FF... sun's gonna rise[mg]last chapter pg 14 31/01 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Nice...the way you show Geet's distress...and Maan's as well...umm...I have a suggestion for you...hope you dont mind....sometimes its confusing to make out whos speaking what....can you color code the dialogues or write it in a more clearer way...?????😃

i'll surely keep this in mind.... n no problem at all....

wow loved the update

hey your ff is awesome.....
do add me to ur pm list.......👏

finally geet spoke her heart out...
hope everything gets solved soon
how is meera related to geet?
well it was a very nice update as usual..very well written
do continue soon
thanks 4 pm..!

think Dev blackmail Geet so got married  let what yu got for us amazing pls update soonnnnnn thanks pm

Edited by simi80 - 13 years ago

nice part muskaan....

that was awesome... now finally geet told him..

but i hope the precap is not maan asking dev that cause what dev needs is one hard punch on his stupid face
please update soon

wat made geet to marry dev and finally she confessed still she love him

loved it .......................awesome

just caught up with the FF....its lovely...you write so well...the emotions of maan and geet are depicted very well.............