abhiya'mini ff"an unknown desire" "epilogue pg-66

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Posted: 12 years ago
at newyork, 9 a.m in d morning

 a huge building n on d tenth floor there was khurana's office...
a man entered in d office n took out his googles
man(there was a hell lot attitude in his voice, he was wearning a purple colour shirt, wid black waist coat, n purple tie,he was looking hot , his attire was as classy as his looks, his well shaped body, his perfect features..everything abt him was perfect.), he stopped at d reception n said- want to see jay, mr jay khurana
receptionsit was just staring at him
man(looking at d name plate)- ms rebacca, i m sure mr jay khurana is nt paying u for staring ppl in this office
his sharp words brought rebacca back on earth , she was hell embarassed n hurt bt still she managed to ask- sir may i knw ur name
man(again wid full attitude, like he was least bothered watever he said two minutes bf4)- abhay...abhay raichand
as soon as receptionsit heard his name, she said- sir is waiting for u in  d board meeting hall n dats there (pointing straight)
bf4 leaving frm there he said- nxt time try to concentrate on ur work!!
rebacca who was already feeling humilated couldn't control herself n tear rolled down her cheek
abhay left dat place n entered  board meeting hall..
jay was waiting for him there...it was xactly 9.30 a.m, d xact time abhay n jay decided to meet
jay- hello abhay while shaking his hand wid him, its so nice seeing u after so many years
abhay(wid no emotions just wid his plastered simle)same here jay, lets start wid work
jay was nt all surprised wid abhay's behaviour, he is still d same whom he met when they both  were doing their management studies frm king's college london...bt jay knew dat abhay was nt bad frm heart, his circumstances turned him like this ...
jay -ya sure...av a seat abhay...
abhay took his seat ...
jay called someone n told to her to come there
d hall door got opened a beautiful gal, wid chocolaty brown eyes, thick curls falling down her back, wearing a beautiful white top wid black jeans, entered...
her beautiful fragnance (as soon as she entered abhay felt dat same fragnance of eterninty moment, he inhaled it n closed his eyes for a moment n a beautiful face came inront of his eyes n suddenly he opened his eyes n controlled his emotions bringing back d same attitude on his face)
his back towards dat girl
jay gave a heartfull smile to dat gal
jay- thanx pia for coming here , let me introduce u to mr.raichand
abhay already felt something strong in his heart when he heard dat name pia bt he didn't turn around to see...(he was just praying pls god , i wish she wl b d one)
pia felt d same feeling dat abhay was going throw xcept d one, she was praying to GOD , pls god, i don't want him to b d one)
bt as soon as they saw each other , time stopped, they were just kept looking at each other, every other thing went invisible for few seconds...
on one hand his eyes were filled wid guilt n on d other hand her eyes were full of hatred n pain...
jay's brought them back to reality
pia- meet mr. abhay raichand, our new business partner...n abhay- meet pia ...my chief project manager...
abhay( trying hard to control his emotions bt widin seconds he brought back his attitude on his face)
pia( forget him, he is ur past, 3 years has passed away)
pia started her presentation n provided every single detail of d project...
abhay did't ask a single question in b/w
pia(in last)- do u av ny queries mr, raichand , so pls let me knw
abhay(who was somehwere in his own world, came back hering her sweet voice)- no i don't av query, god job ms.pia!!
jay- thanx alot pia for ur wonderful presentation...
pia left d hall after collecting her cds...widout looking at abhay for once
jay- so abhay tel me wats ur decision, do u want to enter wid our company in this project
abhay- my answer is yes jay...
jay shook his hand once again wid abhay n they came out of d hall..
abhay noticed pia was talking to some one
jay- abhay come wid me, let me introduce u wid my fiance
they both moved in pia's direction
an another gal was also standing behind pia, abhay thought she must b jay's finace although he was nt paying attention to her, his eyes were just on pia
jay came n placed his hand on pia shoulder, her back towards him
she turned around n found jay n abhay infront of her
jay- pia , inside u met abhay raichand as our business partner, nw meet abhay my clg frnd..
n abhay u met pia nt my ch
ief project manager, bt pia as my fiance n love of my life!!!!!!!!!!




updates
part1- pg1
part-2-pg-5
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45612109
part-3-pg1
2
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45632071
part-4-pg-22
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1750888&PID=45753585�
part-5-pg29
 
part-6-pg
 
 
part-7

part-8

part-9
 
part-10 (epilogue)
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG !
U have to write 2nd part man!
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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG!
Superb start. . Yaar!
Pia is jeh's fiance!
U have to continue it. . Soon
want to see abhay's reaction !
Hope to see abhiya together
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
cool!u started an o.s.wat abt abhiya's past??interesting'.m eager to knw!n pia is jeh's fiance.!!waiting 4 abhay's reaction..continue soon'.thanx 4 pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey... Well ur ff and this OS is mind-blowing
fantastically written...
But that's not fair yaar I mean now a days y all r becoming like ekta kapoor???? Jab bhi story interesting turn le toh episode khatam... Don't u all do like her atleast spare us from ur suspense...

Anyway hope u continue soon :-)))) and once again keep it up!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
its very nice heena😛
...bt is dt it..nothing more???
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya7fan

its very nice heena😛
...bt is dt it..nothing more???



thanx dear for ur comments
no no its not yet completed, its a short story, i  wl continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is interesting...pia is jay's fiance
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update heena :)thanks 4 the pm continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice start... Piya and Jeh engaged would be interesting to read ... please continue soon...