Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 13

Ahhh AM IN TASHA HEAVEN...

Thanks very much friends for your feed back

@ mnx : soo pleased you enjoyed the update, mission achieved then!

@ eternity of luv: Dutta's words made you blush as well...yes he's a bit blint with his words kind of up front!!!!

@ivy: well the whole point of this update was to arouse the senses of the reader ,so thanks for calling it "sensational"

@ziks: loved your fabulous feed back, hain you read it 4x ! yaar I thought once was enough!! naug hty gal!! Yes he is very disciplined, has to be army man, apart from that remember his father sent him away from home at an early age to build resistance up in boarding schools . but underneath the surface, he's another story! You're right his sort is hard to find..especially faithfulness..xx

@kiran: you are a goner! I tell you lardki Iam glad I did'nt put this up when your exams were in progress ,other wise tu to full of lust he ho jati, instead of studying!!! I luuuved your feed back, mujhe bhi tu maaza anna chahiye ,teray comments read kar kay. Sooo you were getting breathless were you ? et your heart checked woman ! as Dutta would say. You see kiran dutta and nakku in the FF are not married ,I doubt it he'll have the nerve to plant one on her lips yet... atleast haat tu pakar liya hai... kiss tu door ki baat hai...haaa.. chal dekhtay hain kya hota hai! loved your droll at the end naughty! Shaughty! xx

@ nakusha: Aye Nakku! thanks for your comment, chaal teekh hai you liked the tasha scenes ,there will be more xx

@krishaa: thanks for your positive feedback pm and forum comment,yes that's why I updated fast because people were ,including myself of this digu nakku nonsense... soo you liked the lovey dovey bits ood ,lookin forward to your updating your FF..well done Iam enjoying thatxxx

@ norey: thanks for reading and commenting yes Major Dutta is based on Dutta/Mishal from LTL1 xx

@ mishez: bas itna choota sa comment , tu theekh tu hai? mera chaska kahaan hai huunnney!? Ju tera jawab me milta hai... xxx

@ prncz : kya?? You've fallen for with him!!! Haven't we alll! Soo you liked the lunch, lift and change scenes... the changing into shorts had to be thought of as a requirement rather than only more bonding and dependency of Dutta on Nakku,plus I tried not to be vulgar and common place.. rember shaadi nahi hoi hai ,engagement bhi nahi.. so ..haad mein raheen gay dono! xxx

@ shilpita@ thanks guru jee ,so you got inundated with work ,should have left the blasted update read it at your leisure ...but still thanks for reading and enjoying bits ,does matter to me.xxx

@ suhana: sonu monu loved your feed back ..bata mujhe is your pm working now? Lageta tu nahin you have not opened the pm about update ... haan yes song jaise halat hai sudhu ..gadha kahin ka!! Bolay ga kuch arsa ki baad, waise apas ki baat he's not doing too badly, lardki hai he aisi phanus tu kya hai beechara I mean have a heart yaar he's been literally exposed in front of her..tu baki kya izzat bachi Dutaaa ki... awwwh. Any way that song is it a Ghulam Ali song? Kis film ka hai... xxx

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

Thanks very much friends for your feed back

@ mishez: bas itna choota sa comment , tu theekh tu hai? mera chaska kahaan hai huunnney!? Ju tera jawab me milta hai... xxx

hahah bbe dw im bikul fine...was jus realy happy afta readin it n das all i cud ride..plus it was late at night..but wil cum bak...now dat am hosh mein😉😆

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

@kiran: you are a goner! I tell you lardki Iam glad I did'nt put this up when your exams were in progress ,other wise tu to full of lust he ho jati, instead of studying!!! I luuuved your feed back, mujhe bhi tu maaza anna chahiye ,teray comments read kar kay. Sooo you were getting breathless were you ? et your heart checked woman ! as Dutta would say. You see kiran dutta and nakku in the FF are not married ,I doubt it he'll have the nerve to plant one on her lips yet... atleast haat tu pakar liya hai... kiss tu door ki baat hai...haaa.. chal dekhtay hain kya hota hai! loved your droll at the end naughty! Shaughty! xx

Originally posted by: kiran255

@Bold how can i thank u for that !

i am deeply thankful to u for not putting that up warna

i would be breathless with anxiety and would be clueless abt my paper :P

@red ye jo line hai na ise line say im scared !

kya ho ga and u know ur rghtu cant expect kiss from Dutta but darling when u started the FF , even hath pakarna was impossible :P

and wo lift wal;ay scene kay baad tu :0

u know na kuch bhi ho sakta hai :P