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Posted: 13 years ago
note: sorry guys for posting this update so late, bt i wanna inform u dat my classes has been started, so i m nt getting enough time ,although i wl try my best to keep on updating regularly, bt still forgive me if i wl get late!!
part-7

Abhay kept standing there, his eyes were on pia n dat guy!! He was totally confused at his own state...

Pia while hugging dat guy!!

Pia- gosh!! I missed u so much!! Where d hell were u!!

While seprating himself frm pia, holding her frm her shoulders

Guy-sry yaar , u knw dad was hell behind my life after studies, to take over his business , so he threw me out of delhi n frm last whole month I was in bombay dealing wid his boring business associates n this party is also d result of dis business!!

Pia while pulling his cheeks- oh!! Prem so sad!! Uncle has forced u behind d files instead of girls, bars n discs!!

Prem while making puppy faces- nt fair haan, u r my best frnd bt u av never taken my side

Pia-smiled!! U knw ny one cn fall for ur cheesy talks n cute face!! bt nt me!!

Prem while pouting- ya I knw, I tried my luck so many times on u, bt u , ms pia jaiswal u always broke my delicate heart (he said while placing his hand on his heart) n still I don't knw for whom u did dat??

Pia hit him slightly on his shoulder n said- u cn never change! Mr.flirty!!

Prem smile n asked- btw wat r u doing here my lost dream!!

Pia smiled n said- I av come wid my frnd n boss abhay raichand!!

Prem noticed something different in pia's eyes- they were glittering at abhay's name!!

Prem- ahem ahem—pia pia, wats there in ur eyes for ur frnd cum boss!!

Pia was a bit confused although she got a hint where he was heading- wat??? I av joined raichand's company as an intern n working under abhay raichand!! Just dats it!!

Prem whispered in her ears ,bringing pia close to him- ms pia jaiswal , cn't lie to me, ur eyes r telling some other story!! Something more than frndship!!

It was enough for abhay , his mind took over his heart soon. He overlooked his feelings n belived wat his eyes were witnessing!! Those eyes which were full of jealousy few minutes back , were filled wid anger nw!!

He turned around ,clinching his fist, he kept d glass of water on d bar, almost bringing a crack in it n left outside!!

On d other side

Pia blushed this time n said- prem leave it n lets come wid me, I want u to meet abhay

Prem smiled n said-ofcourse I would love to meet mr abhay raichand who has stolen d heart of ms.pia jaiswal !!

Pia turned around to see abhay, she was feeling all butterflies in her stomach!!

Her eyes took a full round of whole area bt got totally disappointed when couldn't find him!!

Pia- prem just wait here, let me find out where is he??

Prem smiled n pia left outside to see where abhay was??

Pia was wondering y he left d party, specially when she was all waiting for him!! After sometime pia found him standing all alone near d parking area!!

Pia went n stood behind him, she was facing his back!!

Pia kept her hand on his shoulder n said very happily- abhay what r u doing here, lets come wid me inside, I want u to meet someone, someone reli special!!

Abhay who was already fighting wid his inner turn moil n emotional outrage, found it totally unbearable

Pia was all happy bt as soon her eyes caught him, her smile left her lips n she got all pensive looking at him!!

Pia- abhay wats wrong, y r u so??

Abhay while cutting her b/w n wid a sharp edged tone- I m leaving , u wanna come or someone wl drop u??

Pia got all confused at first n then she got shocked while revising his words in her mind!!

Pia- abhay wats wrong?? Y r u behaving like this??

Abhay still wid same tone n xpression- u wanna come or nt

Pia- bt abhay let me inform prem dat I m….

Abhay widout saying nything took his steps towards his car!!

Pia was all confused n hurt, bt she decided nt to push it further n she moved towards his car following him , bt she quickly messaged prm n said sry for her sudden disappearance!!

Abhay realised dat pia was behind him bt didn't bother to look!! She took her seat n they drove back to hotel!! Whole journey was a big torture for both of them, they both were hurt, bt pia was hurt n confused while abhay was hurt n full of anger !!

They both took their keys n headed towards their room ,

Pia was unlocking her door,bt it got enough for her, she couldn't tolerate more of his silent treatment, so she decided to confront him!!

Abhay entered his room n so did pia !! she entered his room while closing d door behind!!

Pia saw him taking his coat n tie out n throwing it on d couch!!

Pia( wid full of authority n frustration this time)- abhay cn u pls tel me wats d matter?? Y r u behaving like this???

Abhay who knew pia was there, neither turned around n nor answered!!

Pia – abhay enough of ur silent treatment, give me d answer, I wanted u to meet prem there, I m feeling so bad, he was all waiting for me n u just made me leave dat party n nw u r nt even bothered to answer me !!

Abhay finally lost his control , he turned n moved towards pia n pinned her on d door, pia was hell shocked n got reli scared by his sudden rush!!

Abhay- u wanna knw wats bothering me, its u n ur prem!! U went wid me in dat party then frm where this prem of urs came b/w us ???

Pia was looking into his eyes, which were full of anger, bt couldn't figure out wat he was actually trying to say!! She was all quiet when abhay said- I m sure u must av enjoyed ur love session wid him!!

Pia was shocked behind her limits n was getting where he was heading!!

Pia(trying to gather her courage keeping her anger behind)- abhay listen to me ,me n prem r

Abhay widout listening to her n hit d door behind her hard widout hurting her,this made her close her eyes again wid all fear- wat u both love each other hun???

Pia didn't take it more n pushed him wid all her power n said wid anger n pain in her voice while looking at him- v don't love each other abhay, v cn never b , u knw y coz I love u , I love u abhay raichand, n u r so blind to see dat love for u in my eyes, bt ya u got those eyes which made u see me n prem in a love relationship, let it be abhay, I don't wanna talk to u abt this, tears come out of her eyes n she just turned around to open d door , when abhay stopped her frm holding her hand n again making her stand in same position bt this time reducing d distance b/w them…

Pia was all quiet , looking down , her eyes were all teary !!!

Abhay was all shocked wid her confrontation bt soon his shock turned into guilt- he slowly n softly held her face in his hands n made her look at him!!

Abhay(wid low n soft voice)- u love me pia, I knew this bt when I saw u wid prem, I just got trapped in my own web of jealousy n fear of losing u!

Pia saw d pain in abhay's eyes n she said me n prem r just frnds abhay!!

Abhay- I m sorry pia!!

Pia was just looking in those deep blue eyes which were filled wid love n pain of hurting her!!

Pia –its ok abhay n pls never bring this thought again in ur mind, dat I cn ever love someone else, abhay u r my first n last love!!

Abhay smiled a little n said- I love u too pia, u r my sunshine , u av brought me back pia, u av put d life in me again , u av made me learn to laugh again, u av given me my heart beats back!! I love u pia!!

A smile got crept on her beautiful face n abhay gently kissed her forehead n she closed her eyesto feel d joy of being in love!!

Abhay kissed her eyes softly n smoothly n wid perfect ease he put his lips on her pink, luscious lips, which were trembling frm meeting their beautiful fate!! Abhay was nt sure of pia's reaction, bt as soon as their lips met, there was no end of their desires, abhay soon realised dat it was her first kiss, first kiss of love, his heart was all filled wid joy, pleasure n pride of being her first love in all senses

Pia wanted to stop her frm her overpowering desires bt abhay's intense love failed her to stand for her conscious n limits N dat night brought them together nt just by their heart, bt by their body n soul also!!!

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Nxt morning pia calmly opened her beautiful chocolate brown eyes n found herself in d arms of d most desirable person in her whole life, she smiled looking at him who was sleeping peacefully!! She was still dreaming bt steadily she started coming out of it n realised d surrounding n reality of her dream!! Her heart started racing , she closed her eyes n trying to rewind d last few hours of her life n soon she got d full picture of her beautiful night bt irony was dat pia was confused abt d xact beauty of those beautiful n everlasting moments which she spent wid love of her life!!

She opened her eyes n tears were there, she was nt guilty of wat she did, bt it was nt xactly d way,she wanted it to be happened!!!

Pia was all confused under d burden of her mixed feelings, she was happy, she was lucky to b in abhay's arms, she was all his frm her mind, heart n soul, bt for pia it was nt like this, she always repected her tradition, her values n d whole thing of marriage!!

she looked at him once again n thought- I cn't do this to him, I cn't let him feel guilty at ny cost!! I love him n whatever happened dat was out of our pure love n I trust him!! She took a deep breath n smiled a little b/w her tears n left for washroom!!!

Abhay came out of his sleep. There was a smile on his lips, d moment pia accepted her love for him, was still alive in his mind n heart!! He was all smiling in his sleep only!!,

He opened his dreamy eyes , bt d sound of water which was coming out frm his washroom brought him back to d reality n as soon as his mind came to his senses, he realised dat, dat was nt just a dream!! He looked himself down n stood up wid a jerk

Abhay moved his hand in his hair n closed his eyes n said- no!!! this cn't b true!! pia , how wl I face her…by knwing her for weeks he well understood what pia was, her thinking, her values n her respect for them, all abhay knew very well!! N dat was only reason of his guilt, otherwise dat was his most beautiful night, d most beautiful gal was in his arms, her surrender was all he remembered, her shyness, still her try to match him wid his desires, it was all perfect n beautiful bt still it was nt!!abhay knew pia proved her love to him in all senses going beyond her own power n limits n nw it was his turn to prove it, dat it was all her he needs n loves!! Whatever happened was his love for her, nt just a desire or some lust!!

Pia closed d tap n came infront of mirror, she was happy bt dat happiness was nt reaching her eyes, she didn't want to come out like this infront of abhay, she didn't want to hurt him, she again took a deep breath n said to herself – pia u love him n u trust him!!!

She came out wearing her last night dress, d moment she opened door, she brought a forced smile on her lips n came out n saw abhay was standing near d window n his eyes were on her!!! Apologising was nt something abhay wanted to do, sorry wouldn't been a correct word to use, he was just wanted to make her realise dat he was all true to her n pia she didn't want him to make ny regret coz she herself was nt regretting, it was just she was confused!!

Finally pia wid few glint of hesitance in her smile she said- morning, she looked for once in his eyes n quickly took off her eyes frm him, abhay knew dat she was trying her best to keep everything normal bt her eyes were nt supporting her, abhay was hurt n confused !!

Pia again – abhay at wat time v wl leave, actually I need to call dad, he must b getting worried(she said while nt looking into his eyes)…abhay couldn't take it more…he took his steps towards her

Pia wanted to run away, she was reli nt in a condition to face him, pia took her steps back although she didn't want to do dat, dat was simply out of her control, bt soon she collided wid wall n abhay was all infront of her…..

Pia closed her eyes for once n took a deep breath n opened her eyes again bt still looking down(while stammering she said)- abhay v r getting late !!

Abhay cupped her face in his hands bt her eyes were still down when abhay finally said- pia look at me!!

Pia finally looked into his eyes!!

Abhay – I m

Pia quickly put her hand on his lips n said- don't b, coz I m nt sry at all for nything!! N tears rolled down frm her cheeks

Abhay- then y r u avoiding me, avoiding this situation n most important y r u crying??

Pia- I don't knw,I don't knw nything abhay, I only knw dat I love u n I m nt guilty of nything , I m just confused coz I nerver..

Abhay while completing her sentence- coz u never wanted it like this!!

Pia looked down n said- I m sorry abhay, I never wanted to hurt u!!

Abhay was feeling miserable, he pulled her in his arms n said- pia u don't need to b sry at all, I understand n I respect u for wat u r n wat u think!!! I love u for wat u r!!

Pia smiled a little b/w her tears!!

Abhay-pia do u trust me??

Pia- hmmm, I trust u wid my life abhay!!!

Abhay- wl u marry me??

Pia got shocked , she separated herself frm him n looked at him for few seconds n then said- u don't need to do this abhay, I don't u to marry me coz of whatever happened last night , I mean

Abhay-pia I m nt doing this coz I wanted to prove something or like this, I m doing this coz I love u, I want u to be mine forever in all d ways, I want to spend my everyday n night wid u, I want my day start wid ur smile n end up wid ur smile n I want a perfect chachi for pratyaksh n I want u to be my wife!! Ms. Pia abhay raichand!!

Pia smiled shyly, her wet cheeks turned redat his words n she quickly went back into his arms hiding herself in her heaven!!

Abhay finally felt light n happy n again asked- pia u didn't reply my question, wl u marry me!!

Pia- hmmm, I wl marry u abhay!!

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D journey back to home was reli memorable for both abhay-pia!!!

Abhay –pia ,reached pia's home!!

Pia looked at abhay n smiled n said- see u tomorrow in d office !!

Abhay- nt fair pia, u r nt going to call me inside???

Pia was surprised n smiled n said- come , dad is also there , so u cn meet him also

Abhay- ofcurse I would love to meet my father-in-law!!

Pia smiled shyly n looked down n abhay smiled n kissed her forehead!!

Abhay-pia entered pia's house !!

Abhay found a man was sitting on d couch n his back towards them!!

Pia excitedly said- dad!!

N abhay noticed through her voice how much she loved her dad, his eyes were on pia, who just ran towards d person, who just turned hearing his daughter's voice!!

Abhay was all smiling looking at pia n his father….bt slowly dat smile started fading away, his eyes started recognising dat face, his mind was trying to remember dat where he has seen dat person bf4!!

Abhay's heart was sinking wid every passing moment, he was again getting d same feeling of losing someone, he shut his eyes n d picture which came infront of his eyes, just went away shattering him down into pieces widin second,s he opened his eyes which were all teary, he wanted it b a lie, bt it was nt, it was reality dat d person whom pia was hugging was her dad, bt for abhay dat person was his mom's murderer!! !!

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Posted: 13 years ago

yay I m the 1st one finally.Heena awesome update I loved it.Abhiya confession.Abhay jealousy all were so gud.Their romantic night,Wow.Kyaa baat hai aajkal kafi romantic ho rhi ho.But me sad now Abhay will leave Pia.Poor gal.Lets c whts nxt.I hope Pia forgive him.

Luv U🤗
Edited by cuteshrishti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesomeee update 👏 👏
I always love jealous Abhay ☺️ Shrish is right...in both your FF we gotta see lots of romance recently...good for us 😃 show me they only fight... FF padke we wud be hpy
But me sad now... i understood now time for Abhay and Piya ki judai 😭 Now Abhay will hate her and poor piya... she's already in emotional turmoil for her actions and now she will regret something which isn't something to regret but to cherish
Btw, when will you update your FF?
Luv u loads 🤗
P.S: I got late in writing my OS, coz my house was crawling with guests... writing now... again Im worried... coz next chpt there's an intense convo between Metz and Abhay and i donno how it will turn out.. do give ur honest feedback 😕
Edited by princess_xeelan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
fab update..loved it..ausum..i loved pia-abhay confesion. Gosh! I knew somethin like this wil happen..poor abhay his world is shattered. Update soon. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx for d pm
gr8t 👏👏
loved abhays jealousy n there romance
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous update! So Piya's dad is Abhay's mom's murderer! OMG I hope Abhay doesn't hold Piya accountable for this, eventhough I believe this is the reason why Piya and Abhay probably broke up! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dr,
Abhiya moment were lovely, but now m feeling bad for Abhay,
plz continue soon
nd thanx for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant & romantic update.

I loved their confession.
But why did u introduced her father so soon he just proposed.

Love u. Thanx for the PM.

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Posted: 13 years ago
NICE UPDATE...😃LOVED ABHIYA MOMENTS (JEALOUSY, CONFRONTATION AND PROPOSAL)😊...CONTINUE SOON...GOOD LUCK👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow so that was the reason for their separation.

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