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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rashika27.1997

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Posted: 13 years ago
part-6

pia- i m sorry for my behaviour also !!

abhay smiled- its ok!! u were right at ur place at dat time!!

pia - hmmm

pia -abhay had a long talk abt their lives, where basically pia told abhay abt her, her frndship wid misha, abt her dad n abt various others stuffs, her likes, dislikes!!

abhay was just listening to her, she found pia very lively, full of life person, who was aving her own dreams n strong mind to fulfil them n she was perfect picture of modernisation n ethics both!! she was innocent in various senses ,bt still knew good n bad both for her!!

clock turned to 2 a.m n pia started yawning n said- abhay cn v talk tomorrow, i m feeling sleepy nw!!

abhay smiled a little- ofcourse pia n thankuuu so much for this tasty coffee n ur wonderful company!!

pia (still yawning n smiled b/w her yawn n said)- ma pleasure!!

abhay soon left frm her room wishing her g'nite...abhay was so happy n feeling so light after ages!!

abhay had a peacefull sleep dat night!!

...

nxt morning was different...

pia was in kitchen, she was still in her capri's n T's

when panchi came there..

hey pia- gud morning, how r u feeling??

panchi- nt so good, this morning sickness!!!

pia- oh!! then y came here , u should av called me up!!

panchi- u r so sweet pia, bt just came to tel u, abt dad's n abhay's breakfast routine, so dat u cn give instructions 2 servants!!

pia made panchi to sit on dinning chair n said- u cn tel me everything while sitting here!!

panchi told her dat abhay wl take his breakfast in his room only( thsi brought flashback of last night incident in pia's mind , she smiled at her own , bt soon came back to senses wid panchi's words) n dad wl b coming here ny moment n abt herself, she said- she would prefer orange juice only

pia told abt d breakfast menu to d servants n started helping them!!

soon abhay came there n saw pia in d kitchen...

he couldn't stop himself frm admiring her

pai came wid panchi's orange juice n passed it to her n saw abhay near d stairs..

pia smiled at him n said- g'mrng abhay!!

abhay- g'mrng pia

panchi turned around n couldn't believe on her ears, it was after ages abhay's voice was full of energy!!

panchi '(bt still she said)- sorry abhay for getting late, actually pia was just abt to bring ur breakfast in ur room

abhay- its ok bhabhi, actually i was thinking to av my breakfast wid all of u!!

panchi kept looking at him for few minutes n then said- come on abhay, av a seat, dad wl b coming ny moment...

panchi suddenly kept her hand on her tummy n a voice came frm her mouth- ouchhh!!

pia looked at panchi n quickly took away d glass frm her hand n asked while keeping her other hand on panchi's shoulder-(in worried tone)- r u ok panchi??

abhay also came there n asked- bhabhi- r u fine??

panchi- guys i m fine n she took abhay n pia;s hand n placed them on her tummy, abhay-pia's fingers touched each other , for once they looked into each other eyes n then at panchi

panchi- baby kicked me!!(she said wid xcitement )

soon pia also felt it , she smiled n said- awww panchi i also felt it, its so wonderfulll...omg omg omg!!

abhay was looking at both of them wid confused xpressions bt still his eyes were admiring pia;s innocense n her reactions

pia n panchi looked at abhay for some response, bt he was totally blank

abhay(wid confused expressions)- i didn't feel nything!!

pia started laughing as soon as he said dat n then she said while taking his hand in hers n placing it carefully on panchi's tummy- budhu now try to feel it, its baby's kick, nt some one hammering inside!

panchi was noticing abhay's-pia bond, which developed overnight specially frm abhay's side n pia, panchi knew dat pia was a very frndly n a sweet gal!!

abhay on d other side, was lost in pia's touch, he was feeling her soft hands on his skin!!

when finally he felt something under his hand!! His eyes got sparkled wid d feel

n pia noticed it n asked- did u feel it??

abhay smiled- yes i did n it was amazing!!

abhay- congrats bhabhi!!

panchi-thanx abhay, i av felt this so many time, ur nephew is very naughty!!

pia(surpeised)- how do u knw dat ur baby is going to b a boy??

panchi- i knw dat pia, coz I m d mother n I want a boy like sid(she said shyly)

pia- awww panchi !!

abhay- bhabhi dats so sweet!

meanwhile abhay's dad came there , pia went to kitchen n abhay made himself comfortable in d dinning chair

abhay's dad n panchi both were reli happy looking abhay enjoying his breakfast after so many days!!

pia served them n was abt to leave when abhay asked her- pia wat abt ur breakfast...??

panchi was reli surprised dat abhay asked pia abt d breakfast

panchi- yes pia come n av ur breakfast

pia smiled n said -panchi actually, she looked down at herself n panchi got it wat she was trying to say

panchi- its ok pia, there is no need of formality, u cn take bath later on!! av ur breakfast, u must b hungry!!

pia- bt..i mean

abhay- pia sit n av it

this time pia didn't say nything n sat infront of abhay n started aving her breakfast

after breakfast abhay n his dad left for d office, pia took panchi's to her room n after dat she went to her room n took bath n came n sat on her bed, she didn't knw d reason bt she was feeling reli happy n content , she was lost in her own thoughts when she suddenly heard panchi's cries!!

She ran to her room in panic, saw her crying in pain while holding her stomach,

Pia held panchi frm her shoulder- panchi

Pia's hand started shivering seeing panchi's in dat condition bt then she controlled her emotions n called a servant 'n wid help of him, she took panchi to d car n made her sat carefully on d passenger seat n she herself took d driver's seat

She took a deep breath n then looked at panchi n said- panchi everything wl b fine, she kept her hand on her shoulder like giving her assurance, dat she wl take care of everything

Panchi looked at her wid those eyes which were full of trust'', soon they reached hospital n doctor's took panchi to labour room'

Pia was all sweating , her hands were still shivering bt she took out her phone n dialled abhay's no'.

As soon as abhay saw pia's no., a smile got crept on his face, bt soon it left when she heard her cracking voice

Pia- abhay!!!

Abhay(got reli panicked)- pia wat happened..is everything alrite

Pia- abhay panchi, she is in hospital'pls come here '(she almost got tears in her eyes, she was strong bt still it was first she saw someone in so much pain)

Abhay-pia I m coming, don't cry'he held d phone down n ran towards his car!!

After almost half an hour abhay reached hospital n found pia sitting in d corner , her head was down n frm side abhay noticed her face was holding all worried xpresions!!

He went n placed his hand on her shoulder n as soon as pia saw him, she literally hugged him as tight as she could av!!

Abhay was took aback totally by her sudden gesture bt then he brought his hands on her back in support n said-pia I av a talk wid doctor, she is saying everything is normal

Pia was just crying holding him like a baby!!

Abhay(didn't knw wat to say, there was only one thing he knew, he didn't wanna c those tears in her beautiful eyes), abhay politely said- bhabhi is fine pia, don't cry!!

Pia in tears- bt she was in so much pain

Abhay kept holding her , he himself didn't knw wat to say to re- assure her, when doctor came there n said- congrats

As soon as pia heard her voice, she separted herself frm abhay n wiped her tears !!

Doctor-u shouln'td b crying, this is a moment of celebration, panchi has given birth to a baby boy n both mom n baby r fine!! Panchi is still weak , so I av given her sleeping injection n baby, nurse must b bringing him

As soon as pia heard dat, a smile came back on her face , she closed her eyes n thanked GOD, abhay noticed n smiled looking at her n then he said- thanx doctor, cn v meet bhabi??

Doc- nt yet mr. raichand, she is still uncouncious n btw where is her husband , ??

Abhay- doctor actually, bhai got some urgent work, which couldn't b postponed bt I av informed him, he must b coming back!!

Soon nurse came wid panchi's baby n abhay pia both brought their hands together infront of nurse n she carefully placed baby in their hands!!

A tear rolled down pia's check looking at dat new, innocent life'pia was finding it hard to stop herself frm dose feminine feelings she was going through, for d first time she was xperiencing something like dat n on d other hand, abhay was feeling totally out of d world holding his nephew in his hands, abhay 'pia unknowingly bent down at d same moment n placed a kiss on d cheeks of d baby of their respective sides

N d nurse who standing beside both of them, took their picture, dat was a perfect moment n perfect shot

Abhay-pia looked at each other for few minutes n then smiled n then looked at nurse n smiled again

Nurse- u two look perfect wid other , when u wl av ur own baby, I m sure u two wl prove urself 2 b d best parents!!

Abhay-pia got shocked cum surprised by her words , they looked at each other, both were embarrassed n also found it quiet funny at dat moment!!

Nurse left ,taking baby wid her!!

Abhay-pia was avoiding each other's gaze bt in some corner of their heart ,dere was unknown joy playing!!!!!

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It was naming ceremony in raichand's mansion, pia came directly frm office'abhay-pia's relation was turning beautiful day by day

Panchi while giving a beautiful saree to pia, she said- go n change in my room pia!!

Pia- bt panchi

Panchi- no more arguments pia, me n ur frnd(while looking at abhay who was busy wid some work) have choosen it for u, nw go !!!

Pia didn't say nything else n left for panchi's room

Pia saw a gal was sitting in panchi's room coz baby was sleeping there, so she went to d washroom n came out drapping dat beautiful saree on perfect figure, bt final touch was still left

Pia came to d room n told dat gal to leave n said she wl bring baby down in d ceremony!!

She started giving final touches to her saree, her curls were falling down on her back, there was no artificial make up xcept dat strawberry lip gloss which was giving glossy touch to her pink lips!!

Pia- u knw wat baby ur chahu's choice is reli awesome!! She smiled at her own while looking into mirror

Abhay who just reached at d door, heard wat pia was saying n he smiled n then knocked d door which was slightly open

Pia- come in n turned around to see who was there!!

both got freezed at their places,looking at each other

Pia was wearing light purple shade saree wid aving babypink colour sequences on it!!

She was looking gorgeous n abhay was weaing white colour sherwani wid very light blue colour embroidery on it!!!...they kept looking at each other!!

Abhay (thought)- gosh pia, how cn someone look so beautiful, truly mesmerising!!

Pia(thought)-wats wrong wid me, y cn't I take my eyes off him!! His hypnotic blue eyes on me, always made me skip my heart beat !!

They might av kept standing their for whole day, if baby wouldn't av started crying!!

Pia-abhay came back to their world n pia took her steps towards d baby cot n took him in her arms!!

Pia- lets go abhay, panchi must b waiting for us!! (she said while looking towards baby only)

There was a cute smile on both faces

Pia left d room n abhay kept stood there, looking at her , when he noticed dat pia forget to tie d "dories" of her blouse, although her curls were covering her back, bt dat dories were hanging around!!

Abhay ran towards her ,on d other hand pia went to panchi n handed baby to her !!

Panchi- u r looking beautiful pia , abhay also came there

Abhay- bhabai bhai was looking for u(he lied)

Panchi(confused)_- bt abhay sid was wid me only two minutes back

Abhay- bhabhi bhai cn't stay away frm u for a single minute n u r talking abt two!!

Panchi lightly hit his shoulder, shut up abhay n she left while smiling!!

Pia was also smiling, when suddenly abhay held her hand n said- come wid me, pia looked at him wid all confused expressions

Pia- abhay wats wrong!!

Abhay- just come wid me'

Pia was abt to say, when she heard misha's voice frm somewhere calling her, bt bf4 she could av reacted , abhay literally dragged her to d room near by!!

Pia(now really worried) abhay wats wrong!! Misha is calling me n I mean

abhay n pia was standing almost at an arm length distance

abhay- pia actually ur( he said while pointing towards it), he was quite confused how to say it

pia looked at her frm up to down n asked (worriedly)- is there something wrong wid my saree???

Abhay was trying his best to tel her..bt she was nt getting it, finally he said-pia d doories of ur blouse are untied!!

Pia's eyes pooped out..she closed her eyes in disbelief n started murmuring 'oh no, how cn I forget this, pia u r so stupid , if someone had seen it, wat dat person would b thinking!!

Abhay came near to her n placed his finger on her lips n said-shhh, no one would av seen it, ur curls r covering it!!

Pia was just looking at abhay n then she looked down n said slowly- thanx abhay

Abhay- no need of thanx pia, v r frnds n frnds always help each other n do u need ny other help(he himself didn't y he said dat last line)

Pia first didn't react at his words, bt then she slowly looked down n abhay brought her closer , their faces were so close, dat they were feeling each other hot breath on their faces, pia closed her eyes n he brought her curls on her shoulder n tied d doories n made a butterfly knot n as soon as his fingers touched her soft skin, she felt a current ran down thorugh her spine!!abhay noticed her reation n it was getting difficult for him to control himself frm nt taking her in his arms

They kept standing at dat position only , pia;s eyes closed n abhay's eyes on her!!

When they both heard misha's voice outside, abhay took his steps back n pia opened her eyes wid jerk, she looked at abhay n ran towards door n opened it n saw misha was standing there , wid all killing looks!!

Misha- wat d hell is wrong wid u, (pia was standing on d door, so dat misha won't enter in) , bt misha just entered n pia kept saying misha misha listen..pia closed her eyes( n thought- nw wat, she wl ask me thousands of question regarding abhay)

Misha- pia where r u lost n wat were u doing inside all alone??

Pia turned around n saw abhay was nt there. First she got surprised bt then she thought he must b hiding somewhere!!

Pia- nothing misha, actually I forget to tie d doories of my blouse, so just came running here!!

Misha- ok, now pls lets go , panchi calling us for ceremony..

Pia left wid misha, bt she turned around n saw abhay behind d curtain, she smiled n said thanx quietly just wid her xpressions n abhay in same manner said- nytime!!

After sometime ceremony started n pia n misha decided "pratyaksh" name for baby n everyone liked it!!

All were aving so much fun , when pia noticed dat abhay was missing, she started finding him n found him in d garden , sitting all alone on d bench!!

Pia went to him n sat on d bench beside him , she saw him all lost, his eyes were teary!!

Pia- missing ur mom!!

Here voice made him look at her, bt he didn't say nything n started looking other side

Pia(she kept her hand on his shoulder)- abhay '..u don't need to hide ur tears frm me atleast!!

Abhay turned around n looked at her wid teary eyes n second moment he hugged her n started crying likea baby, pia felt like someone was pericing her heart, bt she let him cry

After almost 15 minutes, abhay was still holding pia, bt he stopped crying!!

Pia then said- abhayyy'.

Abhay came back to his senses n moved away n looked at pia'

Pia smiled n wiped his tears'n asked- how r u feeling nw??

Abhay smiled in his tears- much better, thanx for coming in my life, thanx for being my frnd!!

Pia ' frnds never say thanx to each other, specially those who r very special!!

Abhay smiled whole heartedly this time'

Pia 'nw lets go, everyone is waiting for u inside , specially ur pratyaksh

Pia stood frm her place n abt to move when abhay held her frm her wrist

Pia turned around wid questioning eyes bt holding her smile

Abhay- pia would u love to come wid for a party tomorrow, actually our clients who stay in shimla throwing a part on his daughter's b'day n he called me up n I said yes !!

Pia smiled(how could av she said to no to abhay)- hmmm, I m coming wid u

Abhay smiled- I wl b picking u up at xactly 9 a.m!!

''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''..

Nxt morning aby 'pia started there beautiful journey n they both had wonderful time together while their journey!!

N almost around 4 p.m they reached Shimla!!

Abhay av already booked two rooms in a hotel for them'

Abhay-pia this is ur key n go n av some rest, v wl b leaving at 7p.m for d party n do u wanna av something

Pia- no i m nt hungry abhay , I m just tired , would reli love to av some rest, wl meet u at 7 n they both left to their respective rooms!

At 7 p.m , abhay knocked at pia's door n she came out n abhay couldn't stop himself frm admiring d beautiful figure standing infront of him in a beautiful white knee length dress, placing securely on her shoulder wid straps, aving a baby pink colour knot at d centre of d dress at her waist line, wid perfectly matching stilettos

Abhay was just looking at here n pia smiled n looked down bt abhay was still lost whn finally

Pia- ahem ahem'.

Abhay came out his trance n said- u r looking mesmirising!!

Pia smiled shyly said- thanx abhay!!

On d other hand abhay was wearing a ralph luren three piece suit n name was enough to describe his taste

Pia ' u r also looking stunning abhay!! Girls r going to b drool over u in d party!!

Abhay- thanx for d compliment pia n pia took her step towards him n adjusted his tie n said ' now perfect mr. abhay raichand!!

Abhay- thanx ma'am n they left frm d hotel for d party!!

Party was on full swing n abhay introduced pia to mr. dhingra , who was working wid abhay's company

Abhay- mr.dhingra , met pia, she is working wid me on our project n she has chalked out d whole plan for our project

Mr.dhingra- hi pia n I must say u av done a brilliant job !!

Pia looked at abhay n he gave a smile in return n pia then looked at mr.dhingra n said thanx sir

Mr.dhingra( called her daughter, a gal wid a beautiful dress, all glamorous look ncame n stand infront of them)- abhay-pia meet my daughter tanushree, she is doing her masters!!

Abhay-pia both greeted tanushree n wished her n she also replied warmly!!

abhay got busy wid other business men in d party n pia took a seat in d corner'she was just sitting n admiring d beautiful decoration , when she noticed a familiar face, bt bf4 she could av reacted to dat face, she found a hand on her shoulder n she recognised d touch widout turning around, abhay came n sat infront of her'

abhay- getting bored??

Pia smiled- nt really n then she turned around , bt dat person was nt there nw!!

Abhay- looking for someone

Pia turned around n smiled- ya actually I saw someone, for once he was looking xactly like my clg frnd, bt I think he was someone else, let it b!!

Soon d cake got cut n everyone reached to d dance floor

Abhay saw pia was looking at d couples on d floor , so he decided to ask her for a dance

Abhay- pia would u, bt bf4 he could av completed his sentence tanushree came there n asked abhay- would u like to dance wid me

Abhay 'pia both got surprised, wid her sudden appearance n over dat her sudden question

Abhay was feeling totally helpless, he looked at pia for once, her eyes were also on him bt being a gentleman, he said-ya, lets go(tanushree didn't bother d disinterest in his voice, even when abhay said yes, her eyes was on some other guy)

Pia smiled a little bt somewhere in her heart she was totally unhappy looking abhay wid t)

Abhay and t were dancing, abhay's eyes were on pia, t's were on some other guy'

When someone came to pia n asked her for dance

Pia- ummm, I m sorry bt

Guy(cutting her in b/w)- pls dance wid me, u knw d gal who is dancing wid ur frnd, she is my gf, she got angry coz I came late n dats y she said, she wl dance wid ny guy in this party bt nt wid me n I need ur help to make her dance wid me

Pia smiled n said 'ok mr

Guy- I m kabir n u??

Pia- I m pia n they both went to d dance floor!!

Abhay felt a pang jealousy looking pia wid kabir!!

On d other hand kabir-pia were all smiling while dancing, as kabir was telling pia abt T n then asked 'pia is dat guy wid tanushree, ur bf??

Pia smiled n said- no, he is one of best frnd(wid a pride in her voice)

Kabir- ok then let me tel u onething, ur best frnd is in love wid u??

Pia got totally surprised wid his words said- how cn u say dat kabir ??

Kabir- coz the way he is looking at me, I m sure, he wanna kill me at this moment for holding u in my arms!!

Pia looked down shyly n then looked at abhay who was actually staring -kabir, pia quickly removed her gaze frm him !!

Soon T came n said- pia if u don't mind , cn I talk wid kabir for a moment, she was giving "u r gone" looks to kabir

Pia smiled- ya sure T

Kabir-I m dead n T dragged him frm there!!

Pia couldn't stop herself frm laughing n she was abt to take step towards her table, when someone pulled her frm her wrist n she saw abhay was standing infront of her eyes n his one hand on her waist n other holding her wrist

Dj changed d song to :khuch khaas hai, khuch paas hai"

Abhay pulled pia closer n nw there was no space b/w them , he made pia kept her one hand on his shoulder , then placed his one hand on her wasit firmly n entiwned other hand wid hers'pia was still trying to understand his sudden rush!!

Song started n they danced beautifully, abhay's emotions of jealousy made pia swrilled in every manner , pia matched his every step beautifully, they were so close dat their hot breaths were literally colliding n giving sensational feel to both of them'

Song ended n d sound of claps brought then back on earth , abhay left pia n they both smiled a little looking at d crowd n moved towards their table!!

They both were breathing heavily, abhay made pia sit n went to bring some water for her'.

As he turned around holding a glass of water in his hand , he saw pia hugging someone!!!!!!

Edited by heena_mehta - 13 years ago
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Here I'm
first of all...really really sowyyy for taking so long... u know my net connection was gone na...so lets start with the update...
Thankuuu for a long upate...i just loved it...full of Abhiya moments 👏 👏 👏
How relationship grows and happiness comes within small events is soo beautiful written Heena...i loved it 👏 👏
Like the coffee, the breakfast, kcik of the baby, holding junior Sid in arms...wowww 👏 👏
Haww...the doori scene was ☺️ ☺️ CVs me head me yeh sab scenes kyun nehi ate 😡
Finally Abhay opened up to her... good for him...loved that moment 😳
Now the jealousy game ...aha n btw...i have the same ques as Shrish... sure somethin happened in Shimla na? aisa mauka ber ber nehi ata 🤣 🤣

Luv u ...bear hug 🤗

Edited by princess_xeelan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey heena di...😃awsm blosm post as usual...⭐️lvd d way u shwd abhiya bond develp...😛so de hd a hrt to hrt tk ...pia mkng brkfast n abhay so cncrnd 4 hr...awww...ho chweeet...😳lvd abhiya intractn during panchi's delivery...😃abhay tyng pia's doris...😳m so glad pia hlpd abhay lt out hs grief...😍abhiya dnc ws👏...lvd d way abhay gt jeals...😆i thnk dt guy s jeh hum pia ws huggng...😲wtng eagrly 4 ur nxt updt...o cont soon...loads ov lv...🤗
Edited by purple_shadoz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey heena
Superb update!
Loved it
the flashback was wonderful
awww. . Panchi gave birth to a baby boy!
I just loved how abhay has opened up towards pia abt his mother
Abhiya were so cute together. .
Pia is like a ray of light in abhay's life. . Lightning up his life. .
The doorie scene was super hawt !
Abhiya & KaT were superb. .& abhiya's dance was mindblowing. .
& who was pia hugging? Was it a guy? I can smell abhay burning! Lol
Thanks for the pm
continue soon
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow
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perfect
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jealousy
cute
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brilliant
wonderful
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have no more words to say
continue soon
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