::OS::Destiny's Child part 2 2 OCTOBER PG 10 - Page 18

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

Superbb ending Ayesha 👏... Piya trust was simply woww... unimaginable 😳 felt sad for Jeh though cause he died but he kind of deserved it...happy to know Alina found her love and so as Jannat...but Prannay and Metz? I almost spilled coffee on my laptop... 🤣

You have a tendency to shock your readers 😆

Jeh ki end had to be in this manner Koi toh marna tha! Toh Jeh ki band apni hi khoon se karwa diya.

Originally posted by: sparklystarstud

awesome end ayesha...👏👏👏

loved it to the core...

heart touching climax...❤️

pia was asusual the angel she is always😍...loved her way of accepting everything as it comes...

and no one can love abhay more than her...thats for sure...😉

felt sad for jeh though😭...bt atlast he understood evry1 n im happy abt it...

Both children liked to stick close to the other defending the others actions. Both loved combat in the house so no wonder their home was never in one piece.-this cracked me up🤣🤣🤣...it was like the two little rugrats from ur A TWISTED LOVE ff...

the match making part was too awesome👏...happy that no one was excluded...

love all ur updates dr...ur my most fav writer😍

n thanx for ur pms😊

~sam⭐️

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Nice ending 😳 But does Pia remain human or does she turn into a vampire? Loved the part where u united Pranay with Maithali. Both are fiery. Best part was peace getting restored between the 2 warring supernatural clans.

Originally posted by: matwamango

Its a Boy and lets just say even this Child is strong willed but its more soft hearted than his elder siblings. I was a little tired so i missed this segment out I mean i hooked the others up with magical beings who could i have left for this child?

Left this one for me. I mean if Pranay can date 200 year old Metz I am just 22 And a child of Abhay is as good as himself.😉

wow superb & perfect ending.awesome update.wow pia demanding 4 another child so cute.loved this update

awesome OS👏

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awesome part dear n m really sorry for the late comment .look, i visited after 2 days to IF n i saw ur pm n thanks for that .

whoa nice update, pranay forund metz that diffrent yaar but good one