FF chura lo na dil new chapii updt pg 140 - Page 12

Originally posted by: JZephyr

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am I first here?! 🤔 acutally one to be here not even fly sit visit this ff😆

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OMG Arti , I loved loved loved this date - it was cute and naughty and caring and oh-so-dreamy!!! 😍 thanks😳

How can you say anything about the 'TRPs' of the FF! Dude! you've got a whole bunch of readers who're hanging onto every word written here, okay?! And TRPs par jaana is not Gulaal fans ka rule, remember!!! 😎 This FF is turning out to be one fantastic entertainer, ye chor kitna charming hai - muje bi ek date dilaa do 😆 And me loves Mexican anyway ☺️ *same pinch CC (chindichor 😆 )* well only three ppl liked it so i can guess where it is going😛...me love mexican too😳

I love how Gulaal despite knowing his truth is all inexplicably drawn to him; and I like how Kesar pulls off the smart guy by ripping her of cop gadgets, and then sets off to actually make this date a success! He doesn't understand anymore than Gulaal what's happening here - but unlike her, he's so wasy following his heart, rules don't apply to people like him 😆 While he's a sworn and proven rebel (ROFL @him saying main bhi Indian hu, apni cheez lene aaya tha 😆 and especially at him pointing out how many people are romping around with rightful 'public' stuff and never checked by law - the indirect jab at nepotism, corruption, and politics right there was perfect Arti 👏 kudos to you drawing out those subtle points even in such a fun-filled GK comic-drama-love story!) Anyway, Gulaal has this innate rebel in her which has not surfaced from, as it seems now, he need to find pride and affection for herself in her father... she's been the good daughter all her years, because as a child deprived of her parents' affection for whatever reasons, she's struggled to gain it whatever be the way - and that explains her becoming a cop too! kesar is a rebel... one who breaks the law one who twist and turn the rules and regulation accoding to his own convinence...gulaal always follow the rule and regulation of the society she is good daughter but her father is strict man who didnt have sufficient time to spend with her daughter will tell as story progress😳

As for reference to the bribes that get Kesar inside the station - sasural zada pasand aane LOL! - his easy get away money ways, and that oh-so-smart smuggling of the priceless neck piece via a camel 👏 ye shor to sach mein genius hai, and kitaa kitaa charming 😍 😆 Pitt him against Dushyant *yawn* Of course Gulaal will fall for the charms of such an exciting bad guy 😆 gals loves bad guy there is something mysterious and romantic about them😳

ps: I liked how she all decked up classy to go for a date - Kesar wasn't the only one making 'plans' - even if she did it in the name of 'keeping' her word so he would keep his, deep inside, he intrigues her like that, she's doing his bidding, because at this point, curiosity about this extraordinary encounter in her uneventful disciplined life is getting the better of her! And the way he keeps her on her toes 😆 Oh Kesar, don't be such a brute! 😆 he is indeed

Update soon Arti - I'm loving the outcome of your spoof turned FF story telling! thanks dear my only regular reader thanks a lot😛

Originally posted by: JZephyr

ps: Have you read The Scarlet Pimpernel?! I was thinking about how your story is a lighter, and of course Indian contemporary version of it, in some way! ☺️ One of my favorite Signet classic!

Originally posted by: snehasri

sorry bhi bola vo bhi istail mai wow is kesar ki deewani ban chuki hun mai😉 lovely chapi next chapi jaldi lana

Originally posted by: prachurya

Wow that was so classy and dreamy! The date was too gud yaar, it had all the elements in it fun,passion,care and affection. Looking forward to more. Again I have to compliment u on the way u described how the jewels were exported...tera dimaag toh lajawaab hai! Waiting for the next chappie- ab pehli date k baad Gullu ke feelings jaan na zaroori hain

Originally posted by: Keithuu

arti...my dear...🤗

kya bindaas chappi hai...👏

lobbd the police chor date...😳kesar kitna flirt karta hai...i luub him...❤️

kitna hatke lubb story hai...cant wait for ur next chappi re...jaldi la...😳

lubb u arti...😳

me waiting here...😃

where were u sleeping beauty...acha to tumhe flirtwa ladka acha lagta hai hmmm😉...ekdum hateli lub story hai...next chapii laungi jab comment milenge nahi to mein nahi lana waali see me becoming all tantrumy queen now