New FF = Crimson Love..! - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

208

Views

34132

Users

48

Likes

388

Frequent Posters

Bella-Edward thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#21
what viewed by 325 and very less comments...
come-on people this is my first FF ...
just tell me if its fine or boring...
i need your opinion on whether continuing or stopping it..
FlawSomeME thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Bella-Edward

what viewed by 325 and very less comments...
come-on people this is my first FF ...
just tell me if its fine or boring...
i need your opinion on whether continuing or stopping it..

 

No dear, it's interesting and you write very well 👏. It's just a starting..that's why!, lesscommenting 😊.

You just introduced your ff..n sometimes it's very difficult for your readers to figure out what you are trying to say. It is important to make sure that your introduction accurately reflects what you will be saying..but u done it very well.

Your introduction gives the reader an idea of where you are going in your ff they can follow along 😛.

So, keep writing…

All The Best 😊

FantasyFan_8 thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 12 years ago
#23
hey I will read ur update at leisure tomorrow. and then comment
Reashma thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#24

am gonna read it .. and give u feedback👍🏼

SheDevil thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#25
hey awesome update.I loved it.Its bit tricky but seems interesting😊
Bella-Edward thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

hey awesome update.I loved it.Its bit tricky but seems interesting😊



i can't tell you the whole script in 2 posts .
things will be revealed wait and watch ouch read . 😆
.SmokeySilence. thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#27
As I said before, I love your writing style... very good... and about the story... it's only the beginning and you never know whats gonna happen so waiting to read more... and sry it took a long time for me to read it... i was so busy today... keep writing 😊
P.s: u can have a look on my FF too... i have send u PM i guess 😊
Reashma thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#28
nice update... i want to see more👍🏼
rashika27.1997 thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#29
its amazing dear ...
plz continue
n pm me when u update
SheDevil thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#30
wow I love ur new characters😊