an mayur ss .part 3(P9) - Page 6

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ruchi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice update ragz...ab kya faida...

ab toh sath rahna parega..chahe jitna lado...😆

Loved it.

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574693

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Posted: 12 years ago

aww it was sweet update...

wht a plan they made for both of thm...

i msure it will work out...

cont soon dear...:)

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

AWWW RAGINI .
nice story .loving it
after long time seeing mayur fight .
loved it

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516247

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Posted: 12 years ago

very nice update.

awesome.

i hope mayur ll understand their feelings soon.

i hope, gang ki wish puri ho jaye...

mayur parts was so sweet ... loved it ... very well written...

but why they alwz fighting???

waiting for next update

continue soon

thanks for the pm.

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 12 years ago

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Pradnya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Ragini Nice FF

Liked the character sketch and introduction part

Both born on same date interesting, birthday to sath hi manate honge ladte ladte… lols

I loved both the parts, their fights in mind was hilarious 😆

It reminded me of MJHT days

Dadi ko manna padega, she knew mayur love each other and their ego problem

Jitna ladna hai ladlo rehna to sath hi hai

Continue soon

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ragini sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks everyone for liking my work ..i know i am a bad or worse writer ..but i am trying and with all of your support ..i think i improve myself ..so keep supporting me...

and sorry for not giving mayur ..but from next part there are mayur only...

thanks everyone who liked my work...
Edited by raginisharma - 12 years ago

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ragini sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

part 3

mayank lines in blue ,nupurs one in red and mine in purple..

update...

all family mem are sitting together and taking dinner gunjan and diya are either side of nupur and samrat and benji are beside mayank...

tum log kaha the mai akele apne room mai baithi thi.
Di: wo hum log kuch discuss kar ahe the at same moment suhanni pressed diyas foot ...and oouch...a word from diya mouth...
SB: kya hua dia aise ki chikhi..
Di:wo uncle ..wo uncle ..haan maine na apni ungli hi kaat li dinner kartw waqt apne dato se...

at this moment everyone start smiling and diya got embers and got a galre from nupur

dia tu kabse Uday wale harkate karne lagi.
di:ab hogaya to kya karun and give angry glares to suhanni ...while on other side of dinning table.
aaj tum log subah se kaha gayab ho mujhe akela chod kar ...
but yaha to hamre samrat hai na..
sa: are mayank mai or chasmish bhar thoda walk par gaye the .adhiraj-suhanni ke sath busy tha and benji diya ke sath or uday apne burgerss ke sath or kya...
pheww..
after dinner all are proceeding towards their rooms ..but at very moment..
Sb:are bacho tum log kaha chale hume tum logo se jarrori baat karni hai...
dekho hum logo ne tum logo ki kundaliya dikhai pandit ji ko ...or unhone is mahine ki 14 feb tay ki hai ...
gu:but uncle itni jaldi sab kuch kaise hoga and most important us din to indone ka birthday bhi hai na...
SS:are to in dono ka birthday hum log pichle 19 saalo se manate aaye hain or is baar nahi hoga to kya hua ...
Sb:acha ab aap log gaiye aaram kijiye kal se bahut kaam hai ...

all mem proceed towards there respective rooms...
sam tu kaha ja raha hai hum logo ka room to is taraf hai..
Sa:maynk mera kuch kaam adhura reh gaya hai wahi pura karne jaa raha hun...
kaisa dost hai dost itni musibat mai hai or tu use chod kar jaa raha hai...
Sa:are mai kaha tujhe chod raha hun kuch der mai aa rha hun jarrori kaam hai...
saying this samrat move towrds gunjan and suhanni room where all other mem are present...
Gu:kaha the tum samrat nupur se aadha ghanta ka time lekar aai hun mai kahi use sak na ho jaye hum log kya kar rahe hain...
Sa:are gunjan mayank mujhse puchne laga tha kaha jaa raha hun ...so hume finaly apna plan final karna hoga ..or gunjan tumhara point hum kabhi baad mai sunenge...
di:so kya final hua..
Sa:dekho undono mai ek cheez common hai unka ghussa ..wo chahe kitna bhi lade but kabhi ek dusre se alg nahi rahe ..to ..
Di:so samrat started grining
gu: samrat koi or idea socho ye bakwas idea hai ...undono ki sadi ho rahi or sadi ke baad alag rakhna immpossible...
Sa: meri bholi chacmish tumhe kya lagta hai mai unhe alag kar dunga ...nahi kabhi nahi ...wo dono mere dost hai or mai apne dosto ki khushi ke liye ksi bhi had tak jaa sakta hun...
Di:we all know you samrat but gunjan ka kehna bhi sahi hai sadi ke baad kuch der ke liye bhi unhe alag karna thik nahi hai or unhe alag karne mai bahut risk hai...kahi usi mein apni khushi na dhoond le dono..
Sa:aisa kuch nahi hoga...thik hai abhi ke liye is plan ki gajh koi dusra plan banate hain ...next time ke liye ye plan chod dete hain...abhi ke liye unhe is sadhi mai kaise enjoy karna hai .is par sochna hai...
gu:matlab
Sa:are madam 1 hafte baad dono ki saadi hai ..or wo dono ..agar isi mood mai rahe na ..to nani ko acha nahi lagega ...so unhe khush karna hai ...or maine to soch lya hai ...mayank ko kaise khush karna hai ...or tum log nupur ke liye bhi plan sun lo ...but koi suitable time choose karna apna plan execute karne ke liye...

and then samrat tells there plans to others how to make mayur happy ...regarding their own marriage...

AT NIGHT IN mayanks room all boys are sleeping in one room itna bada ghar hone ke bawjood bhi (boys are always boys)

maynk aaj saam shopping chalna hai tyar ho jao...
nupur mai abhi abhi office se aaya hun bahut thak gaya hun...kal chale in a pleading tone ...
tum office main aisa kaun sa kaam karte ho ki thak jate ho...kahi tumhara kisi ke sath chakar to nahi chal raha na...in a jhasi ki rani style...
nahi aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...darte hue...
chalo ab ..
both went to shopping and come back home where nupur full with enjoyment maynk is totally exhausted ...
nupur please tv band karo na...mujhe kal subah office jana hai...

chupchap se aakhe band kar ke so jao...she is watching horror movie...

in night he sees a shadow jiske hatho mai bada sa chura tha or wo mayank ki taraf badh raha tha...

nupur tum ye kya kar rahi ho dekho mai tumhara pati hun..mai mayank hun..
haan janti hun...tu mayank hai bachpan se aaj tak mera khun chusta aaya hai.mai kahun shopping challo to tumhe thakawat ho jati hai ...mai kahun picnic chalo to tumhe kaam yad aa jata hai ...aaj tumhe mai markar apni sare dhukho ka ant kar dungi..

nupur dekho aajse tum jo kahogi mai wo karunga ..tumhe hafte mai..nahi roj shopping le jaunga ...har weekend picnic par jayenge ..tumhe aaj se koi kaam nahi karna padega but please mujhe chod do ...

nahi thakur ab ye nahi ho sakta ...ek baar maine jo than liya to than liya...
or chaku chala deti hai ...

nahiii

mayank chilane lagta hai sam jag jata hai ...
sa: maynk kya hua tujhe koi sapna dekha kya ...

mayank ko hosh aata hai or wo ye janta hai ki wo ek dream dekh raha tha...

kuch nahi sam wo bus aise hi ...in hesitating tone(oh god sadi se pehle mera ye haal hai ..to sadi ke baad kya hoga )...

Sa:waise maynak tu is sadi main kitna excited hai nupur to bahut khus lag rahi hai...
mayank got shocked after these words..

nupur khush hai is sadhi se ...(wo jhasi ki rani is sadhi se khush hai..)
maynk soch mai pad jata hai...
Sa:or nahi to kya usne dadi se wada jo kiya hai...
at this moment maynk realise ..he is agreed for marriage for dadi sake and if she sees them unhappy to unhe bahut bura lagega ...
tu sahi keh raha hai samrat mai bhi kun ..matam manau ..akhir meri sadi hai or mai pura enjoy karuga ...and give a high fighe to sam..
so aaplog to plan samjh hi gai honge sam ne sahi samy dekh kar apna hathiyar chalaya)at same time in another room gunjan and nupur sleeping ...but nupur has frowend in her face...

nupur ye kya hai chai main chini kitni jyada hai...tum koi bhi kaam thik se nahi kar sakti kya ...
mayank galti hogai maaf kar do..
galti hogai ..and pur hot tea on nupur's hand in night ...

maynk ye tum kya kar rahe ho ...
kya kar raha hun janeman apni patni se pyar kar raha hun...and grabed nupur by waste harshly and start proceding towards nupur's lips ...
please mayank mujhe bhagwan ke liye chod do...
agar mai tumhe bhagwan ke liye chod dunga to apne liye kya rakhunga...
and captured her lips...
nahiii(same style😉) tuh thu thu...

Gu:are nupur kya hua tujhe kuch muh main chala gaya kya ...

are nahi ...haan lagta hai kuch tha(by god is bandar ke to mujhe abhi se nightmares aane lage sadi ke baad kya hoga )

gu:are nupur we all are so excited or ye meri dost ki sadi hai mai to khub enjoy karungi...or mayank ko dekha kitna khush lag raha tha...
mayank is sadhi se khush lag raha tha ...bahut agib baat hai pagal ho gaya hai lagta hai...
gunjan seems nupur in deep thought or usne mauke par chouka marne ki sochi...
gu: mayank bahut excited lag raha tha na aakhir usne dadi ko promise jo kiya hai..
at this moment nupur realise ..she is agreed for marriage for dadi sake and if she sees them unhappy to unhe bahut bura lagega ...
tu sahi keh rahi hai gunjan mai apni sadi ko enjoy karungi...aakhir sadi ek baar hoti hai ..baar baar nahi...or logo ko bhi to pata chale nupur bhushan ki sadi hai...

and two friends hugged each other and two person slept in one hand mayank and in other hand nupur both unaware of future ...

so har raat ki subah hoti hai or is raat ki bhi hui ...

all of them sitting in drawing hall...

ss:mayu ye le tum logo ka marriege invitation card ...she give two cards to mayank and nupur ..wich snatched by gang...

..please ignore my mistakes...

Edited by raginisharma - 12 years ago

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Pradnya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Rags jaldi update kar

Res

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--WHATEVER--

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Posted: 12 years ago

beautiful update Ragini 😳

cont soon 😃

Edited by AnjaliARTI - 12 years ago

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606580

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow nice update. pm nehi kiya mujhe?

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