one shot:The fun begins..;)Imp note:pg123 by kathi - Page 6

Edited by itsreallyreal - 12 years ago

thats awesome..loved it

wow wow wow this is fun...but just a suggestion...may be the one who writes can edit in the previous link and pm their link to the previous writer? so that she cud edit the link in her part... that wud make it easy for the readers to have continuous reading
Edited by bangalores - 12 years ago

Where's the next part *pouting*

it's really fun continue soon

Continued from marvee's post...(Part 9 on Pg 9...)

PART 10

Thankfully, the alarm wasn't fully functional so there was no noise and no firemen involved...just the cold water that now covered them sensuously.

This was all that was needed now, Geet muttered to herself as she tilted her head to make her wet tresses fall to a side...she tried to shake the water off her hair and decided to glare at the one who was responsible to have her make this mess. He was looking at her with dazed eyes, finding her eyes on him he lowered himself on a knee and held out his hand to her. She looks at him, puzzled, questioning...he moves his hands as if holding her and sways slightly to express dancing. Then holds out his hand again...

Geet touches her ears and signals 'no music'...Maan rises up to touch his heart and then moves his fingers near his ears in rhythm, his head tilted as if listening to music only they can hear...He beckons again with an open palm. Geet placed her hand in his and he pulls her closer in a twirl, making her wet body fit to his. Her arms go around his neck and his hand held her by the waist. He took her right hand in his and waltzed with her. he spun her around at arms length and whipped her back. Then dipped her back on his arm and trailed his lips up the smooth white enticing neck while raising them back... the depth of passion and love in his eyes moved her. Geet raised her hand to trail her fingers down his face. Maan moved his face slightly to press a kiss on her palm. Geet could feel herself drowning in those intense eyes. Suddenly he pushed her shoulders to turn her and pulled her back, with her back in close contact with his body. His hands slithered under her clinging saree over her cool smooth stomach. His fingers tickled her navel making her gasp. He pulled her wet tresses back from her shoulder and nuzzled the sweet curve of her neck...

That is another part from me...i'll leave it here for some one else to take over...me going back to my FF...will keep rounds to see the progress😉😆...nd of course the scene is copied from the rain dance in KKHH

bindu.

Edited by bangalores - 12 years ago

He pulled her wet stresses back from her shoulder and nuzzled the sweet curve of her neck...

Contd. from part 10
part 11:

Geet pushes his face, but his Taveez gets stuck in her blouse.  She says "lo karlo baath" and is furious.  Maan looking intensely at her bust as she helplessly tries to remove his taveez.  She does it so forcefully that her blouse rips right in the middle, though the taveez gets unstuck. Maan grins at the sight and clasps her shoulders while he pushes her wet-blouse down.  Geet is hyperventilating and blushing...Maan slowly pushes her away while caressing her arms all the way down to her palms, holds both her hands and says "Geet, did you know you are even more beautiful when wet".  She moans "accha" and tries to escape, but he pulls her towards him and turns her around.  His hands are on her tummy in front now.  He uses his face to move her hair to her right, as he kisses the back of her neck all the way down to the kabab-mein-haddi hooks.  He opens those with his teeth and uses his head to let that drop and then moves his hands slowly upwards to  her bust and clasps.  Geet turns around and hugs him tightly, ouch!.  Maan asks if his taveez is hurting her and she nods a "yes".  He tells her to take it off him.  She lifts her head to look at him, those eyes full of passion and smiles at him.  She removes the taveez, then starts unbuttoning him.  As his shirt drops, they both share an intimate hug...



Edited by Maaneet-is-best - 12 years ago

Awesome parts... Taking off the taveez??!! 😲 isn't taveez is supposed to be binding them together??? How can geet take it off!??? Don't get me wrong...I love the part!!! Infact all the parts!!! You guys are awesome writers!!!!
But taking off taveez..kuch zyada ho gaya!! Sorry I'm a die hard fan of taveez too 😆

wwoww ... awesome parts  by awesomest writers ...

loving this one shot...