how much effort it takes to write so many chapters, so a very big thank you. You are an exceptional writer and I always get so engrossed in the story as I can feel all their emotions. Keep up the great work!

Congrats on the new story!

Thanks for posting

Captivating prologue.... superbly written

so Maan is obsessed with Geet

while Geet happily engaged to Arjun

is clearly oblivious of Maan's obsession

Maan's deception would will certainly change everything for Geet

Chapter 1

well Maan fell in love with Geet at first sight

he was indeed jealous when Vikram held Geet

so Vikram caught Maan staring at Geet

of cos Maan was amused with Geet's directness

finally Vikram warned Maan to stop staring at Geet

as expected Maan was relieved that Geet is Vikram's sister

at least Vikram knew Maan was interested in Geet

but cautioned him

despite Maan reluctantly agreeing, he was unable to stop himself

Maan was really drawn to Geet

fate had other plans

great that Maan and Geet got to know each other

liked that Geet is ambitious and has plans in place to achieve her dreams

Maan was greatly impressed

Gosh Geet is engaged to Arjun, her best friend

Maan was naturally shattered hearing this

Maan's thoughts were reasonable

why didn't Vikram tell Maan that Geet was engaged?

Chapter 2

Geet is clearly uncomfortable with Maan's gaze on her

Gosh Maan and Geet are married

however she is unhappy

sad that Maan deceived Geet to get her

now Maan is looking at Geet with longing and a tinge of regret

alas he does not regret his actions

at least he feels guilty for what he did

well he ruined Geet's life

of cos she is no longer that happy vivacious person

despite his actions, all that matters is she is his wife

if Maan really love her he would not have done this

glad seeing Geet smiling as she plays with Amara

seeing all this Maan realised what he did

good that he wanted to bridge the gap between them

alas its not that easy

so Arjun arrived at the party

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

Maan's game of deception led her to break off her engagement with Arjun

as expected Maan noticed the intensity in her eyes as she looked at Arjun

cannot blame Geet

after all she weaved dreams with Arjun that just came crashing down

thanks to Maan's manipulation

cannot condone what he did

he chose the wrong path to get Geet

not surprised that Maan was jealous seeing that look in Geet's eyes

now Maan reminded Geet that she is his and his wife

she maybe his but is she really his?

Geet's anger and response was justified

will Geet ever forgive Maan?

she seems to feel comfort with Maan's touch

Chapter 3

so they met again by coincidence

of cos Maan was curious about Geet's business venture

well Maan really missed her

at least he reminded himself that she was engaged

great that Geet's business venture is coming along

liked her enthusiasm and excitement

Maan was indeed jealous when she mentioned Arjun

glad that he decided to be a supportive

pleased that he tried to help Geet

as expected Maan offered to invest

Geet's reluctance was justified

Maan clearly explained the benefits

not surprised that Geet wanted to first discuss with Arjun

Maan's thoughts were anticipated

nice that Maan pushed his wayward thoughts aside

good that he knew that he respect her relationship and not cross any boundaries

but he is wrestling with his emotions

now they are friends

however Maan wants more than friendship

Chapter 4

well Maan cannot help but admire his wife

so he is now filled with love, longing and regret

he recalls their past moments

Geet's conflicting emotions was understandable

at least Geet noticed the hurt in Maan's eyes

her confusion was reasonable

of cos she compared the pain she saw in Arjun's eyes to the pain reflected in Maan's gaze

sad seeing Geet in pain.....

as expected Maan warned Geet not to look at Arjun anymore

Maan is really possessive of Geet

Geet's question was justified

not surprised that Maan reminded that he is her husband

but Geet reminded Maan that Arjun is her best friend

Maan's comment was anticipated

can understand Geet's anger and frustration

she confronted Maan about his actions

Maan's manipulation destroyed everything

did he think that Geet would not find out?

Maan clearly does not regret what he did

glad that he regrets the pain it caused her

now Maan move past this and find their way back to each other

he justified his actions

he did all this as he loves her

Geet's outburst was expected

she had a point...

alas Maan explained his stance

hate that Maan broke her trust

one thing for sure that he loves her

that's not enough as its not so easy for Geet to forgive and forget

will Maan ever win her trust and love?

pleased that is determined to make things right between them

great that he apologised to Geet

feeling for Geet

nice seeing Meera's concern for Arjun

Geet was certainly direct with Meera

Maan's manipulation complicated everything

though Geet told Meera she was married, she was perturbed that Meera was developing feelings for her Arjun

Maan and Geet's thoughts were understandable

wonderful that Maan wants to win his wife over

he has a tough road ahead of him

Chapter 5

so Geet was excited over Maan's proposal of investing in her business

Arjun was indeed amazed that she met the The Maan Singh Khurana

well Arjun was aware that Maan's involvement would take the business to another level

of cos Arjun agreed to Maan's offer

finally Geet called Maan indicating that she and Arjun accepted his proposal

Geet was indeed happy that he dream was coming true

as expected Maan met Geet and Arjun

liked Geet's enthusiasm

admire that she her vision

glad that Maan offered advise

not surprised that he was jealous seeing the camaraderie and affection between Geet and Arjun

great that Maan remained composed

at least Maan appreciated Arjun as a business

Maan was really impressed with Geet

Geet was really grateful to Maan for his assistance

it was clearly hard for him to control his growing feelings

however he maintained professionalism

Maan's thoughts were reasonable

his confusion was justified

it was naturally unbearable for him to see Geet with Arjun

update soon

I wonder how many years have passed between the past and the present. When/why/how did they get married? How long have they been married for and when did Geet come to know of truth?

Maan’s deception can’t really be forgiven or forgotten. The lines between right and wrong have long been blurred unfortunately!

Congrats on new story but please do update your old ones too, you have some amazing ones out here