Gunahon Ka Devta

FF: New Beginnings? Updtd Chap 12 on pg 37

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Posted: 12 years ago
Heyyaa EveryoneπŸ€—πŸ€—

I know ...Its too late to start FFπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

But Let us keep the forum active and lively and make our bonds more stronger😳

Everyone enjoy reading it...😳

Edited by Priya😊

FF is dedicated to Everyone here...😳

So...Here is my story of Avita...
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Summary:  Will Arpitha fall for him and start believeing in love again or will  cruel past haunt her which may effect her future with him? is he is the only man in her life or there was someone else whom she locked her heart?After Avdhesh coming to know about her past will he accept her  whole heartedly and unlock her heart or is it End for his love or New Beginnings for them?



 
                                         
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Avdhesh Singh Thakur: Owner of leading mobile service providers- "Voice". He is handsome, Charming entrepreneur. He is a self made man. He is very professional when it comes to his work. He fun-loving, out going person. In his social circuit, he has an image of  a "playboy".He loves to make friends. Girls fall for him and throw themselves on him. He never cared or loved anyone until he meets Arpita.

Arpita Rai- Young, talented, beautiful girl and owner of leading mobile manufacturers ' "Xpress" . She is heir to her father's company. She is very practical. She used to be fun-loving but one incident changed course of her life. She deceided to never to fall in love. But destiny had other plans for her.

Beena Singh Thakur- Mother of Avdhesh. She wants Avdhesh to get married but Avdhesh is not interested. Avdhesh respects her a lot. She made Avdhesh what he is now .After Avdhesh's father's death, She is both father and mother to Avdhesh.

Mahesh Chandra Rai- Father of Arpita. He loves his daughter very much. He has made "Xpress" mobiles where is it now.  He was founder of the mobile company. He is always worries abt his daughter.

Manjari- Only friend of Arpita. She knows her past. She wants her friend to be happy and tries to forget her past but all in vain.

Simple- Childhood friend of Avdhesh. She loves him but Avdhesh doesn't.

Few characters wil be introduced as story unfolds.

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Chapters                                                  -                                                   Page No


Chapter 1                                                 -                                                 Page 4


Chapter 2                                                 -                                                 Page 8

Chapter 3                                                 -                                                 Page 13

Chapter 4                                                 -                                                 Page 17


Chapter 5                                                 -                                                 Page 21

Chapter 6                                                 -                                                 Page 24

Chapter 7                                                 -                                                 Page 26


Chapter 8                                                 -                                                 Page 28

Chapter 9                                                 -                                                 Page 31

Chapter 10                                               -                                                 Page 35

Chapter 11                                               -                                                 Page 35

Chapter 12                                               -                                                 Page 37
Edited by prash_t - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
 Heya Prashu di first congrates for ur new FF

 d characters r awesome di realy excited for

 it uv yaaa diπŸ€—n ol d best😊
Edited by jasveensokhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Heyyy GJ πŸ€— πŸ€—

 look who is editing post πŸ˜Ž

your story concept is very interesting and i am sure you will rock it πŸ˜Ž

Congo Shongo on your first FF πŸ‘ β­οΈ πŸ‘


your gift my GJ πŸ˜‰


Update Soon and also don't delay like me πŸ˜‘


love you πŸ€—

PS don't think i am kanjoos for giving you two gulab jumun only because i don't want you to doctor for your rotten teeth πŸ€£ πŸ€£

Edited by yoga23priya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Ok i m the first one to unres the post πŸ˜‰

about the story line , very interesting
n cheractors huun u have done ur home work sweeheart πŸ˜‰
i m going to love this Avi for sure
n simple loves Avi but child hood friend hope she will b  positive after too,
will wait for ur update gve it soon😳
do i need to tell u about ur writingπŸ˜‰πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Edited by joliefille - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
*edited*

Sweetheart... πŸ€—

wonderful FF.. loved the intro..




ps- put in lots of steamy AviTa romance..

you know na.. I love them.. 😳

update soon..

Love you..

Edited by KriYa_life - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great start dii ,
interesting background
thanks for the pm
update next part soon
and dont forget to pm me
Edited by rubal223 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
its going to be awesome prashu...πŸ‘
continue it...
am already missin GKD !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i wud read later bit busy in mornings

though i alwys get confused with ffs and characters u know that na haha
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Posted: 12 years ago


                   yipeee...prashu...
most awaited FF.congrtas once again prashu
i just love intro
and i m 1000% sure..
i m going to love all the upcoming parts
so miss prashu
i m ready to drool over u r ff
update soon dear😳😳







                                                     

                      

                              



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