an mayur ss .part 3(P9) - Page 4

Posted: 12 years ago
nice.. part..
loved.. their fight...
Posted: 12 years ago
hey Ragini very nice concept and 1 part was really nice πŸ˜ƒ
MayUr are really cute  πŸ˜³
and i am happy that you will write like MayUr will fall in love by their own realisation πŸ˜³
without anyone help πŸ˜Š
waiting for next part πŸ˜Š
update soon 
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by 18anila1


Awesome start DI...
very cute part...
i loved it lodsss...
loved d way MayUr was fighting in der mind...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
it was very cute...
awww...
Nupur ne Mayank ko apne 1st love se durr kar diya...
ab woh apne first love aka library ke bina kese rahe ga...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
feeling bad for der nani...
bt m glad dat now dey r gonna get married...
will b eagerly waiting for d next parts...
loved it lodsss...
love u DI...πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—


thanx anila ..will update tomorrow hopefully otherwise day after tomorrow fix..
Posted: 12 years ago
Mayank and nupur k liye mein to  bas... kehna chahungi...


Mayank nupur ko  aise hi describe karta hoga

aur nupur bhi mayank ko usi k andaaz mein   aise jawaab deto hogi...


Main Akela Raat Ka Melaa, Tu Kahaan Se Aai
aise Mein Tu Bhhul Ke Rasta Mujh Se A Takaraai

ye Ladaki Zara Si Deevaani Lagati Hai
mujhe To Ye Gudiya Japaani Lagati Hai

chaabhi Se Ye Chale, Chaabhi Se Ye Ruke
chaabhi Se Ye Hanse Rooth Jaaye
aisi Naazuk Hai Ye, Galati Se Ise
koi Chhule To Ye Toot Jaaye
kaanch Ki Hai Gudiya
aafat Ki Hai Pudiya
kisi Shaitaan Ki Naani Lagati Hai
ye Ladaki Zara Si ...

ham Akela Raat Ka Melaa, Tu Kahaan Se Aaya
aise Mein Tu Bhool Ke Rastaa, Ham Se A Takaraaya

aate Jaate Hue Raste Pe Khade
bade Dekhe Aise Deevaane
aisa Kyaa!
jahaan Pe Bhi Koi Achchhi Soorat Akhi
vaheen Ruke Kisi Bahaane
aise Heero Ban Ke Ga Raha Hai Koi
kisi Naye Film Ka Gaana Lagata Hai
ye Ladaka Zara Sa Deevaana Lagata Hai
gaadi Ka Koi Mcdal Puraana Lagata Hai
ye Ladaka Zara Sa ...



Posted: 12 years ago
Ragini ... nice start.

i love mayur fighting ... that was hilarious specially nupurs reaction ... mera bachpan ka pyar ko jala dia ... mera raj ko jala dia ... ROFL ... ye reaction sirf nupur ka hi ho sakta hai ...

waitin for next update

continue soon

thanks for the pm.
Posted: 12 years ago
u updated after long
first part was really nice
do continue soon😊
Posted: 12 years ago

note

aap log bhi soch rahe honge ek to pure one year ke baad update kiya uske baad bhi regular nahi hai update dene main...



but main kya karun guys meri problem kam hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi...mere lapi ka hard disk ud gaya ...or sarre 230 gb data chale gaye...so please pardon me this time surley give updates when mera lapi thik ho jaye ...ya phir mujhe koi altrnative mil jaye...



Edited by raginisharma - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Take ur time.
We can wait.
Posted: 12 years ago
that's so bad...

take your time..
i understand jab aisa hota hai..
to kitni problem face karni padti hai
Posted: 12 years ago
ok  no problem 😊
but whenever your problem solve update regularly for compansating πŸ˜†
waiting for next part 😳

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