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Reashma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
 i like ur post.. i wanna see more of ur work๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
wow awesome update.Waiting 4 Abhiya meeting๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love your writing style.. Looking forward to the meeting of Abhay and Piya... and thanks for the PM.. send PM for the next 1 as well.. keep writing ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hunt & The Hunters

That night awful things did happen.

                 Far away from Dehradun in the Himalayan Tibet Area a little kid was counting her last beats . That evening there was a major accident , people called it an accident because nobody could explain how a 3 year old had jumped or fallen from the highest cliff in the mountains . One moment she was playing with her kitten in the yard and the other moment the kitten was found dead and the kid was missing . After an hour the child jumped or fell from the cliff , which no human had ever reached . The kid was taken to the local hospital and the doctors were trying hard to save her . After long hours of supervision the doctors told if the internal bleeding stops and the kid make through the night , she may be saved . A beautiful golden haired teenager was hearing all of this . She knew she could save the kid , but for that she should be left alone with the kid . She planned to wait till the villagers return to their houses and later sneak - in through the back window and save the kid .

                    At about 2 o'clock the nurse told everybody that the internal bleeding had slowed but not stopped so the situation was still critical . Hearing this the villagers started moving to their homes so that they can take some rest and return early in the morning to help the family of the kid . By 3:30 the hospital was empty and the parents had slipped into a nap . The  blond girl knew this was her chance , she knew the kid's room was in the 3rd floor . She sneaked into the kids room through the window . She walked to the kid's bed soundlessly - like a cat . Without being told she knew that the internal bleeding was near the left lungs , she put her hand in the kid's left chest , closed her eyes and started breathing slowly . She also found the kidney being wounded and healed it with her touch . She was about to heal the physical wounds in the kid's face but then a soft voice spoke to her in her mind - " Don't do that , they are not that bad . The humans can take care of it ." 

                  She felt that was fine , after kissing the kid on her cheek she jumped out of the window . She fell in the hands on a tall hansom boy . The boy held her in his shoulders and started running , he carried her to the bonfire and settled there . They both were looking into each-other eyes , it
was as if they were seeing the others' soul . The boy was young tall and well-built with pale skin , brown hair and amber eyes . On the other hand the girl was a bit short with fair skin , long golden hair and dark brown eyes . Suddenly there was some movement near the bushes . The boy and the girl were disturbed  from their silent conversation and tried to find the reason of disturbance . They stood up and started searching the area , their was something behind the bushes in the darkness . Immediately their positions changed to a crouch to defend - to fight whatever that was in the darkness .

               A figure started moving from the darkness ; they didn't speak they wanted the figure to walk out of the dark as they can't make their opinion until knowing what it was . A tall slim figure walked into the vicinity of light , he was a man - a young man with dark red eyes . On knowing what it is the teenager's eyes changed to dark poisonous blue , they knew this was a fight and they needed help . Both wordlessly called , " Abhay , we need help . He's here ." The red eyed stopped walking and took up an animal crouch to fight . Nobody moved , both the teams were measuring the distance - counting their chances . There was no breeze - no air , a cold stillness ready to take the dive when decided . Suddenly a black haired boy appeared out of thin air beside the girl ready for the fight . Both the teams started walking not to each other , but walking around - walking in a circle . The fight had begun , both were focusing on when to launch on the other .

               The red eyed man took a jump and launched over the black haired Abhay . Abhay was ready , prepared for this and he caught before the man could reach to his neck . The blond and the amber eyed were clinging on to the man's weak spots . The man had planned to tear off Abhay's neck first , this was what the others had expected and were counting on it , and now the man was held tight by all three . The man wanted to be the hunter , but now he was being hunted by the teenagers . The red eyed man let out a loud growl , gathering all of his strength he threw the three away , turned around and disappeared into the darkness . All three walked to the point where they were trying to hold the man , they knew
he had escaped and they can't get to him -- not now . Abhay was equal in height with the other boy , pale skinned , black haired , gray eyes stud with a decent body . The blond started to tell something , Abhay interrupted and told - " Drish not here , its not save . Let's reach home . Rhone Come ! " . Abhay pulled the other boy and they left . If the amber eyed Rhone was hansom , Abhay was his GOD !

                Piya woke up suddenly sweating , she felt like she had run a 100 miles in a minute . She tried to calm down and lie but couldn't make it . She knew it was almost morning , in an hour or about she had to wake up and prepare herself for the first day of college , so she pulled out her diary and started writing -

Dear Moony,
                              I had a very uncomfortable night . I'm sure i had a nightmare but i can't remember the dream now , everything just goes blank when i try to remember it . Anyway today is my 1st day in college lets see what happens...!


                She got out of her bed , stretched herself and started preparing for the day .



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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey...
is it bad... not a single post...
shall i stop????
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
me 1zt
nice update ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks a 100... no comments or posts ... i was thinking it is boring and was making mind for stopping...

what do you say?? is it ok?? shall i write more..??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
wow..ur character sketch is mindblowing...
I will comment later..i have to read this first...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Selinapiya

wow..ur character sketch is mindblowing...

I will comment later..i have to read this first...
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no worries... take your time...
later just tell me weather to continue or stop
its my first FF so i'm not sure if it ok or boring...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Wow...Awesome..continue..
So Rhone is handsome but Abhay is his God...
Great..
Thanks for the PM...