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joliefille

@joliefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

wowowowowowowow

just superb yaar ,

u r great Priya was correct i m going to love this one😉

huun Arpi's past seems very dark but Avi's entry shaked it up as we can see😆

huun first meet me hi eye lock wow , n Avi's frnkness was great i can smell it he is a darling yaar, how can Arpi shout at him ? 😕 theek se dekha nahi lagta hai😆

sorry yaar i can't be res for much better comments as i don't trust my net so don't want to miss the chance to comment i know u deserve better gifts for such superb UD as ur FF's first UD but can't miss the chance to be the first one 😆

about ur writing 👏

u r a star gal ⭐️

UD soon m dying to read their first meet after this meet 👍🏼

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PrashT

@PrashT

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

i knw girls..Its small one..

Bt next time..

ill update bigger one😃

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Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Heyyy GJ 🤗

loved the first chapter 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏

Arpi past is very painful but interesting and make sure Avi will teach lesson to that guy also one 1.94 kg mukka from me 😎

Avi entry was as usual Awesome and u sent to la la land 😍

Update Soon 😛

love ya🤗

@ jo

i am always right 🤣

PS make sure u add alots romance 😳

Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago

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Sidda

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Prashu, this update was top notch. I loved every aspect of it from Apri's professionalism, Manjari's chirpiness, and Avi dazzling entry. I felt like watching some American show or reading some English novel about two people who just don't click but end up together. Wow, Avi was awed by Arpi's beauty, he seems like a chilling/ partying kind of guy, the total opposite of Arpi. Their business meeting will be interesting. I am wondering about Arpi's past, is it another guy or someone else. Please update soon. Oh this is for your first update plus an infinite amount of hugs and kisses.

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Sweetheart... oh my my.. Im just loving the FF. So that guy is AST *Pls dnt give Jhatka like Toofaan* Poor Arpi tries to keep herself busy in work.. Feelin Sad for her.. Update soon dear..

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ozzyie

@ozzyie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Superb Prashu !!!!!

just wonderfu !!!!!!!

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sharan

@danno

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

oh meri prashu dear
oh meri dear dear
tune kitne achha likha
dilmera dhakk dhak bole
deewana liye jaye haskole

really just love it update soon dear😛

Edited by danno - 14 years ago

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Cuty16

@Cuty16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Hye prashu,
awesome part and u blushed just by name of AST wooo...

No doubt that person who collided to arpi will be our hotty AST.
Arpi don't know na the person who she is an idiot is the person she going to work wid,
it will be intresting to see there next meet after this.

Arpi's past seems to be quite sad but now Mr thakur ki entry ho gai hai then she is going forget everything.

Waise in your ff arpi is in a complete new avtar which i liked alot.

Once again dear goody-goody part will wait for the next part.

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Prashu my darling...

That was way awsome...

A female version of Maan Singh Khuranna (the one before marriage that is)...

I enjoyed it thoroughly...especially the last collision☺️

Continue soon hun

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Suhana6

@Suhana6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

OMG loved it prashu...Wow...Loved Arpitha in this new look...And am sure that the hunk Manjari is Talking about is Awdesh,,,,,,Missing him so Much... 👍🏼

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