abhiya'mini ff'an unknown desire' 'epilogue pg-66 - Page 40

Originally posted by: .rumki.

lovely update thankuuu so much dear, glad u loved it
poor pia she got all the punishment😭
pia jay getting married😲😲...nooo...hope jay will understand😕 sure he wl
liked last part😳 thanx once again😊

Originally posted by: Neytiri

Superb updte Heena.thankuuu so much dear I hpe Jay cmes 2 kno abt abhay-pia n backs out himself. wait n watch😉Thmx 4 pm ,ma pleasure.

Originally posted by: ifrah.

Aww...it was to emmotional heena loved it..thankuuu so much ifrah!! glad u loved it.:)poor abhiya..btw awesome update.thanx once again😊😊.and love the cute bond between abhi and abhay..;)

Originally posted by: iqrahareem

nyce dear!!!!!!!!!!!! luv u for this 🤗

Originally posted by: kuttu

Oh oh looks like they are never meant to be together. Will it be like Jai would come to know about all the truth and be able to bridge their realtionship. The little boy seems to be attached to his father already. So how is Pai going to face the reality of the situation.

Originally posted by: maneetabhiya

VERY VERY VERY NICE.LUV THIS.

Originally posted by: abhiya7fan

such an emotional update...😭

feeling bad for abhay and piya...😔🥺

hope they are together soon...😊

loved the abhi & abhay bonding...😛

in both ur ff's abhay has great bonding with his child...so cute...

👍🏼😎😉

Originally posted by: shafaq_abhiya

it was too emotional for me to control my own tears... HATS OFF TO U

Originally posted by: renuka1997

Lovely update...
Im really really really in love with this ffs...
I just love everything about it...

thankuuu so much renu

glad u loved it

n it means alot to me dat u love this ff as a whole😊😊

The concept is so different...
First let me start with part 6...
Abhay-piya relationship has started there...
N then the change in Abhay in the morning...
I felt really happy about it...piya is so kind to panchi...
N then during d breakfast the baby's kick n where Abhay-piya had a really gud bonding...
It showed how piya bcame d only person for his happiness...
Then when piya got scared as panchi was crying in pain...
It showed how sensitive she is...
Then during naming ceremony where Abhay was crying remembering his mom...
Which piya understood herself...
Abhay want someone with whom hecan share his Feelings ...
N there came piya he his heart out...
The party were Abhay couldnt digest the fact that his piya was in another man's arm...even she was with kabir n then prem...
Loved prem-piya convo there was true friendly talk...
But the friendly talk of them was misunderstood as a love talk by Abhay...
There was filled jealously n anger ...
With which he pulled piya out of the party with his silentmood...
Poor piya didn't know these were happening...
Then her confession was really powerful...
Then the morning scene were Abhay really felt bad for piya...
It showed how much he loves her n respects whatever she does n her habits...
Then when Abhay met piya's father n its correct that he was startled to c his love's father is d person who killed his mom...
But d punishment was not given to him ...but it was for piya...
Poor piya got stuck up between them n was betrayed by Abhayher love...
Then i always love abhi-abhay convo...
Its full of love from bothsides...
Abhi adores Abhay as an uncle who will give any thing to him...
Abhay 's happiness when he sees Abhi can't be measured...
Its a really father son relationship which they share...
I really felt bad when piya said don't take a place in abhi's heart n give him false hope as he won't b able to fulfil it...
It showed she is really hurted inside n doesn't want her son to feel it...

renu ur comments made me speechless , u av made such a g8 analysis, dat i don't how to thankuuu, i m feeling reli glad, thankuuu so much hun for such a wonderful analysis!!

n abt dat betrayal thing i wanna say renu, dat was nt a betrayal dat was just a human decision, a child's decision who lost his mother n couldn't bear dat his love was d daughter of his mother's murderer!!

i m humbled by ur words!!

u r too kind n sweet dear

Piya wants Abhay to leave so what Abhay do????...just wait till nxt part
Thanx for d pm...ma pleasure
Continue soon...sure wl try
I will b waiting...
Love u...
Renuka..

luv u too

. 😊 😊 😊

Jay- bt pia, y day after tomorrow?? We decided this marriage after almost one month!!

Pia(there was nthing on her face)- jay pls, this is d last time I m asking something frm u, pls get married day after tomorrow!!!

Jay knew there was something wrong, bt he was clueless, dat abhay could b d reason of all this, finally he said-I cn do nything for ur happiness pia!!

Pia(giving forced smile)(to herself)- wats an irony jay, I m doing all this for u, nt for me!!! My happiness has already gone wid him!!!

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After one week!!

Abhay was sitting in his office, he was all quiet, life had again ditched him n this time 4 forever!! His pain was so much for him to handle n d only thought of seeing pia wid jay was killing him thousand deaths in a moment!!! He was thinking how cn b GOD so unfair to him, first he took away his mom, then circumstances took away pia frm him n nw abhi also!!!

He closed his eyes n trying to find out some peace n a ray of hope , which wl take him out of his dark n meaningless life, soon he caught those two faces behind his closed eyes, those two faces were d meaning of his entire life, (a tear rolled down his cheek) n he said wid breaking n low voice- plsss come back , dad needs u abhi!! He all heard a sweet, familiar voice – daddd!! Abhay smiled in his dream only!!

Again he heard- dad!!

Abhay(still closing his eyes, bt a smile came there on his lips n he said)- abhi, my son!!!

Voice- dad I m here!!

This time he opened his eyes n found dat he was nt just dreaming, dat voice was nt his hallucination, it was real, he turned his eyes towards d door n found a small figure , whose eyes filled wid all love n xcitement, he found his bundle of love standing there infront of his eyes n dat was nt a dream!!

Abhay stood frm his chair n said- abhiii

Abhi came running towards him n as soon as he came in abhay's reach, he picked him in his arms , his eyes got filled wid tears- abhiii

Abhi while kissing abhay's cheek- u r my dad, I love u dad, u knw how much I missed, y u left me there, u promised me dat u wl play wid me!!

Abhay while hugging him- sry abhi, dad didn't keep his promise!! Bt nw I promise I won't let u go nywhere n wl play together for d whole time!!

Abhi- bt dad wat abt mom n jay uncle!!

Jay's name brought abhay back to d reality, while bringing abhi's face infront of him, he asked him politely- abhi, who told u dat I m ur dad!!

Abhi turned his face towards d door n abhay followed his gaze n his gaze got free zed ,d moment he found jay standing at d door!! Although he never said this, bt it was true, dat if he came back to india leaving pia n abhi there , then it was just coz of jay, he knew dat somehow jay was perfect for pia n abhi n he himself didn't want to hurt his frnd n above dat he didn't want to hurt dat person who took care of his life when she needed him d most!! He gave abhi dat love n care which he needed most at such a small n tender age!!

Soon abhay's eyes got filled wid guilt n wid all shaking voice he said jay!!

Jay while all smiling- liked my surprise abhay!! U knw I still remember u used to surprise me a lot when v were in college, bt I didn't knw dat u still av dat habit n this time u reli surprised me!!

Abhay while holding abhi, he said- jay n his eyes started looking for her, his heart was telling him dat she was somewhere near only, bt still he was confused dat whether he was still holding d right to say her mine or nt, bt then again abhi was calling him dad!!! He was very much confused!!

Jay(saw him n understood very easily)-sry abhay, u cn't b wid her nw, its too late !!

Abhay's expressions changed , his heart started sinking, he was just looking at jay wid those painful expressions, he looked at abhi who was all busy wid abhay's iPhone n then he looked at jay n after a long pause wid all shaking n quirking voice he said- congrats jay!!

Jay- thanx abhay!!! Jay came to him n took abhi frm his hand!!

Abhay was all looking at him silently- y did u tel abhi abt me??? Nw how wl u take my place in his heart??

Jay- I don't need dat abhay coz abhi n pia both hold a different place for me in their hearts n no one can take dat place not even u!!

Abhay kept standing their silently listening to him!!!

Jay- u knw y I told abhi abt u, coz I didn't want to keep him in dark, I wanted him to take his decision, didn't want to take such an important decision of his life according to my choice, for this so called beautiful present I cn't ruin his future!!

Abhay literally got hit wid reality – wat jay said, was nt for abhi, it was for him!!

Abhay- jay, I knw wat I did was wrong, I kept u in dark , bt nw when u knw d whole truth I hope u won't this thing ruin ur n pia's relation , I want u guys to b happy, I want u to give her those happiness which I couldn't!! she deserve this jay!! N I knw u wl always keep my…. , I mean ur pia n abhi happy!! N thanx for bringing abhi here, for making him call me dad, nw I cn live rest of my life wid these beautiful memories only!!

Jay-u r right abhay pia deserves all d happiness of this world n her world is u nt me abhay, her happiness is u , nt me, she loves u nt me, I m just part of her heart, bt u beat inside her heart!!

Abhay was all shocked , he was trying to understand wat jay was saying-jay I was her past n u r her present!!!

Jay- abhay, pia's past, present n future,all is u!!!

Abhay- bt jay!!

Meanwhile pia slightly opened d door n kept standing there only, hearing their conversation!!

Jay-bt wat abhay, wat did u think, v were best frnds na ,then y u didn't tel me, y abhay, av u ever thought dat wat would av happen if I n pia got married, u n pia both were abt to destroy four lives!! How cn u guys do this!! Abhay I knw I love her, may b I won't b able to fall in love again, bt love is all abt seeing ur love happy, I knw its nt going to easy for me, bt I cn't b selfish, I knw she loves u n u love her, then just for my happiness , i cn't marry her, no one wl b happy, nt even me, foundation of a marriage cn't b a compromise, may b she wl accept me as her husband, bt I cn never b her lover n if this is d thing then I wl b more happy , just by being her friend for ever!!!

Abhay got shocked for once , (wat does dat mean-if pia n u got married???)

n then his heart got flooded wid different emotions, jay was someone who proved dat love doesn't take offence, it is never jealous, it is never rude or selfish n it is nt resentful!! Love is love, patient n kind!!

Jay smiled a little- abhay no one cn take ur place , neither in abhi's nor in her heart !! n abhi wanted to wid his mom-dad, nt wid his uncle n mom!

Finally pia entered d cabin n abhay saw her standing there, she looked at him n abhay found those beautiful brown eyes again filled wid immense love for him, jay turned around n smiled while looking at her n pia passed a smile to jay while moving her gaze away frm abhay!!

As soon as abhi saw his mom,he got down n ran towards her n said in his childish voice- mom u knw dad has got such a cool phone, he held her hand n started bringing her towards abhay

Abhi- u knw mom, dad said he won't let me go nywhere nw, it means u , me , dad n jay uncle wl stay together

Abhay, pia- jay silently listening to his words, pia-abhay were just admiring their son's innocence, their eyes were on each other, they were trying to believe dat , dat moment was true!!

Finally abhi brought pia near abhay, while holding one hand of pia n other of abhay, he said- I love u mom-dad

Abhay's eyes got filled wid tears, he picked abhi again n said- mom-dad luv u too abhi!!

Pia was just looking at her perfect family, her feelings were difficult to express in words, finally dat moment arrived, she never thought ,dat she would av been so lucky ever ,to see abhi wid abhay, bt jay came in her life , to bring her abhay back, to bring abhi's dad back in his life!!

Pia came to jay n hugged him n said- thanx!!!

Jay – pia no one cn b more happy than me at this moment, u knw wat GOD has chosen me to bring my frnd back , whom I lost many years back!! Just look at him pia, I m seeing this smile on his face after 4 years, after dat incident he forgot to smile, bt nw everything is just perfect!!! How miraculous is this dat v met after so many years in newyork, I was nt aware of ur past n u were aving no idea of my n abhay's frndshp, I fell in love wid u , bt then GOD had planned something else for me, he wanted me to b d reason of uniting two lovers back , who r nt just lovers for me, bt they two r my best frnds!!

Pia was feeling complete, she has got everything back in her life!!

Jay came to abhay n he said to abhi- hey abhi all love for mom-dad , wat abt me??(he made a sad ,pouting face)

Abhi – jay uncle, I love u too, u r my best uncle n best buddy like dad, he kissed jay's cheek!!

Jay took abhi in his hands n said- then lets come wid me, I av something for u n he whispered in his ears- cn't tel infront of ur mom, u knw na , how much she scolds me!!

Abhi giggled n said- lets go uncle!!

Jay took abhi out of d cabin coz he knew dat abhay-pia needed their few moments!! Bt bf4 leaving he said- guys I m lucky to av u two in my life as my best frnds!!

Abhi-mom-dad, I wl b back soon!!

Abhay-pia both smiled looking at their bundle of love n jay!!