Untitled FF - MayUr - Part 6 Pg.34 (16.07) Updated - Page 4

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Edited by .SilentPrincess - 12 years ago

Edited by .SilentPrincess - 12 years ago

 

She looked around the room, it was a simple room. White curtains waving with the wind, white carpets on the wooden floor, white paint everything was white. It all looked so serene so peaceful you could just sit in the room and get lost. The peaceful environment can make anyone relax' Nupur leaned back again and closed her eyes for a second, and her thought automatically finding their way back to the past'

 

Hum kahan jha rahein hai?

Tum chalo toh sahi, rukh kyn gayi...? Chalo na he said while holding her hand and continued walking...

Lekin batao na, hum jha kaha rahe hain? Asked a curious Nupur

He stopped and suddenly turned around, it was all so sudden that she banged on his chest. Her long hair came in front of her face, she didn't remove them just slightly moved a bit away from his chest'

He stretched his hand forward and putted her hairs behind her ear. She looked up and he smiled she returned the sweet smile, the smile and twinkle in her eyes made him get lost in her eyes, those big brown, dove shaped eyes.. Uff why did she look so gorgeous ' Unconsciously he inched forward, still stroking her face he leaned even closer, he was just about to capture her lips when the sudden thunder broke the enchanting moment. He moved a bit and she started blushing by the thought of what could have happened. He continued staring at her, her head slightly (bowed) she looked so cute with the red color on her cheeks. She looked up and he looked away, controlling his emotions he took hold of her hand continued walking faster this time'

They reached a small pavilion.

 

Nupur POV

I walking with him, where we were going I had no idea. But I was just happy being with him, hand in hand. After a lot of walking and long silence lots of question but no answers we reached this pavilion. It was a small one, but still decorated beautifully with red lights, rose petals all over the place. Candles wherever the eye could see, it was beautiful. I looked towards him with tears forming in my eyes, a content smile and he was standing there a bit away smiling at my shocked expression' I didn't take a second before I ran into his arm' His arms' what to say where no less than heaven, it all looked like far away dreams come true' I didn't want to let go of him, in case all this was just a dream, but then I slowly cam out of his soft grip'We looked at each other in the eyes before we both in chorus said'

 

I love you'

 

I smile and shyly looked down, he forwarded hi hand and asked for mine I gave it to him with out any hesitation and he led me to the center of the pavilion. I looked at him and pointed with my eyes that there were no music. He simply smiled and something t made me curious and he was obviously enjoying my changing expressions from time to time' Suddenly a soft tune started playing, he took my hands and put them on his shoulders and he softly put his hand around my waist, and then tightening the grip around me' A beautiful song started playing and we swayed along' it was like the lyrics were mean to us and he was conveying them through his eyes, those hazel brown eyes which were drowned in mine'

 

We swayed a long and the lyrics started' he looked me in the eyes and sang with'

 

***Man*** 

Subha hogi, shaam hogi

Subha hogi, shaam hogi

Din guzarte jaayenge, jaayenge, jaayenge

Hum tumhaare pyaar mein youn jeete marte jaayenge

Hum tumhare pyaar mein youn jeete marte jayenge

 

I continued

 

***Nupur***

Subha hogi, shaam hogi

Subha hogi, shaam hogi

Din guzarte jaayenge, jaayenge, jaayenge

Hum tumhaare pyaar mein youn jeete marte jaayenge

Hum tumhare pyaar mein youn jeete marte jayenge

 

He held my hand tightly and said

***Man***

Ho, jab se tumse mohabbat huwi

Zindagi khubsoorat huwi

 

I freed my hand and ran away to the corner of the pavilion it starred raining heavenly I spread my arms out and I could feel the rain slightly tickle on my arm, I closed my eyes and I could feel his breath on my neck. I kept my eyes closed, taking in the feel of the rain and him'.

 

***Nupur***

Pathjharo mein kali khil khil gayi

Tum mile har khushi mil gayi

 

He continued singing slowly in my ear...

***Man***

Aankhon mein sapna hai

Sapnon mein apna hai

I turned around... he took me to the center, and twirled me i lost my balance due to my heels and the wet floor. Before I could react anymore I was in his arms'.lost in his eyes'

***Nupur***

Dilbar ki baahon mein

Dilkash panahon mein

Hum savarte jaayenge, jaayenge, jaayenge

Hum tumhaare pyaar mein youn jeete marte jaayenge

 

I stood up and looked own shyly... He cupped my face and brought it closer to his.

 

***Man***

Hum tumhaare pyaar mein youn jeete marte jaayenge

***Nupur***

Subha hogi

***Man***

Shaam hogi

Our faces were just an inch away' and he inched closer' when'.

 

When a knock at the door brought me back from my thoughts.. I looked around the room trying to fathom where I was'I was all alone was the only thought that came'

I stood up and went to open the door, just to see a beautiful red anarkali with silver embroidery lying there wit h matching silver bangles and a box of sindoor. I took it up, and looked down the staircase where he was standing, with a sweet smile playing on his lips' I looked towards the anarkali in my hands and then towards him, I also smiled back a very sweet smile. Before I threw it on him, the bangles broke, the sindoor ruined the cloths and I walked away. He stood there, hurt by her actions. He bent down and picked up the cloths looked towards the place where she was standing few seconds ago. With a hurt look he also went his way'

 

Yeh Dooriyan,

In Rahon ki Dooriyan,

Nigahon ki Dooriyan

Hum Raho ki Dooriyan

Fanaa ho sab Dooriyan

Yeh Dooriyan' yeh Dooriyan'

             Yeh Dooriyan' yeh Dooriyan'

                         Yeh Dooriyan' yeh Dooriyan'

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Edited by .SilentPrincess - 12 years ago

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OMG! so much confusion!, but the update was lovely. i loved the song!,

now u have made me curious about the mystery, i think it is mayank, afterall he was about to kiss her 😳

cont. soon! 🤗
Edited by -Mehak - 13 years ago