Double update... n as always.... amazing... I would now love to see how Geet would ask Maan to end this false charade... I would love to see how Maan panics when he realises Geet intends to not just end their pretend relationship but also end any association with Maan and his family...I think a sort of vocal outburst between the two is needed, just so that both can atleast accept that they do have "that something" to build their relationship on ... what happened to the report that Maan had wanted on Geet's life?
I wud love to see maan and geet playing house with only JD around for say, a week , with no dadi no business associates etc... n strictly playing house... like how a normal couple wud behave given the nature maan has and how geet behaves normally with him.... I know you give that to us in bits n pieces but I want 1 update thats only full of Geet,Maan the tension of their attraction and the fact that Maan doesnt want to back out of this pretend relationship now....but then u have a scheme of things which you follow n probably my wishful thinking would make ur story take a diiferent turn or maybe slow things down... your Maan and Geet are soo different from the actual Maan and Geet who have been tackling grief and bad situation with only silence... I liked it that Maan voiced his concern that Sameera's loose talk had brought to his mind... I would like Geet to first ask Maan to end this relationship before she herself does something funny to end this facade...
Awesome writing... I know u have started another story and all the best to you for that.. I am hooked onto this story n I am almost stalking this forum to find an update from you... I wish you updated this story daily but then I know what we read in 15-20 mins takes u probably an hour or two to write sometimes even more... I understand you have a life outside this FF but we readers are greedy...just goes to show how well u write that readers are left to ask for more always!! :)
Hope to read another update tonight though I know you wont be able to...but thats my wishful thinking :)
Just incase you read my post: could you just like it so I know you read it? I understand you might not agree to half the things I expect in the story just cause u seem to have thought your plot n story quite extensively I feel.... all the very best for your future writings...
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